Comments on twisted.illusion's Journal

Alright there it is. I got it up nice and quick! be proud! i hope you guys enjoy it and let me know what you think. like i've said pretty much every single journl i want you to comment and let me know what you think. I can't improve if you don't critisize! I will say now though that the next one is going to take longer. I've decided to make it a little bit different then the rest. I'm not going to do many like the way i'm thinking of doing this next one, but i thoguht it was about time i gave it a go. So i'm just warning you, it's going to take me a while to get it up, but i think ou'll like it better... anyway, back to part 13, as that is what this journal is called ^.^ Not much exciting happened, i know, but that's the way stories work. You have to have contrasts, otherwise it all seems the same and the exciting parts aren't as exciting. If it helps any, i promise the next part will be more personal with you and the boys along with a little bit of action. Prepare yourselves for something different next time and, for crying out loud, leave a comment! *cough* sorry, had to get that out of my system...lol but on the more important side, i'm loosing readers and i want to know why. Instead of stopping reading why don't you let me know what it is that would keep you interested in the story? please? being a writer is being an entertainer and if i'm failing at entertaining you then i'm failing as a writer so let me know what i need to do to keep you entertained. tilll next we meet! ^.^