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April 5, 2008

Top 10 Things I Hate About Naruto Quizzes (5-1)

This is weird. I read this story, and it had a really good theme, description, etc., but what drew me away in the middle, was that this writer didn't have any puncuation marks, NONE. So the whole paragraph looks like one run on sentence.

Example: Bad

Hi Sakura-chan Naruto called out his eyes flickering to the pink-haired girl that was in team 7 Hey Naruto-kun she replied smiling.

^^Big run-on. O.O

Example: Good

"Hi, Sakura-chan!" Naruto called out, his eyes flickering to the pink-haired member that was in team 7. "Hey, Naruto-kun!" she replied, smiling.

4. Grammar/Spelling

Please, type out your words. I'm okay with OMG, but lol and brb, etc. does NOT make sense. And make your sentence make sense... xD

Example: Bad

"LOL!" Naruto lauhd. Tente aplauded as Ino cherred.

Example: Good

Naruto laughed as Tenten applauded and Ino cheered.

3. Roleplaying Like/Smileys

It's weird how many quizmakers tend to type in like a roleplaying way. Don't get me wrong, I do it too, a lot! -pokes Sasuke- (Because I can!) And smileys, I tend to put smileys on my writing also, but smileys, I think, are out of character.

Example: Bad

-walk down hallways- "Hi, Sasuke!" Naruto yelled. -Sasuke glares at Naruto- "Whatever, loser." xD

Example: Good

Naruto walked down the hallways. "Hi, Sasuke!" he yelled. Sasuke glared at the Kyuubi. "Whatever, loser." (xD)

2. Not.In.CHARACTER!

This is number 2, and I hate it the most. Why? Because it's annoying. I saw one story and Sasuke was like... preppy, and another I saw Sakura beating the crap out... Sasuke? O.O Does that seem odd to you? Sasuke is a bit, quiet, and uh... emo(DOH! they made me say it.) And Sakura in Shippuden still... likes Sasuke(I think. And yes, she tried to punch him, but Yamato stopped her.)

Example: BAAD!

Sasuke squealed in delight as his birthday was today. He nearly skipped to Naruto's house and knocked down the door. "It's my birthday!" he shouted happily, a smile spreading across his face. The blonde opened the door and glared at the Uchiha. "Whatever," he replied. "I don't care, loser." he continued. "B-But it's my birthday!" "Yeah, whatever," Sakura replied behind him. "You didn't get me anything?" he pouted. "Nope, I hate you, why should I get you anything?" she retorted.

Okay. 1. Sasuke doesn't squeal, or at least, I don't think he does. O.O
2. Sasuke doesn't 'skip.'
3. Why would Sasuke shout happily and smile?
4. Naruto is not emo(or will he be?) and he doesn't say 'loser', like Sasuke does in episodes.
5. Sakura would never say I hate you, to Sasuke, or has she?

Result: Sasuke was thrown in the closet with you. The door closed and he immediately kissed you.

Example: Good/Okay

Sasuke sighed as he realized it was his birthday. He decided to stay in so the fangirls wouldn't catch him and throw presents. Suddenly, a bang was knocked on the door. Sighing, the Uchiha opened it and saw the blonde and pink-haired girl member form team 7. "What do you want?" he muttered. "happy birthday!" they shouted in unison. "Whatever," he replied, slamming the door in their faces.

Okay, maybe I made Sasuke a little too harsh on this one. But yeah. xD

Result: Sasuke was thrown in the closet with you. You sighed as no one spoke for a few minutes, but finally, you spoke up. "Sasuke-kun, why are you always... quiet?" he didn't answer for a few moments, yet finally did. "I don't prefer loud places..." he answered, not fully answering your question.

^ I mean, having Sasuke falling in love is okay, but don't make him preppy. O.O Unless, it's a dare.... MUHAHAHA. Okay, too much random, but hey, I made Sasori fall in love, eh? xD

1. MINE!!!

Okay, this is #2, because I hate it... SOOO much. You know in quizzes and stuff, when they ask you who you like, etc. or your results when you take the truth/dares, etc.? At the end, or in OOC, you'll see Neji is MINE! or Sasuke is Jenna's! Or maybe, at the end of a 7 minutes in heaven, or spin the bottle, you see 'Suddenly, Raina burst into the room and killed you, then trotted away with Shikamaru.' Don't you just hate that? I mean... you... died, but same thing. I personally want to do it also, but I don't, for the sake of the quiz and story. I mean... come on...

Sasori is mine!

Example: Bad

Question: Who do you like in Naruto?
- Neji (Abby's)
- Shikamaru (Kenna's)
- Gaara (MINE!)
- Deidara
- Tobi (Reg's!!!)
- Itachi (Also MINE!)

Results: After Pein kissed you, a girl with short blonde hair, which seems to be Kin, my best friend, burst into the room. She had a gun and shot everything in sight except for her love, Pein. The leader of Akatsuki got up and smiled at her, then they left.

^ Uh... no comment. xD

Example: Good

Question: Who do you like in Naruto?
- Pein
- Sasori
- Hidan
- Kakuzu
- Naruto
- Kankuro

Results: Kisame and you came out of the closet, hand in hand. Many oohs and ahhs interrupted the crowd. You guys have been dating since.

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