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About Me

Hello, I am Kai. As interesting or “cool” as I may sound, I am just a teenager. I angst about stuff, I cry about stuff and I laugh about stuff. For me, life is just about living. I have tried to be like someone I am not. Turns out, being liked by everyone is far harder than not being liked at all. I have learned to live with all my flaws and I have found people that like me and every defect that comes with that package. So, if I have some quirk that you hate, it would be better for both you and I to stop wasting time with each other. But if you can look past my quirks, you might find something worthwhile.



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stories The Creation of Labels
Published in Stories on 07/02/2008
5.00
quizzes What is the Personality of your Smile?
Published in Quizzes on 06/12/2008
4.75
stories Tips for Naming a Character
Published in Stories on 06/06/2008
4.75
quizzes Which Color are You Associated With?
Published in Quizzes on 05/22/2008
4.75
polls Do you think Mutilation is just a fad?
Published in Polls on 05/20/2008
4.50

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August 8, 2008

Breaking Dawn By Stephanie Meyer

Hello, there. This is OpaquexSmiles. So, I'm just sort of venting. I recently finished reading Breaking Dawn by Stephanie Meyer. Feel free to disagree with me on this, but I think many people feel the same way. By the way, there are some spoilers in this. Do not read if you haven’t completed the book.

Breaking Dawn left a terribly terribly empty hole in my heart. I actually feel like crying. That's not how I expected it to end. To me if feels like, Mrs. Meyer made an exception for Bella and Edward. Hypothetically, Edward's sperm should have frozen because he is a vampire. So, it would be impossible to impregnate Bella. His sperm should have already been dead.


Because of that fact, the book seemed somewhat fake. But I suppose as the author they can make anything they want happen. To me, the ending was something a teenager would write. Just stuff to tie up loose ends and make sure everyone has a happy conclusion.

I’m not saying I could do better. But I just feel kind of empty right now. Empty, disappointed, disheartened. I haven’t felt this disappointed at the end of a book in years. Breaking Dawn gave me closure, but not the closure I needed to put down the book, lean back and say, “Amazing.”

Don’t get me wrong though, it did have a lot of very good scenes. It had a lot of hilarity to it and it showed a lot of mature things that we hadn’t seen in the series yet. Still, I feel like the ending ended all to happily. I am glad that none of the main characters died. But everything seemed to fall all to perfectly. There wasn’t any big ultimate fight scene. No one got their heart irreversibly broken. Everything just seemed to end the way we wanted it. And to that means, it was somewhat disappointing. The only major plot twister was the whole Bella getting pregnant and having a Halfling thing. Which, by the way, many other young writers (some peeps on FF.net) created something similar to the whole Halfling philosophy. (Woman getting pregnant by vamp.)

Anyway, that’s just about it. Of course, I still love Stephanie Meyer and all her books. And I give Breaking Dawn a five out of five. :D

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