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February 15, 2007

First Kiss short story

Her first kiss was something to remember. It started with a simple dare. "Dare ya" her best friend said, Iris, "I'm sure he'll say yes. just ask him, hes only across the room" she was still nervous, but she had always, watched the guy across the room, Thorn. He was quiet, and when he talked it was always sarcasim. "I don't know, what if he does say no?" she asked "don't worry, just go" Iris said pushing her forward. She walked forward and thought about how Thorn had intranced her. She got to him, and he looked toward her, there eyes met. "what is it?" Thorn asked "I-I wanted to ask if you wanted to g-go to the park with me tonight?" she asked. Thorn smiled. "I'd love too" he said. Thorn and her, were sitting on a rock, staring into eachothers eyes, they had just had the time of ther lives. "can I aske you something?" asked Thorn. "ask me" she said "will you be my girl?" he asked. she nodded and he leaned for a kiss, and she leaned back..... After that night, they were never seen again. some say that Thorn killed her, and others say that they ran wasy together, and the guy across McDonalds said they were taken by aliens. they say that only Iris, knows what happened, for she was the one who cane to the park to spy on her best friend's first date. she saw alright, but after that night, she would never talk, but the nght they were reported missing, and the police asked, all she said was "I'll take this secret to my grave, and you will never find out" It was known as the Rose's and Thorn's Disappearnce Hi, I asume you just read my short story, we were doing a Quick Write in english and I liked it, the point was to take five candy hearts and put the phrases in the story. see if you can find them ^.~ a few are easy but a few aren't. Love~ Twilights Lily

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