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Lament Chapter One

A fifteen year old is spiraling into depression, until he meets her. But she has a deadly secret no one knows. She's a vampire..

Created by sexyemoninjavampirepimp on Saturday, October 11, 2008

"Do I really have to move?", I complained.

"Your therapist said it'd be best for you if you had a fresh start somewhere else," explained his mother, Lynn.

Shane hated his therapist. He always wanted to knnow every little detail of his life. Shane was sure he just said that to get him out of his life.

"Plus, I know you'll just love Custer. It's always so green. It's really a beautiful place," Lynn assured him.

How does anyone expect me to adjust to a town barely the size of his high school?, Shane thought.

"I know you'll be able to adjust to Custer easily," his mom said.

"Really?" he asked.

His mom ignored his question as she drove him to the airport. Shane as going to board a plane from Orlando to Rapid City, only to stop in Denver for a flight exchage.
His aunt would be waiting for him at the airport to drive him to Custer, where he would stay with his aunt.

He finally arrived to his new home, and that's when he got the sight of her. She was beautiful, in ways that didn't seem human.

"Who is that?" he asked.

"Oh, that's the Foster's girl, Adrian," his aunt answered him.

"How old is she?", Shane asked.

"She's 16," his aunt Sarah answered.

She's beautiful..., he thought to himself.

End of the chapter. Kind of a sucky first chapter but the next ones will be better if I get enough comments that say it's good. Lol. So please tell me whether you honestly would like to see more chapters. Thanks :]



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