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Find The Emptyness (Part 1)

Yes this came to my mind while almost falling asleep in my class i thought it was very cute :D

Created by CubbyCat on Tuesday, September 02, 2008

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It was a dreadful day dark and it seemed endless.The smell of death and brim stone filled the air causeing deep darkness.Only the glow of fire eatting the buildings was seen for miles that was once a beautiful and graceful town.Crys of sarrow and screams for help rang in the surfivers ears like a bell that will haught them forever.Bombs of beautiful art work blew up in the sky showing no mercy.Bomb,after bomb drowning the city to dust.
My heart broke as i saw the bodies of my family lieing in crisps,in the ashes of the burnt down house."MOM DAD!!!!"I screamed tears filling my eyes having me slightly blinded."Why?How could this happen!"My looked in the sky to see a flying clay bird circling the city."It cant be."I whispered."It cant be him.He cant be doing this!"I Ran away trying to get to a high point.Bodies and ash dust filled the city with a heart destorying eniverment."He cant be doing this.No he would never!"I kept telling myself keeping a inch of hope.I could hear loud crunching over my feet with every step.I reached the monutains that gazed over the city."He would never do this to the people,and to me!"I chined to myself.A blond figure was more visable the more i walked.It was a small forseted area on this place and animals infested it so it would not be uncommen if i heard sticks breaking.My orange hair blew into my face attacting my left tears to the strands.I heard mutipul leafs crunching and sticks breaking around me probly from fleeing animals that smell or see the fires.I walked to the edge and looked to see the blond artist with a huge grin bombing the city and loving it."Deidara!"I yelled happy and yet very sad.He gazed over a little worried,but that all changed when he looked at me crying and calling his name."Mina?Un"He questioned stoping the bombing for a minute."Deidara how could you do this to me and everyone!"I screamed holding my locke,hold a very important picture."It is not what you think!"He yelled trying to shade his happiness."Then why are you enjoying yourself i thought you loved it here."I whispered."And me""Thats the thing you are wrong about i never loved this city it was hell that kept repeating every single day for 15 years"He grumbled and made a new bomb."Then why the heck did you not leave sooner,Then having me worry for years?!?""Get out of here they will find you and kill you"He trying calming me down."No i will not leave till i have you back and who is they?"I snapped.I heard snaping again."They are keeping an eye on me LEAVE NOW"He snaped and dropped another bomb on his old house."I dont care just stop!There is way to much damage already just stop!"I cried with mixed emostions."Deidara Who is this?"A Dark and twisted voice snaped from behind a tree."Crap"He mummbled."Deidara who is that?"I questioned starting to walk to it."No Mina dont go near that!"Deidara yelled and jumped to the cliff.Dark men came out behind the trees looking pissed but one hand a orange mask on so i have no idea what his emotions are."Deidara-Sempi!!!!!!!!!!"The orange mask joyfully yelled and charged for the blond."Damn it Tobi not now.Un"Deidara cursed."Um Deidara who are they?""People you should never forget"A giant fish exclaimed."Shut it tuna i am not talking to you"I snaped."Mina leave now"Deidara snaped.
My mind was clear on who they were.The village has been hearing alot of gossip of a dark group Comeing into town but i thought it was a myth."Deidara Your task is almost ending finish NOW"I dark coulded man Snaped at the Blond.I Felt a cold,cold blade gently touching my neck.I Froze and looked up to see a silvered haired man.I Did hand 5 hand signs "Transformation"I whispered lowly.A big poof of smoke covered me."Damn It What The F*Ck"The silvered haired man exclaimed.I came out a tiny wolf."Deidara"They all grumbled."Fine"He jumped back on his bird and started to create a huge bomb.I jumped into one of the trees a little far back from the fiends.They surrounded him.

I shot up.I felt my head,Soaking wet."Damn why cant that get out of my head?""Huh Mina Whats wrong?"My love said next to me waking up."Dream"I said plainly."Aw!You okay now your big wolf is next to you"Kiba smiled evilly and sweetly."I know how lucky am i!"I know that i have a good life here in Konaha now but I have a empty spot in my heart that even Kiba can not fill it.I sank my head into his neck.He had a very pulling aroma that my spirt side loved so this realasion ship could not be helped.(Nini:Mina what is wrong?)Nothing(Nini:You can not lie to me i know something is not nothing)Well i feel i void in my heart(Nini:Well you have to find out what it is even if everyone else knows ^^)You are a great help you know that(Nini:You know you love me)"Mina You did you say something?""Nah talking to my self and it needs to stop bothering me""Why arnt you the strange one."He smiled lightly."Who do i smell something burning?""Thats my mom cooking and another reason why i only eat cereal."Kiba laughed at this supose to be joke."Hehe yeah but she cant be that bad of a cook!"Just then his mom bursted in holding a plated filled with um CRISPY STUFF."KIBA I THOUGHT YOU WOULD LIKE BREAKFAST IN BED............who is this?"His mom questioned."Um i am going to go......."I whispered and got up still fully dressed.

"You were fully dressed?"

"Yeah wernt you?"

"Um......yeah!"He pulled the blankets higher up.

"Awkward"His mom laughed.

"Later"

I opened the window to be blinded by the mornings raze.I jumped out filling the morning wind flow threw my now black hair.I had to die it to try to keep the Memerys but it did not work.(Nini:Mina someone is following you)I looked around me but it was empty only with people walking to work on the ground but i am jumping on the roof tops."I dont see anyone"(Nini:He is there)So it is a male(Nini:Yes and very powerful watch out)Alright.I began to keep up the pace running faster with every roof.I stopped on a purple roof."I'm home but how to get in?"(Nin"DONT SAY THAT ALOUD HE IS STILL FOLLOWING YOU!!!!!!)God you are loud,Fine.I jumped into the ally on the side on my house."Someones house!I must see what is inside!"I tried to trick the fiend.(Nini:Wow you really think that will trick him)Yeah why wouldnt it(Nini:Maybe because it is plainly obvious.)Psh only to you because you can read my thoughts!(Nini:-.- Just keep on what you are doing.)"LOOK A KEY IN MY POCKET I THINK IT WORKS IN THIS HOUSE!!!!!!"(Nini:You are a real Idiot you know that)

Lolz I AM GOING TO STOP THAT HERE OKAY I KNOW SO SPENCEFUL!!!! :D


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