A Single Dead Rose {Vampire love story} Intro

Tadaa I am amazing! Here's What I thought Jen should look like! (This is actually a picture of my twin sister Nikki)

now onto the story:
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Whoa talk about HUGE! This is a real castle. I definatly wouldn't mind living here!
"Holy crap," i muttered.
"Home sweet home!" Exclaimed Jeffrey loudly.
"You live here?" I asked stunned.
"We all do, well Felix and Rav don't," Said Aidyn looking up at the, I'm guessing, eight stories.
"Even Julia?" I said unbelieving.
"Yeah she works here," Zeek answered.
"Do you too?" I asked confused.
Jeffrey laughed.
"Um no they live here because they're princes," Felix muttered.
"Oh," I said feeling really stupid.
I just offended the three of them didn't I? Oops. But wait I'm the queen right? So it doesn't matter? I hope.
"Okay enough Chit-chat let's just get this over with," Raven said dancing lightly up the front steps and pushing the big oak doors open.
The rest of us followed in her wake, as she entered into a large marble hall. At the end of the room were three magnificent throwns.
"Your Majesty," Raven said falling onto one knee in a sort of bow.
I watched as Felix and Julia mimicked her in her actions.
Oh crap am I supposed to bow too?
I looked nervously over my shoulder to Aidyn who shook his head as though he were reading my thoughts.
Shit! Can vampires read minds? I'll have to remember to ask them later.
"We come with the long lost heir to the thrown," Raven said still on the floor.
"You may rise," Said the man in the largest highest thrown.
The three of them got up off the floor, but as they did I couldn't help but notice Raven's hand as it slid gently across her stomache.
"Who is this heir you speak of?" Asked who I'm pretty sure is the King.
"The heir of Queen Denise and King Theodore," Raven answered.
Everyone's eyes turned to me. and I stood there awkwardly until Aidyn elbowed me as a signal to say something.
Oh shit.
"Um hi?" I squeaked out.
The Kings eyes widened. "My lady Jenavieve," He said bowing in the same fashion that Raven just had. everyone in the room followed his actions, except me. I stood there awkwardly unsure of what to do.
What do I do? Do I say something? What was it that the king had said? You may rise?
Aidyn began coughing, but it sounded a lot like, "Rise"
"Um, you may rise?" I said unsure.
Everyone immediatly got to their feet.
Hmm I could get used to this.
"Now what?" I whispered into Aidyn's ear.
"Wait for the King to speak," He mumbled back.
"Servant Mackeane, Show thy royal lady Jenavieve to her quarters," The king commanded.
"Yes my lord," Julia said bowing slightly.
And we were off down a hallway to our left leaving the others behind.
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