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Short story Alice in wonderworld

this is my version of alice and what would happen if she went to my wonderland...

Created by JokersAssistant on Tuesday, August 26, 2008

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Alice kept on following the grim path of dead moss and leafs; the stench was horrific but as curious as Alice was she would do anything to find the white rabbit. Sounds of the back round haunted Alice’s mind as she kept walking, when in the dark the mind could play tricks on you, but she knew that in this strange setting anything was possible weather in mind or not. Cautiously trying not to make a peep when she took each carful step not trying to stumble on anything, she looked and saw the trees; the dead birch what it appeared to be looked as if it were hundreds of hands trying to catch her, patterns of the leafs look like eyes taunting her saying you’ll be sorry, turn back now before its too late. Then with out warning she lost her balance and tripped over a root and landed in what it appeared to be was a checkerboard, frightened she took out her knife and paced in a circle. Once on the opposite side of where she was after the fall, stood two mysterious figures, dressed in black robes and no face with in each left hand the creatures had a staff. Alice; frightened and startled walked slowly toward them her hand tightened over the blade of her weapon in her soft speaking voice she mumbled who are you? The two objects said in sync we are who you fear, glancing at there staffs Alice whispered while reading the faded carvings and spoke tweedle dee and tweedle Dum. Suddenly the sky turned completely dark as the two figures rose out of mid air thick black smoke following them. A big force pushed down Alice as well as a few small trees behind her the smoke clouded around her, she was practically suffocating the one thing on her mind was air, taking in deep gulps of smoke she got up and walked to see if there was a way to get out of the checker boarded floor. There was no way. Her face was getting hot the stench of the rotting blood on her knife sneaked into her nose giving her the will to vomit. Alice was getting dizzy from all of the events that were happening all at once and fell to the ground, after that very second the smoke went away, breathing heavy to supply all of the fresh air her lungs needed she immediately looked up and saw the two reapers with there staff facing upside down and simply letting them slip out of there hands, Alice could only stare in fright, as she watched the blades come down on her but at the last split second the creatures grabbed the staffs and floated elegantly to the ground, the two figures said together in there dry words why so scared Alice? After all we are the ones that you fear, you can trust us not thinking Alice quickly took her weapon and stabbed tweedle dee and tweedle Dum in the stomach what poured out was black blood a horrific scream yelped out of the evil creature’s mouths, splashes of the black liquid dripped over Alice’s face felt like acid, seeping and dissolving in her skin a wicked yelp of pain came out of Alice’s throat after the 5 seconds of gore (which felt like forever) the demons dropped and disappeared leaving nothing but what used to be robes. With out another word or sound Alice pulled out her knife wiped it on her apron leaving thick smears of black blood and continued what was considered the beginning of her menacing journey.


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