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+Tsuyayatu Hinode+ {Beautiful Sunrise} [Deidara]

Chapter 15 : Tsuyayatu Hinode {Beautiful Sunrise} 45th Sunrise

Important note at the end of the chapter please read folks, this might be my last update for a while, don't really know yet how the school is going to work with me or against me. Thank you that is all please enjoy my Deidara story and sorry Shade-chan i took forever in a day to get this up. bye bye now folks!

Created by Ai.HATES.YOU.ALL on Saturday, August 23, 2008

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Tsuyayatu Hinode

{Beautiful Sunrise}

45th Sunrise

Read the memo!!!!!!!!!!!

When we got there I helped her into the cave and took the blindfold off and walked her into Daddy’s room since Deidara was talking a shower. I kicked down his door mad at him.

Dawn:-Why did ya do it Daddy?! You ruined everything!!!!!-

I screamed as I got up in his face; he kind of backed away then saw Shade thinking that it was Deidara.

Leader:-I didn’t ask them to do that now Dawn, why don’t you and Deidara go someplace nice . . .-

Dawn:-That’s not Deidara! It’s his twin! Shade!-

Leader:-That would speak for the things she has, now wouldn’t it? . . . Where is Deidara?-

Dawn:-Taking a shower, after taking a bath in the lake; no thanks to you or the other three! She’s staying here I do hope you know that Daddy, this place needs another girl around. Come on Shade-chan let’s go!-

With that I took her hand and walked down to my room; to keep her entertained while I was in the shower I gave her my laptop that my dad bought me for Christmas. After 15 minuets I came out and got dress; so I showed her around the place then finally ‘found’ Deidara.

Dawn:-Deidara!!!!! Get in here now!!!!!-

I screamed at the top of my lungs, I told Shade-chan to hide for the time being. I see a blond head pokes its way into the living room with me standing there in the middle of it, arms crossed hip out to the side and foot tapping at a fast rate.

Dawn:-You’ve been hiding something from me that Tobi and I ‘found’ today.-

Deidara:-Look Dawn-chan it’s not what you think . . . I knew that if I went after him as . . .-

Dawn:-Save it! I don’t wanna hear it. It’s something far more important than that! *pulls him down to where he was at my eye level.* You never told me! You told me about everything but this!-

With that said he was scared shitless about something and that’s when Shade came out of her hiding spot.

Shade:-You never told her about me un. Such a shame little brother; have you forgotten me too umm?-

I smirk as he goes wide eyed and jaw ajar I let him go and pushed him to his long lost twin sister; the two embraced each other while Tobi and I just stood off to the side and watched. Tobi was bouncing around happily and me, well I was just smiling at this.

Dawn:-*whispers* isn’t this cute Tobi-kun? *he nods* Go and get my camera.-

He runs off and hurries back before they break apart and I snap a picture off went the flash and the two looked at me.

Dawn:-What? That was a Kodak moment ya know!-

I say as my smile only widens; after that I had the twins sit down as I got everyone into the living room including Daddy; Hidan was the first to say something.

Hidan:-Oh fuck no! Not another girly man!-

Shade:-I’m a girl dick breath!-

Dawn:-*to Deidara* Seems like they’ll get along just fine!-

He laughs and the two stop arguing and I see her jump on my big blue friend. Deidara popped up and pushed Kisame off of her and stood in front of her protectively.

Shade:-Gosh Sunny-Dei I haven’t been here for an hour and already your acting like this yeah!-

I couldn’t help myself I just busted out laughing Tobi was on the floor everyone was looking at the two of us. I try to talk in between laughing, it wasn’t that easy.

Dawn:-*laughs* Oh that’s just too funny *laughs* Sunny-Dei ha! I wonder why I never thought of that *laughs* And we drink it all the time!!!-

*I keep laughing for a good minuet then sit up wiping my eyes holding my sore sides.*

Dawn:-Ahh that was a good laugh huh Tobi-kun?-

Tobi:-Tobi never laughed this hard before!-

Dawn:-Well Dawn hasn’t laughed this hard in such a long time; thanks Shade-chan . . . now you may go on to what you were saying.-

Kisame:-It’s been a while Shade-chan; lets see the last time I saw you; you were killing and running from the mist ANBU I’m glad they didn’t get you this time where I have to do all the work to get you back out!-

Kisame says grinning happily as I keep a hold on the fuming Sunny Dei (lol still can’t get over that Shade-chan XD) and Shade-chan hugs him once more.

Shade:-You should know by now that I can handle myself shark boy yeah!-

She says as she smiles that mirrors the guy that I’m holding onto which made me smile some more; while those two catch up with each other Deidara told me the reason why he never said anything about her to anyone . . . He thought that she was taken away from this world.

Hidan:-Oh my Jashin does everyone in your village have to say that?!?!? What the fuck were you guys smoking?!?!-

Shade:-Jashin is weak compared to my God yeah! And what the hell’s wrong with the way that Dei-kun and I speak um?!-

Hidan:-One it’s fuckin’ annoying! Who the fuck says ‘yeah’ ‘un’ and ‘umm’ at the end of each fuckin’ sentence?!?!-

Dawn:-While I counted a few times that Dei-kun didn’t say any of the three . . . but I can count that on just two hands . . . yeah. *smiles* And it seems to me that those are the two that says that now don’t you feel stupid un!-

Deidara pats my head as I smile like an idiot.

Hidan:-No one brought you into this! Now who the fuck is your fucking God . . . thinking that he’s stronger than mines!!!-

Shade:-*smirks* ____-

(Ai: ok well I couldn’t think of a name so you guys just plug it in alright? Alright back to what’s important!)

Hidan:-Never heard of that type of God. You fuckin liar he doesn’t exist!!-

Shade:-Yes she does!-

They go back in forth on that part and that’s when it hit me, I read it somewhere trying to figure out who the hell would make up such a religion.

Dawn:-You guys worship to that thing all fuckin day and yet you don’t really know the whole story behind it all now do you?!-

They both shut up and look my way, by this time I was laying in Deidara’s lap looking up at the ceiling with my arm coving my eyes.

Dawn:-Your two God use to be lovers . . . something happened; no really knows what really happened but there are so many theories about it . . . so they what ever the hell happened they just happened to make themselves immortal and now hate yet love each other just the same. Or some shit like that . . . yeah I read it somewhere if you wish to know.-

Shade-chan took out a necklace that looks just about the same as Hidan’s but with a diamond in the middle.

Shade:-I need to pry now . . .-

Zestu:-Outside please, just clean up in here . . . not out back either.-

Dawn:-Don’t look at me; I’ve seen what Hidan does when he ‘prays’ and there’s no way in hell that’s gonna happen in my room.-

Kakuzu:-Yeah we know; you tried to kill him just when he got blood on your door . . .-

Dawn:-*pops up* He also got it on my white carpet too, and then you got all pissed since it cost a lot to get it fully cleaned up!-

Kisame laughs a little and goes with his long lost friend and watch over her as she goes and prays; Tobi follows them and everyone else leaves to do whatever it was before hand. I get up and was about to leave but someone held a firm grip on my wrist; I turned to meet those beautiful greenish, blue-ish eyes. He was blushing and very close to me.

Dawn:-Ye-yes Deidara?-

Deidara:-I wanted to tell you this when we were on the boat . . . but Tobi ruined . . .-

Dawn:-Daddy ruined it. But go on, I’m listening.-

I showed no emotion, but deep down inside I my heart beat was gaining speed, and fast; my stomach was filled with butterflies of all shapes and sizes.

Deidara:-I’ve been keeping this from you for far too long; something that I’ve wanted to say to you . . . but . . . but was too scared to say it. Dawn, *gulps.* Dawn . . . I . . . I-

Leader:-Dawn! Come here I need a word with you.-

Dawn:-Sorry Deidara, maybe you can tell me some other time . . . ok. Coming Daddy!-

I run off blushing mad hard.

Dawn:~I wonder if he was going to say those three words. Doubt it;*lets out shaky breath* I wonder what Daddy wants.~ -Yes Daddy?-

Leader:-Never mind, you took to long.-

I run back to find Deidara in the green house, slowly I slid the door open and walked in quietly and poked him. He popped up almost hitting me in the head with his.

Dawn:-Now what was it that you were going to say?-

I say trying to sound as calm as I can, which was kind of hard since I really didn’t know what he was going to say, but then again I knew . . . *sigh* way too confusing for me.

Deidara:-*Stand up and holds my shoulders at arm’s length* Dawn, I felt this way for far too long without telling you this; Dawn I . . . I . . .-

Tobi:-Dawn-chan, Shade-chan needs. . .-

Deidara:-I SWEAR TO FUCKING GOD IF ONE MORE PERSON TALKS TO HER WHILE I AM GONNA BLOW YOU TO FUCKIN’ KINGDOM COME YEAH!!!!!!!-

Tobi runs away scared, unknown to us there was someone watching and many listening to what was going on.

Deidara:-*ahem* Dawn, I love you . . . *my eyes go wide as I hear him say those words* I really and truly love you yeah. I want to be with you; Dawn don’t you understand umm? *I pull away and run . . . I don’t know where but I run somewhere* Dawn! Dawn wait yeah!!-

I close my eyes, ears and run faster tripping every now and then. I only open my eyes when I bumped into Kisame; both him and Shade-chan look at me, I shake my head and push past them and run off again after hearing that Deidara was coming for me. As I ran I took out the bird he made and jumped on it setting it to flames flying away from him . . . well at least trying to, he caught up pretty quick. My hair flying all over the place by all the loops and turns that we were doing . . . it reminded me of the rollercoaster that we were on earlier on in the day, tears were still flowing; but here’s one thing that I don’t understand . . . why am I running away?

End

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After 45 chapters Deidara finally tells Dawn what's been eating away at him. But what will Dawn say and/or do back to Deidara, her long time friend. Will she turn him down for his sister? Will she go with Zetsu or preform incest with her father?!?!?!?(the last one is really not going to happen at all during the story, just so you all know!) Even I don't really know what's going to happen next; we'll see how this all works out


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