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Bakura Ryou and You # 35

Sory for the big gap that I havent been writing l8ly I havent had acces to my computer and today is the first day I've been on it...... so I hope you like it!!! feel free to comment rate...yada yada yada....yeah u kno the drill by now right? ^-^

Created by MyYami2010 on Saturday, August 23, 2008

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On you trudged into the darkness of the pharaoh's tomb. You pulled your cell phone out of your pocket. "What a surprise" you think sarcastically "I have no bars down here." You roll your eyes and check the time; you had been walking for 20 minuets now. You had not come accost anything, not a name, not a story of his past, not even a boobie trap. You look ahead of you and see a door. It has a picture of someone standing with there left foot forward and there hand held up as in "stop" or "do not enter" you stand there and watch Bakura push open the door and walk inside. You just stand there your getting a bad feeling in your gut like you shouldn't be there, but you don’t say anything because you shouldn’t be there. " SO this is what it's like feeling guilty." The other you think "I haven’t felt like this in years…." You say out loud "Probably because Sagira's soul has been entwined with mine, and I feel bad about breaking and entering into my friends tomb "as if the voice inside your head could hear it. You walk forward and through the set of doors. Inside the room is a maze that has a few Egyptian statues made from clay and holding swords in the pathway. There looks like there's just enough room to get past them around one of the sides. There are no walls to the maze just a pit. You look over one of the sides and see that the pit is extremely deep dark with purple shadow swirls near what you think the end is. Bakura sees you looking over the edge and takes your hand making you jump. You turn to face him and he says, "It's okay I wont let you fall into the shadow realm." You look over the edge one more time "so that’s the shadow realm…" you think. You look back up and see Bakura at the maze's entrance. He takes a step forwards and you whisper, "Be careful."

Slowly he puts his right foot out in front of him to take another step. As soon as he does that The Statues grow a bit larger so that there is no longer a way around them in the path and they slowly start to move towards Bakura swinging there swords violently. Bakura takes one step backwards, and they stop. He looks back to where you and Marik are standing "what am I suppose to do now?" he asks the two of you. You try to rack your brain for anything that might help, unfortunately for you the memories that were given back to you aren’t so clear anymore and seem like they happened 5,000 years ago and you cant remember them like it was yesterday. You turn to Marik hoping to see that he has a plan. He has his and on his chin thinking "hum… I wonder," he mumbles. Then louder so Bakura can hear him he says. "Take two steps forward Bakura." Bakura looks like he'd just been slapped "what and get closer to those things with the swords? What do you WANT to kill me?" Marik puts his hands on his hips, which brings a small smirk to your face. "No I don’t want to kill you just yet, just work with me here ok? I'm trying out my hypothesis…" Bakura just rolls his eyes and does what Marik says. "Since when did he become such a scientist? And since when does he know words like' hypothesis' oh I'm big bad Marik and I'll smother you with my words." You start to giggle a bit as he takes his first step. He moves his right foot onto the maze and the statues start to get bigger again. He puts his left foot out in front of his right and they get smaller and stop moving. Bakura looks at Marik like he's some sort of Mutant. "Hey what gives? Why'd it stop?" He asks. "Well I happen to know a lot about Ancient Egypt seeing as I'm 'suppose' to be the 'pharos tomb keeper' but any who left foot forward shows respect so if you move with your left foot forward then you should be able to make it accost safely." Marik explains to the two of you. "Hold on a second Marik, If You’re a 'tomb keeper' for this tomb then shouldn’t you know how to get us thru here?" you ask him. "I have never actually been taught about the tomb, just about what to do when the pharaoh finally arrives back in Egypt, which is to take him to the giant rock's resting ground so he can go back to live with the dead peacefully. I don’t know the details just that. Now can we please get a move on? I don’t know about the two of you stallers but I want to find the pharaoh's name." He says stepping onto the maze behind Bakura. They slowly inch forward keeping there left foot forward, nothing seems to be going wrong so you follow them. After some wrong turns and climbing over some ancient statues with your left foot forward (which is a lot harder then it sounds) you finally make it to the other side of the maze.

Once again there is a large door in front of you all. It has nothing written on the outside like the last one did. This one is just painted Black, you cant even tell what the door is made out of its so dark, or even where the door knob is for that matter. You feel around the door searching for the way inside when you hand slides over something and you tug on it. You open the door to find CANDY MOUNTIAN!!! Full of sweets and joy…and joyness!!! Lol maybe not you'll just have to wait a bit longer to find out!!! th_thief.jpg< - aw aint that cute? lol


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