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dark and confused[a vincent valenine love story]part 1

Created by doooomonyou on Tuesday, August 19, 2008

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It was a hard rainy night as i ran through the woods being chased after by deadly gang members who killed my mother not long before.

~flashback~

I heard a crash down the stairs and a scream from my mother and i was immediately frightened. I got to the top of the stairs and found her there with a gun pointing at her face and three silver haired men surrounding her and forcing information out of her.

"FUCKING BITCH!!"screamed the large guy with the short hair."NOW TELL ME WHERE THE GIRL IS!!!!"

"I DONT KNOW WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT!!!"

"BITCH!! TELL ME WHERE THE GIRL IS!!"

"LOZ!!"yelled the boy with the shoulder length hair and the big guy stopped immediately.

"shutup kadaj"said Loz through clenched teeth and beat my mother in her face and stabbed her.

"mommy?!" i said aloud and the boys turned toward me with an unexplainable look on their face and ran toward her seeing if she was dead. My worst fears showed. My mother was dead.

" you....YOU KILLED MY MOTHER!!!" i screamed and my house started to flood and surround me trying to kill us both. but it failed as one of them opened the front door and let all the water flood the streets.

I then ran away from them. running nonstop.

" was that her kadaj?"asked the long haired boy.

" yes Yazoo, that was her."

" then lets get her!!!" yelled Loz and all went to their bikes chasing after me

~ end flashback~

I continued running. running for my life. chasing me to probably kill me. but why would they want to kill an eleven year old girl.

my energy was running out and i tripped and screamed in pain. now getting ready for my death a man in a tattered red cape jumped in front of me and fired his weapon and fought off the others. i just sat there watching him battle and waiting for my lung capacity and my bones to heal.

once the battle was over and the three boys were gone the man in the red cape came toward me and picked me up and asked "you alright child?"

"i'll live" i said in a tired voice and fell asleep in his arms. my mind racing with all that has went on...now knowing that i am in good hands and i will never forget this day and hopefully it will stay this way for the rest of my life.


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