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doctor who story

it' a doctor who story. WELL NOOOOOOOOO! Sorry this is'nt so good I am only 14 after all.

Created by angelfablegirl on Thursday, July 31, 2008

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The doctor stepped out of the TARDIS onto a unfamiliar new planet an felt the familiar rush of exitment hit him like a speeding bullet. "Donna, DONNA! Come and smell this fresh air it's BRILLIANT!" Silence. Then he felt a lead weight inside his stomach as he remembered what had happened. "Oh yeah right..." he sighed feeling loneliness shroud him. "Oh well nothing like a good trip for getting rid of your worries."
"Where have I landed anyway?" he wondered as he walked into a paridise of leaves and trees swaying in perfect weather. People with large feathered wings were bouncing around like they were walking on water. "No it can't be what I think it is." The doctor shouted aloud. A sign floating in mid air confirmedwhat he thought. 'Elementia- the planet in control of fire, water, earth and air!' "GALLIFREY'S SISTER PLANET!" he laughed with happiness.
"Hang on a second this planet was destroyed by the daleks!" he said."No" said a voice behind him "It was almost destroyed. The elders managed to revive it. Just." The doctor spun round and a young girl that looked about 13 years old (which the doctor knew meant she was around 90) looked pityingly at him. "Are you the doctor?" she asked politely. "Yes" the doctor replied. "Come" she said trembling. "They will only listen to you..."
He followed the girl down a large stone staircase until he thought his lungs would burst from the running and his two hearts were working double time. "Come on" she said impatiently "We'll never reach there going at this speed, I thought Time Lords had a binary vascular system just like us." "We do have 2 hearts just like you!" said the doctor "But we don't have eternal flames in our hearts!" "Good point" said the girl.
Finally they reached the sacred room of the elders. The statues whichstood in the corners of the room were made from bazoolium (a rare metal which can tell the weather, if it is hot weather the metal heats up, if it's cold weather the metal cools down) and the room itself was lined with marble. "Were here!" shouted the girl "Oh my name Messalina by the way" she grinned before shooting out of the room.
"DAD!!" shouted an exited voice and, before he even knew what was happening, the doctor was knocked off his feet by a blond woman. A blond woman that looked very familiar. "JENNY!!!" the doctor shouted in surprise "Bu..but how?" he asked. "Guess I'm more like you then you thought" she grinned.

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