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Do I look like a guy?? Deidara story part sixteen

finally I got all of my stories back ^^ it's been a while since I last updated, I have been really busy..

Created by RamonaAsakura on Wednesday, July 30, 2008

You decided that if you could walk and drink tea, that'd mean you could also go home.. But sadly enough, Orochimaru didn't think that. You watched him with your Eye of Torture. "I think I'll be leaving now." You said, standing up with a cold look. "Really? But you can't even walk healthy.. you should wait another day or two..." "I assure you that I am perfectly fine." "Sounds like you want to go back to those akatsuki-brats." You glared at him coldly. "Is there place in your head to think of another option?" You asked. He took a sip from his tea. "No." He said calmly. You were about to say something but the sixtails interupted you. 'Why talk to him? He's got nothing to do with us.' 'You're right..' You put your cup on the table. "You're not finished." Orochimaru said. "..." You gave him a cold stare. "I'm leaving, now!" Orochimaru sighed. "And I had a proposal for you remember?" "Hn?" You stared at him. "How about I remove that seal for you?" You jumped away a few meters and took fighting stance. "I knew you were up to something!" the sixtails growled inside your body. 'Let's take him out now!' 'Good plan!' "Don't jump into conclusions that fast Akira-kun.. I was talking about the seal you got from the akatsuki." "I don't trust you.. You'd want something in return wouldn't you? me spying on them, or joining your ranks.." Suddenly it jumped into your mind. "So that's how it is.. " You glared at him. 'If I have that seal removed, the akatsuki will have no control over me, so I'll leave them.. And that's one akatsuki less..' "Is your mind slow today? Ofcourse, that's how it is." You took a normal stand. "No, I'm just still affected by the full moon.." You said coldly. "So that is how it is? Then why would you travel away? If you're this slowminded." "I'm not slowminded, I'm still smarter than the average person, and when I'm alone, I'll get better faster." Orochimaru chuckled, obviously wanting you to ask what was so funny, but you'd figured it out already. And also didn't see the need of him feeling superior. "I'll think about it, goodbye." You walked out of the store.'Who the heck does he think he is? I'm just fine, without his help!' 'You seem pissed.' 'He shouldn't mix in our buisness.' 'You do want to leave the akatsuki, right?' You didn't awnser. 'OI, Akira!!!' 'I don't know..' 'Well I do.. I think they are going to try to suck me out of you, and then we'll both die, remember?' 'I remember..' 'So we will quit?' 'SURE WE'LL QUIT!' 'I didn't mean to force you..' 'You did sound like it.' Nothing. You looked in front of you, it started raining. Like it wasn't worse enough like this. Ah well, time to get going. You jumped into a tree. "Excuse me, sir ninja?" You looked down and saw an old man. "Yes?" You said coldly. "Could you save my princess?" "I'm afraid I can't.." You said, "I'm just heading... Home." "She's the only one I got left.. Please sir ninja.." "I'm sorry sir." "But she's just a few trees further." You looked at him. "Is your princess a cat?" You asked bored. "Yes sir ninja. Please rescue her." You sighed and checked the area for a cat. "Found the cat." You jumped towards the tree and grabbed the cat. In the next second you stood before the man. "Here's your cat." You said coldly, handing him the cat. The cat started scratching the man. You looked at it, "this is your cat right?" You watched the man. He wasn't lying when he said it was his cat. Well maybe it just hated him. Served him right for disturbing you. You started walking off when suddenly.. "Meorw!" You looked back. The cat was right behind you. "Sush! Go back to your owner!" You said. "Meorw." The cat repeated. You glared at it and jumped away, from tree to tree to tree.
-Switch to Deidara's pov-
"Man this sure is boring, un." "Shut up brat." Sasori said annoyed. "You're annoyed because he's not here, un." You stated. "Why would I be annoyed because of that, un?" Sasori said, clearly even more annoyed. You didn't awnser. 'And stilll you miss him, like we all do..' You thought, and then you mentally smacked yourself. How could you think that?! He probably hated you, and if he didn't, he wasn't even thinking aboutyou at all. You wondered what you'd rahter have, him hating you and thinking about you, or not hating you and not thinking about you at all. "Stop slacking of you brat!" Sasori shouted. "Shut up, un!" "There's no need to hurry, is there?" A slightly familiar voice said. "Is it you, my spy?" Sasori said, he'd stopped moving and stared at the stranger that'd joined you. You stopped too, but only because you knew that man had something to do with Akira. "You have news for me, I hope?" Sasori questioned after the man had confirmed he was the spy. "Yes, Orochimaru has approached Matasuemikito-san, Sasori-sama." "As I expected.. And what did he say?" "Matasuemikito-san has wisely kept his thoughts to himself." "And what did Orochimaru offer him?" You watched Sasori-danna, he was kind of annoyed, probably because of you. You watched the spy. He was covered in a big cloak andyou could see he wore glasses, also he had a normal height. "Orochimaru offered him to remove the seal from akatsuki." You were severly surprised. "Why in the hell would he do that, un??" You randomly asked. You were sure that Akira would never agree to such an offer. 'He wouldn't abandonus, would he?' Sasori looked at you very disturbed."You might be to foolish to notice, Deidara, but Matasuemikito-san has never wanted to join us, remember? And since he hasn't been with us for to long he still seeks a way out. Orochimaru offered him, so we'd have one less member." "But, he'd want Akira to do something in return, and Akira doesn't do things for that reasons..-" "Matasuemikito-san will do anything to leave the organisation Deidara, and now be quiet!" You moved away and let Sasori and his spy talk. 'I just know that Akira wouldn't do that, he wouldn't!' Why are you so sure? A voice in the back of your head asked. 'Akira wouldn't betray us like that... Would he?' you remembered him as he had tricked you, and how cold he'd been. And yet, when he'd been around these kids, somehow he'd seemed happy. Not just acting like it, but really happy.. Probably he was just a great liar and actor, you thought. There's no way he'd care for anyone but himself is there?


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