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Torn in Two

this is my first story ever n i want it to be BIG

Created by mikinelli on Tuesday, July 29, 2008

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“Lori….I, I think I love you…..” Nate whispered into her ear. Lori sat there stunned not knowing what to say. “LIKE ALWAYS I FRICKEN SCREWED EVERYTHING UP, I’M SUCH A GODDAMN IDIOT”, Nate had always had a temper…especially when it came to revealing secrets (emotions) of his own. Lori quickly got up to calm Nate down, to reassure him he didn’t screw anything up. Nothing Lori tried would get him to calm down, Nate got tired of her “trying” to help and he was slowly bringing back his hand to sl….

“WAH!?....o that was THE oddest dream I’ve had yet….” Slowly but surely Lori was waking up, taking in the dream like she was sucking down a soda. Recently Lori was feeling a tug at her heart, she knew she was in love with two guys and in the end would only be let to choose one. Reaching for her cell Lori slid up the screen to reveal the keypad holding the “1” button a name popped up on the screen “Rochelle” (her best friend). Quickly texting Rochelle to meet her at the mall at 10 (AM...a dur she just woke-up) Lori jumped out of bed to sort through the closet on the other side of the room. Finally she decided on a pair of dark blue jeans and a black tank top decorated with electric blue, orange, lime green, n fuchsia stars.

“Mahhhhhhhhhhhhhm” (for those who can’t sound out words that’s mom)

“Yes Lori?”

“Moi is going to the mall in a little, do ya need anything??”

“No Lori, but do you mind dropping your sister off at the pool on your way?”

“If I say no can I still go to the mall?”

“Lori…”

“Ok, Ok, fine when will Bev be ready?”

“She’s calling a few friends now, give her 5 minutes”

“Urk fine, tell her I’m waiting in the car”

Popping in Flyleaf’s new CD Lori forgot the volume was on high and when she turned the key in the ignition “I’m So Sick” blasted through the stereo loud enough for the whole block to hear. “AHHHHHHH WHY IS IT SO LOUD!?” Bev tried asking her sister over the blare of Lacey Mosely’s voice. Turning the volume down Lori turned in her seat the glare at Bev “Shursh you, I’m trying to drive here ya know”. Backing out of the driveway Lori suddenly screeched to a halt, almost running over someone standing right behind her Camaro. “WHAT THE FREAK, ARE YOU TRYING TO GET KILLED?! O, Hi Damien, how are you?” “I’m fine, I was just seeing if you could give me a ride over to the mall...” “Yea, sure. I’m heading over there right now, I just have to drop Bev off at the pool first.” Lori tried hard not to stare at Damien; she knew her eyes should be on the road….

~Fast Forward~ (nothing interesting happened at the mall)

“Lori guess what I found” “What did you find this time Damien?” Damien slowly pulled a bouquet of roses from behind his back. “This….Lori, I know you probably don’t want to hear this, but I really like you…if fact I think I love you” Lori sat there and stared, why was Damien telling her this now? “Lori, do you hate me?” “Course I don’t hate you Damien” Leaning towards Damien she suddenly felt butterflies, Damien was soon closing the space between them. Tilting Lori’s chin up his lips went cra….

“OMG, what in the world is up with me?! I’m having all these weird dreams” Lori silently whispered to herself. Bev looked up from her Gameboy “Did you say something Lori?”

“Um...no, I was just talking to myself Bev”

“Well did you know you talk in your sleep?”

“WHAT DID I SAY???”

“I didn’t really pay attention. But I did hear u say Damien...”


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