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Chapter 2 : Ghost rider (loving Blackheart) - Part 1- the past

ok this is just a taste of what my story will be about, its the first chapter but this doesn't mean ill be posting all my others just yet, im going to try to make it up to at least 10 chapters before i start posting weekly, so far im at 6 including this one. Here's hoping you like it!! And thanks to the people who messaged!

Created by pirateloverssavvy on Monday, July 28, 2008

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I walked along the road towards my house, where i had lived with my mother for the 14 years I have lived. My brother and Father had joined the carnival where they were known as the amazing Johnny and Barton Blaze greatest stunt bike riders there were. Well thats what they used to be known as. My father had died a month earlier while doing one of his shows. My brother wasn't in the show that day but instead off to live a life with his girlfriend Roxanne. Since then my mother hadn't been doing well. She would spend all her time in her room and rarely came out. I could tell that she was dieing she had complained of having trouble breathing and her face had gone from olive to pale as the moon. It hurt me to see her like this but there was nothing to do about it but watch her die. I walked through the graveyard that was on the way to my house.
"If you could would you save her?" a raspy voice said from behind me. I turned around but saw no one. I continued to walk in a faster pace. "Would you save her?" It said again. I looked back again and once again saw no one. I shook my head sure i was going crazy but when i looked forward again I found a man kneeling in front of a gravestone a hood covering his face. My eyes flashed a pale green then returned to their normal blue. I decided it was nothing and started to walk past the man. When he stuck out his arm and tripped me making me fall to the ground. "I said would you save her" The man said. I gulped as the man stood up and pulled back his hood. He was old and had gray hair but he gave off the presence of being much older then he looked. An eerie shadow crossed the man's face and lightning flashed in the distance. I breathed in deeply and let it out, fog escaped my mouth. I looked at him again my eyes pale green.
"Woul-" he started then i said coldly
"No" I voiced feebly he looked shocked
"What?" He asked not thinking that would be my answer.
"You heard me 'NO'" I said with all the malice i could muster. He looked as though he were going to kill me. An image flashed through my mind of the man standing in front of me, his eyes were demon yellow and sharp teeth protruded from his mouth. I blinked and the image was gone.
"I'm sorry sir" I said "But i dont work for the devil" I said standing up and walking away.
"So you know me" He said showing up in front of me.
"How could i not, you smell of evil" I snarled spinning around and starting to walk again. "Who are you?" He asked. I smirked "I thought you already knew, Electra Blaze" I could tell he was shaking his head
"I know that but who are you?" I turned around again.
"The one who is going to destroy you, you know the battle of good and evil." I said smirking.
"Ah the angel" He inquired. I nodded "So this is your form." he asked I shook my head "Its not a form this is me and you killed my dad, and took my brother soul, these are my family but i was chosen you see chosen to destroy you." I roared.
"You can never destroy me" He said and in a wisp of smoke he was gone. I shook my head and walked home my eyes returning to their normal color. I opened my front door and walked into my house.
"Mom im home" I yelled. No answer. "Mom" I yelled again "Im home." Still no answer. I walked up the stairs to her room and opened to door. "Mom?" I called again. I looked in and found her on the bed, her face blue and sunken in. I put a hand over my mouth and backed away. I bumped into someone. I spun around slowly and looked into the eyes of Mephistopheles. "I told you, you couldn't destroy me, but I can destroy you" he said. My fear and pain turned into anger, my hands lit on fire and i threw a fire ball at him. It hit and he screamed but the burnt flesh grew over and he laughed evilly. "It wont be that easy" He growled. I whimpered and ran past him into the arms of some unknown person. I looked up and saw someone who looked in his early 20s but like Mephistopheles gave off the impression of being older, he had pale skin with black hair, and his eyes were a deep blue. My eyes turned gold a color they had never turned before. I felt searing pain erupt throughout my back before I blacked out. When i woke up I was in the hospital my brother was asleep in a chair beside me. A letter was on the table beside me reading: I'm sorry Blackheart

Thats it... yeah i know it was really short but i think the next one is at least 2 pages on word so it should be longer...

Yup so thats it im trying to find some blackheart pictures that i can put here so if you have any please send me the link!! ~!Melissa!~


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