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Chapter 23 : LOOK!Another Naruto Story.Ch.21 Escape 2 Konoha Pt.2Caught Again!!Naruto 2 The Rescue!!

Uhhhh.... Sorry for the last ch. but i kept falling a sleep every third line. So i hope i make it up in this one......Suika-ENJOY!!!

Created by corkyb13 on Sunday, July 27, 2008

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......lol........... now that i think of it he does remind me of MJ..
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(Me- For this Chapter we are going to try POVs
Suika- its SO unoriganal................Message us if we should or should not do it)
*************(Itachi)*************
Sasuke was about to say something to Ayaka-chan but she fell a sleep.He stared at her briefly before picking her up bridal style.
You- Ok Kisame, Set up a trap 4 them.We still need naruto.....
Kisame-Right*jumps away*
You headed for the camp to a wait Kisame, Brother,and Ayaka-chan.
*************(Sasuke)*************
The forest was starting to look more and more familer, you looked down at Ayaka sleeping peacefully....she always did fall a sleep at the strangest of times.But after running away from kisameyou knew you'd fall a sleep too. Youwalkeda bit farther and.......BAM!!!You and Ayaka were trapped in a net....she was so close, any closer and you'd kiss her...boy you wish that was the case.Then kisame appeared on the branch next to the net that was 20ft above ground.
Kisame-Come on.We still need you two to get the nine tailed fox...
You-hn....
Kisame got you and ayaka down 'still in net' and brought you to the camp where itachi was....drinking tea?Then Ayaka opened her eyes slowly.
********(Ayaka)**********
You felt very warm,not very confertable, but warm...you slowly opened your eyes to see Sasuke-kun inches away from your face,
You-AHHHHHHHHH!!!OMG SASUKE-KUN WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!????
You struggled but couldn't get away and you and sasuke rolled down a hill.And stopped midway down.
You-AHHHHHHHHHHHhhhh....'opens eyes' hm? NARUTO-KUN I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!!!!'attepts hug but your still stuck in the net'
Naruto-'big grin'Ayaka-chan! Sasuke-kun! I'm glad to see you guys alright!
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**********Everyone's POV*************
(((((((((((Back at village))))))))))
Naruto-BUT WHY CAN'T I GO GRANDMA TSUNADE!!??SHE IS MY ONLY SISTER YOU KNOW!!!!
Tsunade-Calm down Naruto...we already are getting it taken care of...you see we had Kakashi transform into you and The Other 4 Prodigies (Remember Riku got Hurt) to follow them after Ayaka and Sasuke are back here...
Naruto-BUT WHY SEND THOSE GUYS!!!THEY DON'T CARE ABOUT AYAKA!!ONE OF THEM'S A PERV, ANOTHER IS 2 SELF-CENTEREDAND THE OTHER 2....WELL THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH THEM BUT I STILL DON'T SEE WHY I COULDN'T HAVE GONE!!!!!!
Tsunade-Naruto! You aren't very good at being quiet..and Thats why Itachi kidnapped Ayaka and sasuke...because they wantyour demon inside you!!!!If you go we could never see you again!!Would you want to do that to your sister!!!???
Naruto-No..I don't...
Tsunade-Who knows what could happen if she was put under that stress?You and I both know that if she was an experiment of Orichimaru she could be unstable and that might risk her life!
Naruto-......Fine.... Can I at least wait for her and Sasuke by the gate?
Tsunade-You have to promise not to leave until she comes back
Naruto-Fine i just want to see them again.
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((((((No ones POV....Its annoying to write and remember)))))))
Naruto cut you free andayaka gave him a hug.
Ayaka-Naruto-kun!!I'd thought i'd never see you again!!
Naruto-Don't worry Ayaka-chan just head back to the village and i'll find someway to get back-
Itachi-Now stop Naruto.. We said we'd kill them if you never came..we never said anything about letting her go...
Ayaka-...nii-san.How could you?
Naruto-What do you mean by nii-san?
Sasuke-Before she died she was babysat by my brother.
(Suika-OMG!! I never knew Itachi-kun was so evil...HE SAT ON BABIES!!!
Me- -.-......)
Naruto-I see..
Itachi-But Little brother is free to go.Go on. Abandon your friends.And go tell the village so they can unsuccesfully capture us again.
Sasuke flinched but Ayaka huggedhim
Ayaka-Go we'll get there some how believe us....Get Kana,Taji and the others and come find us....please do it for me Sasuke-kun?
Sasuke eased up and nodded and jumped to a tree branch. He looked back and Hopped off...
Naruto(kakashi)-this isn't the plan if Naruto heard this, there's no telling what he'd do... i have to do something drastic.Ayaka.. run now!
Ayaka-w-what?
Narashi(lol)-I SAID GO NOW!!!!!!
Ayaka ran and was crying. She couldn't focus who she thought was her brother was there while she was running away.She Stopped and turned around to see Naruto turn into kakashi
Ayaka-i see...'does hand signs' Kaseki Kantas no jutsu.
She did that jutsu just in case. If Kakashi failed she'd have to fight...wait. Kakashican't defeat 2 s-class crimanals...but she could..She ran back and ran past kakashi and headed straight toward Itachi.
Ayaka-I'm sorry Nii-San!!!!'She Attacks but he dodges it'
Itachi dissapeared and left a confused ayaka.
Kakashi-WHAT ARE Y-(dodges kisame) YOU DOING!!
Ayaka-You can't defeat these two..but i can.
Kakashi- She's right.. She could handle these two blind if she had to.
Itachi appeared in front of Ayaka.
Itachi-Mangekyo Sharingan. i don't want to do this Ayaka-chan but i have no choice..
Ayaka screamed in pain.And fell to her knees. Thensaw it....her own death........
~~~~~~~~~Fear and Death~~~~~~~~
Ayaka was four years old and in her small bed that she used to sleep inbefore she died. She heard the scream of herGrandma who watchedher at night and in the morning.Then she heard the slice ofa sword a saw blood seep through her door.Then the knob turned slowly and a dark figure walked in with a bloody sword.As he walked inblood drip to the floor.
????-This is for the good of the village...
And he lifted up his sword above his head and it slowly went down.Ayaka braced her self but it never came in fact she felt warm and safe...
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She opened her eyes to see Naruto hugging her and the whole seen dissappeared around her.Ayaka was 13 again and she was crying.
Naruto-its ok Ayaka-chan.....your safe now...don't worry..
Ayaka-'sniffle'n-nar-naruto-kun?
Kana-Ayaka-chan. Are you alright?
Ayaka saw everyone around her.Kana,Taji,Riku,Chihro,Kimiko,Kiba,Shikamaru,Sasuke,Hinata, and Sakura.
She was still in the forest, but Itachi and Kisame were gone and there were Medical nin around trying to get to her. But Kiba and Sasuke block them off and saying that she's alright.
Shikamaru-Iwas afraid that you weren't going to ever make me dinner again..
Taji-Yeah and i still need to get you to marry me.
Riku-And who'd give me candy when i losematches againstyou and taji-kun?
Kana and Sakura-WHY DO YOU GUYS HAVE TO BE SO SELFISH!?!?!?!?
Ayaka-'giggles'its alright i was just under some genjutsu that showed your fear. Kinda like yours Riku-kun but 2 times worse!!
Taji-Really?
Ayaka-Yeah....Well i'm tired of being out here lets go!!!
Everyone nodded and Naruto INSITED on carrying her to the hospital. And Ayaka was let out the next day after questioning.
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Me- I hoped you liked the 21st!!!!!!
Suika-YEAH!! And thank you Chika-chan for the idea!Sorry we twisted it up a bit!
Me- BUTwe would've never thought of that to make it that AWSOME!!!!So next chapter will be Ino's Partyso i hope thatthe party will be funny to cool off this almost emotional ch.!!
Both-READ ON!!!!!!

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