Mello & Moi (a Mello love story) ch.1

Ok, first things first. Main character (Madoline) "goth". She likesreading, street racing, singing,tai-chi, drawing and laughing. She has a brother, Jeremy, BFF Aeka, BFF Eithan, rival Cortencia, and past friends who she's searching for Mello (crush) and Matt (friend). You'll learn about her past in chapter 2, which will not be written until 8-2-08.

(Dreaming- yes, lots of clouds and calming illuminations)

-Madoline, Matt, and Mello are playing around as children.

-Sounds of their gay little laughter

Madoline: Haha, don’t fall, Mello! Hahaha

Mello: Like you did?

Madoline: That was not funny!

Matt: hahahahaha, yeah it was!!!

NICENESS GONE (L oh dear , oh my L )

Madoline: Mello, …. Please don’t go…..

Mello: I’ve already made up my mind, Maddy.

Madoline: Mello! No! Please stay….

Mello: ………..Sorry, Maddy….

Madoline: NOOOO!!! I’ll get Roger if you don’t stop!

Mello: …………………(opens door and leaves)

Madoline: MELLOOOOOO!!!! (slight echo)

(bright light)

Madoline: (squints eyes) Damnit, Aeka, close the curtains! I don’t want to get up…….

Aeka: hahaha! That’s just too bad, lovey! C’mon! Get up!

Madoline: unnnnnnnnnn I can’t……

Aeka: ………I’ll rape you again….

Madoline: NO! NO! NO!

Aeka: (Jumps on Madoline) MADDY!!! AHHHH!!!

Madoline: AHHH!!! NO! GET OFF!!! AHHHHH!!!!

Aeka: ROAR!!!! I want you, baby! YESSSSS!!!!

Madoline: Alright, alright! I’m up! Now get off, I can’t breathe! Hahaha

Aeka: Wahooo!

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(By the way, in case you don’t know, Aeka is pronounced Eye-ee-kuh)

Madoline: (Yawn)

Aeka: C’mon, Maddy, you gotta stay awake.

Madoline: Je sais, Je sais. (I know, I know)

Aeka: Hm……… OH! Look, it’s Eithan! Your future date, husband, and father of your little demons!

Madoline: What?! No way!

Aeka: Well if you don’t want him, I’ll have him. He is FINE! MMMMMM

Madoline: (rolls eyes) Blehhh

Eithan: Sup, ladies.

Aeka: Hi, Eithan!!!!!!! (Jumps over the counter and hugs him)

Madoline: (smiles) Bonjour…..

Eithan: Wo, Aeka…. Calm down. Haha

Aeka: Well--- can’t help but love’ya, honey! Now what do you want?

Eithan: Ummm, hmmmm how about what I always I get for lunch here….

Aeka: Yeah, yeah fine! I’ll be right back! Now, uh, you two … play nicely. Meow!

Eithan: Hm…. Ah, Salut, Madoline.

Madoline: Salut, Eithan. Ca va?

(Hi, Eithan. How are things going?)

Eithan: Hmmm comme ci comme sa. Mais pas mal. Et toi?

( So, so. But not bad. And you?)

Madoline: Ca va bien, merci. Mais je suisencore fou a Cortencia.

Eithan: Ok, I don’t know that much French. Desole (sorry).

Madoline: Heh, I said ‘things are well, thank you. But I’m still mad at Cortencia’.

Eithan: When are you not mad at her?

Madoline: …….good point.

Aeka: OK I’M BACK!!!! Here’s your fuckin cheeseburger!

Eithan: Merci beaucoup (thank you very much)

Aeka: Blah, blah, blah. Je vous en prie. (You’re welcome)

Eithan: So, what exactly happened with Cortencia now?

Aeka: (sigh) Oh, the same old shit. Cortencia trying to humiliate Maddy and me.

Eithan: Why don’t you guys just punch her in the face already?

Madoline: Ah, but there in lies a problem.

Eithan: Hm?

Aeka: First, she has so many guys screwing her we could be punching some random
mother fucker’s ass and mistake it to be her face.

Madoline: Leaving her unscathed.

Aeka: And second, her father is the head dude of the police force!

Madoline: Once again, leaving her untouchable.

Eithan: Wow…. Just the way you guys talk about her. I don’t even know this bitch and
I hate her.
(Here- Cortencia dramatically walks in and does that slow motion hair wave thing. WOOOOSH. She was followed by her little henchman, Allison

*^*^*Wait--- we interrupt this story for a special news bulletin. She is walking with …..with…. Ah-ha! We have visual! OMG WTF!?!?! It’s….. It’s …..MATT!!! O.O)

Aeka: (cough, cough, cough) Speaking of…..

Madoline: Oui. Le probleme epouvantable. (Yes. A devil of a problem)

Eithan: !!! Wo…… (he likey)

Aeka: (slaps Eithan across the head) uhhh NO! EW!

Eithan: Hey, she’s wearing a skimpy outfit and that signifies that she WANTS to be
stared at.

Madoline: Well don’t give her what she wants! She gets enough from her “daddy”.

Eithan: Well Soooooooooorry.

Cortencia: Waiter! Oh, waiter!

Aeka: (looks at Madoline)

Madoline: ………..Fine! You owe me! (walks over to Cortencia, Matt, and Allison’s table)

Allison: (gasp) ewwwww

Madoline: …..It’s waitress, not waiter.

Cortencia: Oops, sorry. It’s not my fault flat-chested girls look like guys.

Madoline: Just because people don’t have triple Ds like you doesn’t mean they’re flat-
chested.

Cortencia: Whatever. Just take our orders and get us something to eat.

Madoline: I didn’t know you ate anything.

Allison: (giggle)

Cortencia: Allison, ….shut up!

Matt: …………wow….

Cortencia: Hmph. We came here for some cake, so …. Get us some chocolate, vanilla-frosted cake.

Madoline: You want drinks with that?

Matt: Pepsi…… (I know, so awesome)

Allison: Fruit punch!

Madoline: And Cortencia, I’m assuming you’ll want a glass of a somewhat thick white fluid?

Cortencia: UGH! WHA--

Madoline: I was talking about milk. (fake gasp) Ew, what were you thinking of, you
perv?

Cortencia: Ugh. Gothic bitch….

Madoline: (smiles) With pride. OK, no one cry, I’ll be back with your drinks. (walks into the kitchen)

Matt: Who’s she?

Cortencia: Like it matters?

Matt: Just asking….

Allison: That’s Madoline Deveraux, Cortenica’s main rival.

Hee hee

Matt: !!! M-Madoline Deveraux?! From France?

Allison: YEAH!!! W-wait, you know her?

Matt: …NO, ….I just heard a little French accent in her words. Her last name, too. Very French. …yeah.

Allison: Really? I’ll have to actually listen to her next time because I didn’t.

Cortencia: ….hmm interesting.

Madoline: Here’s your drinks. Keep holding those tears back, I’ll be back with your
cake.

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Jeremy: Wo, wo…. Slow down Maddy.

Madoline: Je suis desole. (I’m sorry)

Jeremy: C’est d’accord. (It’s ok)

Madoline: (deep breath) Ok, that boy Cortenica’s with, he-- ….he looks a lot like……….
Matt.

Jeremy: You serious? You mean, Whammy’s house Matt?

Madoline: Oui, oui. That Matt!

Jeremy: No way, it can’t be him. Do you even know his name?

Madoline: ………….No.

Jeremy: Then what are you worried about?

Madoline: Well why don’t you go out there and compare him to your memories!!!

Jeremy: Hey, I have to bake this fuckin cake!

Madoline: I’ll continue it while you’re out there.

Jeremy: Maddy, …….you’d burn water. That’s why I’m the cook here and you’re the waitress.

Madoline: Ferme-la bouche, bete! (Shut your mouth, stupid)

Jeremy: Whaaat?! Mother always said Honesty is the key

Madoline: Yeah, and she also said Let’s have a fuckin rave party while standing on the coffee table. Now get your ass out there!!! (pushes Jeremy out the door)

Jeremy: WHAT THE HELL-----

(Everybody is staring at him like WTF????)

Jeremy: What the hell is up with those drinks?! (Jack Sparrow walks over to
Cortencia’s table) Did you drink any of that, ma’am?

Cortencia: Uhhh no….

Jeremy: Phew, good. I came here just in time. I swear that crazy waitress put cyanide in that.

Cortencia: AHHHH!!!

Jeremy: Don’t you worry, it was only in the semen-- I MEAN milk. Heh heh…… (looks at Matt)

Matt: ………What?

Jeremy: Love that hair cut. YES! Alright, au’revoir! (walks fancily back into the kitchen)

Matt: ???????

Allison: I like it too J

Cortencia: (long sigh)

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Madoline: Well?

Jeremy: I have no idea what you’re talking about. He looks nothing like Matt!

Madoline: WHAT?!

Jeremy: Look, Maddy, you should just give it up on Mello and Matt. Some people have to leave our lives for new ones to come in.

Madoline: …………

Jeremy: And besides, even if by a slight chance that IS Matt back there, he might not even know where Mello is. Madoline….. Give it a rest…

Madoline: B-But, Jeremy.

Jeremy: No, Maddy. Mom and dad always told me to take care of you, and that includes keeping you out of chaotic fantasies.

Madoline: Fantasies? Mello and Matt are REAL people! My friends! And…..and I’m always dreaming about them.

Jeremy: Yes, Madoline. DREAMING about seeing them again. Key word, DREAM. It’s not real.

Madoline: …..A dream is a wish your heart makes when you’re fast asleep.

Jeremy: Well, you keep wishing.

Madoline: ……….

Aeka: Would you guys hurry it up in there! The beast is waiting!

Jeremy: Yeah, yeah. …..Here, cakes ready.

Madoline: (takes cake slowly) ……….

Jeremy: Tu d’accord? (you ok?)

Madoline: …..Oui. (yes)

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(After cake was served)

Aeka: Girl, I think yo brother has a point sometimes.

Eithan: Me too.

Madoline: I know he does. It’s just…. I don’t want to give up on them. They were like my first friends ever.

Aeka: But you got us now. Isn’t that good enough?

Madoline: Oh, I love you guys so much! You guys are my life…. It’s just……

Aeka: ….We know, you got really close to that Mello guy.

But, hey, I bet there are other guys out there for you.

Eithan: Yeah, I bet he wasn’t even good enough for you!

Aeka: For once, Eithan’s right!

Eithan: Hey!

Madoline: (laugh)

Aeka: See! You’re smiling in agreement!

Madoline: No, you guys. Mello and I were the best of friends and nothing more. I didn’t have any stronger feelings for him or Matt than what I have for you.

Aeka: So if I just packed my things and left, you would dream about me and try to find me?

Madoline: Hell yeah! You especially, Aeka!

Eithan: Why’s she so special?!?!

Aeka: ‘Cause I’m American!

Madoline: Heh, because Aeka is the first female friend I’ve ever had. And she and I have done everything together.

Aeka: Yeah, you can tell me things that you can’t tell that Matt or Mello dude because I’m a woman!

Eithan: And what about me?

Madoline: I’d come after you too, don’t worry.

Aeka: Awwwww Let me hug you fuckers!

(BIG HUG!!!!! AWWWW!!!)

Cortencia: Ugh….. Goth love…..

Allison: Hunh? Aeka doesn’t seem goth at all….

Cortencia: No but they’re hugging a goth so now they have goth cooties.

Allison: Oh………EWWWWWW

Cortencia: C’mon, let’s go. Matt, babe, you coming?

Matt: Yeah, I’m just gonna pay the bill.

Cortencia: Ok, whatever. Meet you in the car (flirts and then WOOOOOSH does that hair thing again- making her grand exit)

Matt: (walks up to the counter)

Aeka: Hey….

Matt: Hi…..(hands her the mulah!!!)

Aeka: Thanks…….. Hey, you can’t be seriously dating that girl Cortencia.

Matt: Wha--? No, I’m not dating her, She’s fuckin annoying

Aeka: WOOO!! Hallelujah, mother fucker! Lemme hug you! (Hugs Matt) You’re a smart guy… I’ll give you that.

Matt: Uhhhhh…….. Thanks. ….Ok, …..I’m gonna go now.

Aeka: ok! You have yourself a jolly ol day!

Matt: You too……..oh and before I go….. Could you give this to the gothic waitress?

Aeka: Sure!

Matt: Thanks…… (leaves)

Aeka: J Ohhhhhhh MADDYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!

Madoline: Yes?

Aeka: Bing! You’ve got mail. (hands her note)

Madoline: Hmmm…….(reads the note carefully) !!!!!

Aeka: What’s it say?

Eithan: I wanna know toooooo

Madoline: It says “It’s been a while” and then…..

Eithan: Then what?

Madoline: A cell number…..

Aeka: Awesome, girl! Call him around 10:00 tomorrow morning! Trust me, I know how to play the game.

Jeremy: All right what’s everybody all jumpy about?

Aeka: Jeremy! Jeremy! Your sister just got a cutie’s cell phone number!

Jeremy: What?! No- No, you are not calling him!

Madoline: Jeremy!!!!! That’s not fair! You call girls who randomly give you their numbers!

Jeremy: Yeah, but that’s because I’m older! And I don’t want you calling some stranger!

Aeka: If you just let her explore for once, he wouldn’t be a stranger anymore if she got to know him.

Eithan: But he wrote “It’s been a while”

Madoline: Meaning we already know each other…. And we haven’t seen one another for a long time….

Jeremy: ………Madoline, ……don’t get your hopes up that it’s Matt, ok? I don’t want to see your hopes come crashing down.

Madoline: Who else could it be but Matt?

Jeremy: IDK, my BFF Jill?

Eithan: Dude, ….. I love that commercial!

Aeka: Hahahahaha…. No seriously….

Jeremy: Je ne sais pas…… (I don’t know)

Aeka: We’re gonna give it a try whether you like it or not, Jeremy.

Jeremy: …Alright…..but don’t come crying to me when---

Aeka: We know, we know, WE KNOW! C’mon, Madoline!

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After a long day of boring work, and a visitation of the devilish Cortencia, Aeka and Madoline (who share an apartment) headed home to discuss what they’re going to do about the cutie’s #_____

Aeka: Damn, Maddy! You always take long showers!

Madoline: Heh, desole (sorry). I can’t help but want to take a calming shower-bath.

Aeka: You always do that.

Madoline: Well maybe I have a lot of stress!

Aeka: I do TOO! Roar!!!

Madoline: Haha……. I love you, Aeka.

Aeka: I wuv you and your sexy French ass, too!

Madoline: Merci, mon cheri ami. (Thank you, my darling friend)

Aeka: Bwargh…. What are we gonna do about the sexy guy?

Madoline: Call him I guess

Aeka: Yeah, but how do you want to do it? I mean, you wanna call up and be like “hey sexy, boy…meow!” like a freak or, or, or “Hola, comment est-as?” like a Mexican ooooor “Ayo, boy! Wutz gyoooood, son?” or, or---

(FYI- I don’t know Spanish so If I spelt that wrong, I’m sorry. And I don’t mean anything racist!!!!!! L )

Madoline: (laughing) No, no, no, Aeka.

Aeka: Then how?

Madoline: Why don’t I just call him up and say “Hello, you left me your number the other day” ……..

Aeka: ……….yeah I guess that works too.

Madoline: (sigh) …………..

Aeka: Keep praying. God will answer your prayers.

Madoline: Aeka….. For the billionth time… I’m PAGAN!!!

Aeka: I’m Christian!

Madoline: I know!

Aeka: …….What exactly is Pagan? Isn’t that a Satanic religion or Witch religion?

Madoline: Just because it’s nothing like Christianity doesn’t mean it’s Satanic. And Paganism is a polytheistic religion….

Aeka: ??????

Madoline: We believe in more than one God. In fact there are Goddesses too. Each one stands for a different element or emotion. Like the Lady of the moonlight. It’s very spiritual, and people of the Christian religion called Pagan people witches due to their ways of healing with herbs.

Aeka: Ohhhhhh. ……..Are you a witch?

Madoline: ………Well….. My whole family practices some sort of sorcery. I’m a healer, for now.

Aeka: Awesomeness! Isn’t there any devil in Paganism?

Madoline: Why must there be evil in religion if religion is supposed to lead to enlightenment? Or is the “devil” a way of keeping you from abandoning your religion.

Aeka: ….Wow…. I never thought of it like that. But still…

Madoline: In a Pagans’ eyes, there are no such things as “pure souls”. There is not just one “devil”, but trillions because everyone, even the nicest of people, have there own dark side. We all have these inner demons. But that doesn’t make you a bad person, as long as you have a balance between your good and bad side.

Aeka: ohhhhh. I get it. Hey…. But doesn’t that Mello have a cross?

Madoline: !!!! ……………………………....

Aeka: ………………………………............................

Madoline: ……………………………

Aeka: ………………………….

Madoline: ………………..aw well…. He’s still my homey.

Aeka: Gay baby …..(laughs)

Madoline: Hahahaha

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THE NEXT DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

10:03 AM

Madoline: Matt! Matt!

Matt: What?

Madoline: (out of breath) Matt….. It’s Mello! He left!

Matt: WHAT?!!

Madoline: I tried to reason with him….. But he left! (tear)

Matt: …do you have any idea where he could have gone?

Madoline: If I knew…..I’d already be headed there…….

Matt: …………………….

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Cortencia: Oh what now, little Maddy?! Haha! No Mello to help you now?!!

Madoline: (tears)

Both Cortencia AND Allison beat up Madoline

Madoline screaming - faint echo

Aeka: HEY! STOP DOZING OFF, Maddy!

Madoline: Hunh? O-Oh…..Desole (sorry), Aeka. I’m just really tired.

Aeka: You’re always tired! Now, c’mon, babe. We’ve got a cutie to call!

Madoline: R-right……(grabs phone)

Aeka: Put in on speaker, I have to listen because I’m nosy.

Madoline: ….D’accord… (ok)

Aeka: Oooooo! I’m so jittery! Ok, ok… call him! Hee hee

Madoline: (Dials the #)

Aeka: Squeeeeee

Madoline: ??????

(listen to the ring intently)

Matt: Hello?

Madoline: Hi, it’s Madoline. You gave me your number yesterday.

Matt: Madoline Deveraux… it’s been a while…

Madoline: Do I even know you?

Matt: Apparently you do since I heard you talking about me and Mello at the café.

Madoline: !!!! …Matt?!

Matt: The one and only!

Madoline: Holy fucktards! MATT! Where have you been all this time?!?

Matt: Roaming around….

Madoline: Matt, I’ve missed you so much!

Matt: I’ve missed you too, Maddy! I miss our old trio…

Madoline: Trio…… *(should I ask him if he knows where Mello is? Or would that be too bold for this type of reunion?)*

Matt: I don’t know where Mello is, right now. Do you?

Madoline: !!!!! Uh--- …….no, desole (sorry).

Matt: I can contact him, but I don’t know if I should ask him questions like that.

Madoline: Porquoi? (Why?)

Matt: I just don’t think I should. He seemed very stressed out the last time I had contact with him. I mean, it was almost like it wasn’t him.

Madoline: Did he have chocolate?

Matt: …yyyyyeah

Madoline: Well that’s Mello enough.

Matt: Why are so anxious?

Madoline: I was just the same for you! I REALLY missed you guys. And when we all separated…… it really hurt and I thought I’d never laugh again……

Matt: But you have laughed since then, right?

Madoline: Oh, yes. Of course. I’ve made new friends, wonderful friends. But they could never replace or even remove that emptiness in my heart…..

Matt: ………alright…. I’ll see what I can do…..

Madoline: Oh, Matt, Merci! Merci beaucoup!

Matt: Yeah, yeah…. I can’t guarantee anything, though

Madoline: That’s fine…

(You can hear Cortencia yelling in the background: MATT! Hurry it up, we’re leaving!)

Matt: (sigh) I have to go…

Madoline: Alright…… Wait! One more question!

Matt: What?

Madoline: Why are you with Cortencia?

Matt: Because I knew she’d know you. Therefore, it would be easier to find you.

Madoline: !!! Wow… you’re hanging with Cortencia just to see me again?! What a sacrifice! Aw, you’re so awesome, Matt!

Matt: I know. Now I gotta go

Madoline: Ok. Ciao!

Matt: Bye (hangs up)

Aeka: Wow, he seems nice!

Madoline: Haha that’s why he’s my friend.

Aeka: I HAVE to meet this dude in person. I mean, seriously.

Madoline: Sure, why not.

Aeka: Maddy….. Not to rain on your parade or anything…. But what if that other guy, what’s his face…

Madoline: Mello?

Aeka: Yeah! Well, what if Mello isn’t looking forward to seeing you and Matt again…

Madoline: ….Hm…..That’ll be just too bad, now wont it?

Aeka: …….I guess. ……….Hey! Let’s go see your bro and rub in his face that he was so wrong!

Madoline: OK! J

Aeka: WEEEEE!!!!

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Later at the café: Here we meet Zahida Patel, a Kind of what you call “goth” girl from India and has an Indian accent. Jeremy has an awesome sweet crush on her. She doesn’t know, though.. Awesome right?_______________

Madoline: Bonjour, mon frere! (Hello, my brother). Bonjour, Eithan!

Aeka: Hola! Comment est-as, amigos?!! Haha… espanol…

Eithan: Hola, Aeka y Madoline.

Jeremy: Salut, Madoline. Comment taille-vous, ma soeur? Et…… bonjour, Aeka. (Hi, Madoline. How are you, my sister? And…… hello, Aeka.)

Madoline: D’accord……Je deviner. Toi? (Ok……I guess. You?)

Jeremy: Tres bien! (Very good)

Zahida: Jeremy….. How do you---- oh!

Jeremy: Oh, ummm

Madoline: Ohhhhhhh. Je sais porquoi tu suis heureux. (I know why you’re happy)

Eithan: Zahida? Where’d you come from?!

Aeka: YAY! ZAHIDA!!!!!! Where you’ve been, girl?!?!

Zahida: I went back to my home in India for my sister’s wedding. But now I am back, as you can see.

Aeka: Oh I’ve missed you, Zahida! (hugs Zahida)

Madoline: Hey! Move over, Aeka! I wanna hug her too!

Jeremy: ……………

Eithan: Girl stuff……..

Zahida: You want hug too, Jeremy?

Jeremy: Tghk------ uhhh, no, no, I’m good……

Aeka: Hahaha…

Madoline: Jeremy, Jeremy, Jeremy… haha

Zahida: (smiles)

Jeremy: What’d you guys come here for?!

Aeka: Ohhh, lemme see, …..just to rub in your face how wrong you were about that boy the other day!

Jeremy: Hunh? What boy?

Madoline: The boy who gave his number. And guess what, … it WAS Matt!

Jeremy: Wha--?!

Eithan: Matt?! No way!

Aeka: Yep! The cutie was Matt.

Madoline: Not only did he look like Matt, but we confirmed it because we had a conversation about Mello and his whereabouts.

Aeka: (Nods) Yes, yes, yes!

Zahida: Mello? Matt? Who are they?

Jeremy: ……….j-just….. Some old friends……

Zahida: Oh….. Sorry…..

Jeremy: It’s ok

Aeka: Matt said he was going to try and contact Mello.

Eithan: !!!!!!!!!

Madoline: Isn’t this great?!

Jeremy: W-Wow…..

Madoline: After all the times you told me to give up (hugs Jeremy)

Jeremy: Well I didn’t think it would actually happen(hugs Madoline)

Eithan: I don’t think this is a good idea!

Aeka: ???????

Zahida: Oh………..?????

Madoline: Hunh? Eithan……what do you mean?

Jeremy: ????

Eithan: I Mean---- …..I just…. Don’t think ….Matt or Mello could make your life any better than it is, Madoline.

Madoline: E-Eithan….?

Eithan: (gets up and leaves) (SLAMs Door)

(silence)

Aeka: …….I know why he did that…..

Zahida: Why, might I ask?

Aeka: Madoline, he told me not to tell you, ….but he really likes you. I Mean, REALLY likes you.

Madoline: !!!!! Oh……um, …..

Jeremy: ………….
Ok, that's all we can think of right now and we are sorry. PLease read chapter two when its ready, thank you!