Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Chap. 1 - Where Am I?

In our previous story, Torchic and Kim made a team and their team called "UNIVERSITY". One day, Kim and Torchic walking in Town Square,
Torchic: Okay, Kim, do you know that Persian? He owns that bank. It's called "Felicity Bank". You can put your savings their.
Kim: Oh. Will he steal money?
Torchic: Of course, not!
Kim: Kidding. Continue.
Torchic: Okay,that is the "Keckleon Shop". See those two Kecleons? They are brothers and they own their shop. The other one is the storage. You can put your important items that your not using there. The last one is"Gulpin Link Shop". If you want your old moves back, you can talk to Gulpin.
(Kim notices something)
Torchic: Umm, Kim? Is something wrong?
Kim: Oh, me? I just saw an empty space.
(Kim pointed to an empty spot)
Torchic: Oh, that? That is "Wigglytuff's club". You can unlock some friend areas there but she's on vacation, visiting her friend.
Torchic: Oh! I almost forgotten! We're going to see the Pelliper's Office, right?
Kim: Right.
Torchic: Follow me!
(At the Pelliper's Office)
Torchic: Okay. This is the Pelliper's Office. You can talk to Pelliper if you need help in the mail. That's the board. You can see that if you want to make a job their and save their thingys or their friends. Wanna tour at the Dojo?
Kim: Oh, no thanks. I already saw it when you're still talking.
Torchic: But do you know what is a Dojo?
Kim: Yea.
Torchic: Okay.
(Kim heard a cry)
Torchic: Is their any problem, Kim?
Kim: No. I heard a cry and it's...familiar to me.
Torchic: I think it needs help! *run away*
Kim: Torchic, wait! *run away*
Torchic: *Stop running* Wait, it stop shouting.
Kim: *Stop running* *Panting* Torchic...will you just...wait for me....
Torchic: Sorry Kim but it really needs help!!
Kim: We don't know if it really needs help!!
Torchic: Fine, I get it.
(Torchic and Kim heard a cry again)
Kim: Wait Torchic, don't run yet. This voice is really...
Torchic: Really...??
Kim: Familiar.
Torchic: Then who is it?
???: WAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!
Kim: Wait...I hear it!! It's near now!!! *runs away*
Torchic: Wait for me!! *runs away*
???: Mom, Kim, where are you??!!
Kim: Huh?? An Eevee???
???: AAAAAHHHH!!!! A talking Skitty!!!! Am I dreaming this?!?!
(Torchic came)
Kim: Please don't shout!!! I'm just asking what's your name!!
Kathleen: *Nervously answered* Kath...leen...
Kim: Kathleen?? Kathleen Wilson??
Kathleen: Yea...how did you know that?? You're the one who turned me into Pokemon, don't you?? *angrily questioned*
Torchic: Huh?? *Confused*
Kim: No, it's me, Kim!! You're little sister eleven years old!!
Kathleen: Kim?? Is that really you?? I missed you!! *Hug each other*
Torchic: Two of you?? Humans?? Don't understand...
Kathleen: Kim, who is that guy?? Is he the one who turned me into pokemon???
Kim: No, he's Torchic. He didn't turn you into pokemon. He's just a regular torchic at all.
Kathleen: Then who turned us into pokemon???
Kim: I don't know...
Torchic: Why don't you guys rest at my base first?
(at Torchic's base)
Torchic: Guys, I have to tell you something.
Kathleen and Kim: What is it?
Torchic: My...my name is not Torchic.
Kim: *Gasp*
Kathleen: Thenwhat is it?
BLaze: It's Blaze.
(Kim punched Blaze suddenly)
Kim: WHAT ON EARTHLING YOU DIDN'T TOLD ME YOUR REAL NAME SINCE WE FIRST MET!!!!
Blaze: I'm sorry, Kim but I thought you will laughed at my name!!! Please forgive me!!! Please!!!
Kim: Of course, you got a nice name. *Scary face* But you laugh at my name. *Normal face* Never laugh at my name again.
Blaze: I will, promise.
(After a long conversation)
Kim: So Kathleen, wanna join our team? You can live in our base.
Kathleen: *Gasp* Forever??
Kim: I don't know if we can be a human again. Just say yes, please?
Blaze: ...
Kathleen: I will join your team but what kind of team??
Kim and Blaze: Rescue Team.
Kathleen: What's a rescue team?
Kim: Tor...I mean Blaze, can you tell it to her??
Blaze: Sure, but don't sleep!!
(After Blaze describe what is a rescue team)
Kathleen: Oooh, that is a rescue team. Okay, I will join.
Blaze: Yeee...Kim?? Why you slept!!??
Kim: Zzz...oh me? Sorry Blaze.
Blaze: Ok, shout. One, two, three...
Blaze and Kim: YEEEEYYY!!!!
Kathleen: Why you're shouting?? Kim, if you join a rescue team, will I still be back to human??
Kim: Not sure, sis. But here's your team badge. *Gave to Kathleen and put it on*
Kathleen: What's this?
Kim: A team badge. It will know if you're our team or not but you're in our team, of course.
Kathleen: Can we shout again?
Blaze, Kim and Kathleen: YEEEY!!!!
~TO BE COUNTINUED~