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Paint my world lovely~a miyavi love story (9)

Chapter 12 : Paint my world lovely~a miyavi love story~(5)

ok! im prety happy today! i got some feedback!!! im really happy!!!! that really helped me alot today! so thanks to the people who took there time to tell me they like it! though i may have to change a few parts but that wont be until way later in the story im still thinking about it...well have fun reading!!!

Created by yumilovesmiyavi on Wednesday, July 09, 2008

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Suddenly na-chan came over to help me. i stopped him "no! i-i just have to calm down...just please dont go near me..." all i could picture was my ex standing above me...i erased the image from my mind and sat down. i apologized over and over again. i looked at miyavi who looked like a child whos hand got slapped away from something he shouldnt touch. i felt very bad...after that things were akward during dinner miyavi seemed more quiet. after dinner we took off. "so where do you live?" na-chan asked. i gave him the directions and off we went. i sat in the back with miyavi who still looked serious...not mad or sad just...serious.... i finally couldnt stand seeing miyavi looking so serious "ummm....miyavi?" he looked at me "hm?" " im sorry, i didnt mean to be rude or anything...im just...a really skidish person..." he gave me a small grin "its ok..." it didnt feel ok.....finally we came up to my apartment. i got out of the car "thank you guys very much" i bowed and began to walk away "hey!" i turned and saw miyavis head sticking out the window. "um yes?" he seemed like he almost forgot what he was gonna say, "im really sorry for hitting you with the soccor ball..." i rubbed my head "oh im fine now!" he gave me a smile "ok...so since you know my name how about yours?" i blushed "o-oh i-its yumi" he gave a little wave "well bye bye yu-chan" and he simply took off....

(MIYAVIS P.O.V (point of view) )
I said goodbye and na-chan drove off.... "why are you so serious now? did she make you angry?" na-chan asked me. i glanced out the window. "no she didnt...i mean it was just...the look on her face. i mean i simply went to go lift her head up and she looked at me like i was murdering her or something...im just wondering what i did..." Na-chan reassured me "well miyavi, i cant really tell you...just dont let it bother you...shes fine now"

ok!!it seems like yumi is making miyavi wonder??? 7ec9afc81fi.jpg
ohhh! yay! well stay tuned for number 6!! maybe ill make it tomorrow...most likely!!! oh and of course id love to hear from all my readers! the more you give feedback the more confident i am in this story!!! MYV 4 EVER!!!!!

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