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You Were Creeping in the Night, Then You Stole Me *prologue

Chapter 1 : You Were Creeping in the Night, Then You Stole Me *prologue

it's my first time ever writing fantasy. enjoy! message me any comments that you may have. :) ♥peace

Created by zamoolala on Wednesday, June 25, 2008

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It was an cool, Autumn evening. There was only a slight breeze blowing West. The scarlet sky was turning a dark blue and the sun was just about to be set. An eerie feeling was about. There were rustlings in the bushes. Someone or something was in there. It was waiting. Waiting... for her. Did she know? She didn't have any idea the adventure she was going to endure. Not one bit did she know.

Mary Sweeney had just left her home for a nice walk under the moon light. She had wrapped herself in an over-sized jacket and a beanie hat covered her mocha hair.

An innocent teen going for a stroll is what she seemed like. She believed she was, but it knew she wasn't. It knew she was special. It was going to take her.

Poor Mary didn't know that she soon would be taken. She didn't know that she took a wrong turn on the wrong street. It's not like it was her choice. It was her fate. Fate dragged her to that street, it told her to do it at that certain time.

Gracefully and silently she walked. No one else seemed to be on the streets at the late hour, but that didn't bother Mary. She still went on her way.

Suddenly, a chill overcame her and the slight breeze turned into a harsh gale. Her cheeks turned rosy and tears formed in her brown eyes. Mary's soft hair felt like needles blowing in her face. Strangely, the wind was blowing hard, but it made no sound. The only thing heard was Mary's breathing and a deep, droning moan. Not a moan of the wind, but of something else.

She quickened her step, but the gale wasn't on her side. It blew harder and harder towards her. The moaning got louder and she could hear it saying her name.

Mary was paralyzed with fear.

Something came behind her and all of a sudden... she dissapeared.

Off the face of the Earth... out of the galaxy... out of the universe.


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