Stuck in a silent hill nightmare 1(redone)

Vincent:we are going to the hosiptal oki
Lily:what no not oki
Vincent*rolls his eyes*Come on
Lily:fine
IN THE HOSIPTAL
Vincent:why dont you stay in this room while i go and and look around with goo
Lily:WHAT????????
Vincent:lock the door
Lily:.......hurry up*goes into a emptey room and locks the door*
Vincent:oki lets go goo
Goo:bark bark bark
Vincent:what the hell *begins to wail on a twicthing nurse*
Goo:GRRRRRR
??????:Arghhhhhhhh
Vincent:what the hell is that
??????:you here to repay for how your father left me
Vincent:what???
?????:*comes at Vincent*
Vincent*Slaps at the woman with a steel pipe until she sinks back into the ground*I better go get Lily
WITH LILY
Knock knock
Vincent:lily are you okay
Lily:Vincent*opens the door and tackles vincent into a hug*
Vincent:we are leaving this town now
Lily:oki
AT THEGATE TO THE TOWN
Vincent:*see's someone oving down a allyway*Lily theres something down there stay here*runs down the allyway*
Lily:VINCENT
James:hello lily
Lily:DAD...mom
James:dont you want to stay here with us?
Lily:-_- no
WITH VINCENT
Vincent:Dad...
Herny:hello son
Vincent:why are you here????
Herny:i wanted to come here and i am glad i did you should stay here with me and your mom and we can be a family
Vincent........