TYPO ALRET please read: In the begging I typo’d Brooklyn’s age, and that made me confessed!
So here how it goes.
Your 16, you will remain 16 until September
Brooklyn’s b-day is unknown, so I made it sometime in the summer, he was suppose to turn 18 because he was 17 at the start, sorry for the confusing but it really has so importance in the story line any how…
Last time you and Brooklyn went out on a date and he asked you to merry him!
Start)
You opened your eyes, and yawned, Brooklyn was holding your body close to his as he slept, you smiled, Brooklyn was always so cute as he slept. You managed to worm your way out of his hold without waking him and you got up. Looking at the clock it was 7:30.
You grabbed a towel and a pair of clothes and headed into the shower…
After you finished your morning thing, you went back to the room, Brooklyn smiled at you, he had just woken up “Morning” you began “Good morning hon.” he yawed “the bathrooms all yours” you smiled “ok…oh! Why don’t you start packing your things? Its time for us to go home” he smiled, you smiled at him “ok” you nodded, he headed into the shower…
Brooklyn came out the washroom not to long later, he smiled at you were done…you only had a few things unpacked anyway…
“So…what do you think?” he asked “huh?” “About US I mean, d you think were moving to fast…what?” “…? No Brooklyn…not at all” you told him “people saw that teen marriage is bad…” he began “maybe for some…but not for people how are actually ready to comet, and love each other…lie us” you told him “my thoughts exactly” he kneeled over and kissed you gently
Brooklyn began sliding hishands up your shirt, and stared to massage the bases of your breasts, you moaned in his mouth and he pulled away "???" "We have a visitor' he told you, looking up you saw Brooklyn's dad, he had a "what the fuck" look on his face, you blushed like mad "I don’t want to know...are you two going to check out now or do I have to wait an hour or two for you to be done messing around" he asked "no where good..." Brooklyn told him "good" "oh! And about the apartment...." "You can have it.... I like ___________________, she seems like the type of girl who wont let you take advantage of her innocents^^” he smiled and you giggled “hey!” Brooklyn began “_______________! Don’t laugh!’ he whined
You stopped and smiled at him kindly before he smiled at you
Soon you both checked yourselves out of the hotel, and headed home…
On your way you called Tyson and told him you were coming, he seemed really happy about it.
Then you arrived home….
You hopped out the car and ran to the door, it was open, so you took it upon yourself to enter, Brooklyn sighed as he was left with bag duty…
“TYSON! HIRO! MAX! KAI! RAY! DAICHI! GRANPA!!!! IM HOOOOMMMMEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!”
You called “YAY!”
Daichi flew at you “your home! Your home I missed you big sis!”
He told you “I missed you too Daichi!!”
You hugged him and laughed “aaarrggg DAICHI!” Tyson yelled, “HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU! ______________! MY SISTER! MINES AND HIROS! NOT YOURS!!” He yelled
You laughed “TYSON!!”
You hugged him you weren’t gone for THAT long, just for about 2 weeks or so, but you still missed your brothers like crazy…
”Welcome back _____________” Ray told you “Yeah! Things just aren’t the same with you gone” Max told you “Maxy! Ray-Ray!”
You hugged them “I missed you both too!!!”
“…” Kai gave you all a look that screamed ‘crazy people’
You smiled and hugged him too “!!!…”
“Kai….”
“_____________” He began “huh?” ‘What’s that…. on your finger?” he asked
“!!!” You blushed “well…. uh…”
He grabbed your hand and inspected your ring just then Brooklyn came in “uh-huh…. Brooklyn gave this to you…. right?”
“I gave what to her?”
Brooklyn asked
“This ring…. you asked her to marry you…. right?”
“…Right^^”
Everyone’s jaw dropped that was the last thing they were expecting to here “______________, is he serious” Tyson asked “yep^///////^” “O.O” “what’s wrong Tyson?” you asked
“YOUR TO YOUNG TO GET MARRIED!!!!!!!” He told you “no! I’m 16! Its legal!”
“I don’t believe you!!!”
“Were in Japan Tyson! You should know this! Let me explain:
Article 731 to 737 of the Japanese Civil Code stipulates the following requirements:
1)The male partner must be 18 years of age or older and the female partner must be 16 years of age or older.
In addition, for Americans, you must be able to legally marry in your home state; if the legal age of marriage at home is 18, you cannot marry earlier than that in Japan.
2)A woman cannot get married within six months of the dissolution of her previous marriage. According to Japanese law, this is to avoid confusion as to the identification of a child's father if a birth occurs close in time to the end of the marriage.
3)Most people related by blood, by adoption or through other marriages cannot get married in Japan.
4)A person who is under 20 years of age cannot get married in Japan without a parent's approval.
(Reference: http://tokyo.usembassy.gov/e/acs/tacs-7114a.html)
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’m 16 Brooklyn’s 18. So we can get married ^^ (I found this out after correction the typo btw)
“…” “All we need is our parents approval! Brooklyn’s dad didn’t seem to mind! And now I have to ask daddy” you cheered
“Then your in luck…dad’s coming home for a visit, you can ask him to meet Brooklyn and approve of everything” Hiro said as he came down stairs “really! YAY!!” ‘Meet her dad?’ he thought
Brooklyn began to feel nervous
“Brooklyn did you here that I-“ you cut yourself of “what’s wrong?”
You asked, “meeting your dad…___________ we still never got his permission to move in together, let alone for us to be married” he said quietly “oh…”
“What are you two whispering about” Tyson asked “nothing!”
“Riiiiight”
“…_______________, Baby I’ll see you later on tonight ok? Call me” Brooklyn kissed you “ok”
“Bye guys” he left
“When’s dad coming?” you asked “Tomorrow” “ok”
Brooklyn headed home; he got a few more of his things
Since his dad gave him the key to the apartment he decided to take a look around, the place needed a few decorations and such but Brooklyn knew that already, he sighed ‘if Mr. Granger doesn’t like me, I cant marry her’ he thought
‘So…I have to impress him!’ he thought
Brooklyn called you “yes?” you answered “Hun, I was wondering when your dad was coming?” he asked “tomorrow”
“Oh…your at home right?” “Right”
“Can I borrow something?” “Sure” “your cook book, your vacuum…. no-you can just come over and bring some stuff” “???” “I’ll explain later, I’ll pick you up” ‘ok”
Brooklyn picked you up and took you back to the building ‘wow, this place is nice…. I hope we’ll have nice neighbors’ you thought
“First we should meet with the land lord, but that shouldn’t be a problem, we have o get this place cleaned up,” he told you
“No problem Brooklyn I’ll have it done in a flash, you just worry about what color you want to paint your bed room” you winked
He smiled “I knew I could count on you”
Later)
You had the place sparking clean
Brooklyn smiled “do you have your cook book?” he asked, “Yeah…why do you need it” ‘you’ll see”
“…Ok”
“Is that it?” “Um…yeah I guess”
“Ok I’ll-“ “I’ll call Hiro…don’t stay up to late” you told hi “ok, thanks _____________” “your welcome Brooklyn” you kissed him sweetly “good night” “good night”
You left, and Hiro came to pick you up
Brooklyn sighed; he began to make the place ready, putting his things in the room, running to store buying flowers, towels, and ext…
He pulled an all nighter…
Brooklyn fell asleep on the couch, he decorated the pace nicely considering the limited time he had, he deiced to use green (mostly light green) as the basis…
You knocked on the door, he woke up and yawned and answers it “Brooklyn” you smiled he looked so sleepy his hair was messed up and he yawed eerie 2 seconds you giggled as he let you in “come one, lets go take you to bed” you told him “all take over from here” he nodded and went to sleep
You looked around ‘it seems like Brooklyn did everything…. I knew I was right to go for green; you thought
You took out a green vase and set it on the table
You smiled and put the fishing touches on what Brooklyn started
Soon he woke up…
“Wow babe, you did a nice job finishing up the house” he told you “thanks ^^”
He looked at a picture of your friends, and then there was one of him and you, the one of you and the girls and one of you Tyson and Hiro one of him Garland and Mystel, one of him and the whole began crew.ext
“Dads home, I told him about you, he wants to meet you” you told him “I thought so” ‘I told him that you wanted to have dinner, over here and I asked if it was ok for us to live together, he said ‘well see’ “ok, that leave me a few hours to get everything ready” he told you
“Should I…go home?” you asked
“You don’t have to” you smiled “I should, I need to get myself ready…besides you said you wanted to surprise me^^ the place is beautiful, I cant wait to live here with you” you told him
He smiled “I cant wait for you to live here too” he kissed you and you smiled “before I go, I’ll out some things in the down stairs bathroom ok?” “Ok:” (keep the word CONDO in mind)
“Alright, see you later…”
You left…
Sometime later)
You, Hiro, Tyson and your dad (have any of you ever seen his dad? I think he was in one episode but I don’t remember and I never have…. just imagine what he might look like)
You all went to Brooklyn’s place, you knocked on the door. A few seconds later, Brooklyn answered, he was wearing one of those blue button up shirts, some of those black dress pants and combed is hair in his signature hair style you smiled at him and he smiled back Brooklyn kissed you smoothly on the lips, you blushed because he kissed you in front of your father!
Brooklyn smiled “Hello, Tyson, Hiro, Good evening sir, you must be ______________’s father it nice to meet you” Brooklyn stuck out his hand for a friendly handshake.
They shook hands ‘its nice to meet you too”
“Please come in” Brooklyn smiled, everyone came in, “have a seat^^” he showed you all to the table Brooklyn pulled you your chair and you sat down “thank you” you smiled “your welcome honey”
Everyone sat down you looked around, the place was still nice, Brooklyn put a few last minute touches on…
Brooklyn sat next to you, despite everything you knew he was nervous “Dinner’s almost done, unfortunately I got a late start” he told everyone
“That’s fine Brooklyn” you reassured him
“You sure have a nice place here” Tyson pointed out “thanks”
“Yes…. nice…let me ask you a question, how much rent do you pay?” he asked, “Well, honestly I don’t pay rent, my dad dose, its his place but he lives in America, so he often sends me money for rent” Brooklyn told them “I see…”
“What dose your father do in America?” he asked “he’s a lawyer” “and your mother?” “A house wife, there divorced, my step father is a business man, he works for this company…”
You smiled lightly “…hey Brooklyn…don’t you have something cooking?” Hiro asked “!!! I’ll be right back!”
Brooklyn left, “…he seems, nice” your dad began “he is” you told him “…what do you think about him Hiro?” “Me? Well, Brooklyn’s a nice kid, he’s pretty laid back, calm can be sort of cocky…but he loves ______________ a lot, I think he’s a good kid” “and you?” he asked Tyson “he’s ok, I honestly thought he was a bit weird for about a year or so when we met…but…. he’s ok now”
“_____________, Hun, could I see you in the kitchen…for a second?” Brooklyn asked “…sure”
You got up, and went to the kitchen; Brooklyn was clearly upset “what’s wrong?” “I burned dinner”
He told you “I had the oven too high…. and I seasoned everything all wrong…I tried to follow the cook book, and when I tasted everything it was horrible! The bead was burnt on the outside but runny on the inside the meat was too hard and half of it was red…I cant come out with this” he sighed “its ok…at east you tried, no ones a good cook on there first try Brooklyn…its ok, we can order out” you told him “I guess” he sighed “but…” you kissed him on the cheek: men in my family cant cook anyway…well just them what happened”
“Ok_____________”
You took his hand and led him into the dinning room “Brooklyn burned dinner you guys so I guess we’ll have to order out” you explained “thank goodness” Tyson and Hiro muttered
You giggled and Brooklyn sighed, “so, what do you all want to eat?” Brooklyn asked “who cares as long as you don’t cook it” Tyson said “…” “TYSON!”
“You began “Brooklyn tried his best! It was better then what you did!” You told him as you took a seat
He laughed
“it doesn’t matter to me” Hiro said “well, I’m kind of in the food for Chinese food” you told him
“Yeah that sound good” “ok, I’ll order”
a bit later)
Brooklyn showed everyone around until the food delivery boy came, and then the conversations started back up.
“So…Brooklyn…what are your views on premarital sex?”
You began coughing “you ok!?” Hiro asked
“Yes…DAD!”
“I’m just curious about his views”
“…By that…are you meaning to ask, if I’m sleeping with your daughter?”
He asked, you put your hand over his “I never said that…” “Fine. I think that if its your body, you CAN do what ever you want…but its more of a matter of what you SHOULD do…I don’t think that you necessarily have to wait until marriage, but your first time, and every time after that should be with someone you truly love and trust. I think that you should be old enough to be able to deal with the choices that you made, emotionally, physically, and mentally, the first person you choose to be with doesn’t HAVE to be the one you stay with forever, because life is about trial and error, you suppose to make mistakes…the one you marry isn’t necessarily the person you’ll always be with either, but in most cases, you find the person you love and in within the one you choose to marry…its more of a matter of devotion and commitment then time” he told him
“That’s a good outlook… but about that we all make mistakes…what happens when you think your truly in love with lets say…3 people all at the same time” I don’t believe you can be truly in love with 3 people. But if your in the situation, the one that you care about the most, and loves you back is the one for you…but there ARE other people that you will meet, so you cant limit yourself to a few options”
‘I see…just as you said, there are other options…so why do you want to be with my daughter?”
“…That’s a good question…and I don’t know how to answer it…I love your daughter more then anything, its just something that tells me that she’s the one for me, and she’s my one and only, its impossible to put into words but…from the moment I first laid eyes on her, I knew that she was the girl I wanted to be with fro the rest of my life”
Brooklyn answered; you blushed “this brings me to my question” Brooklyn told him “hm?” “Mr. Granger… may I have your approval, to marry _______________”
He asked “Marry!?” “Yes…recently I asked her to marry me, she told me yes, my own father has giving approval, and so we need yours” Brooklyn said
“…”
he looked at you, the back at Brooklyn “…Hiro, Tyson do you have in problems with ___________ being married to this young man?”
he asked “nope” Hiro said “’No, Brooklyn’s ok”
“Fine…then its ok by me…I trust your brothers judgment”
you smiled “really dad?” he nodded “YAY!” You hugged him “thank you! Thank you!” You told him “Brooklyn” ‘yes sir?” “if you break my little girls heart….” “I know, Thank you sir, oh and another thing” ‘Can I move in with Brooklyn?” you cut him off “sure” “YAY!!!”
You hugged Brooklyn “see! Told you that he would like you” you whispered to him “well….”
You smiled your dad looked at his watch “Its late…I think its time for us to go” he said “yeah”
You hugged Brooklyn and kissed him good bye “see you tomorrow’ you told him “see you”
“Bye Brooklyn” Tyson said “see ya kid!” Hiro told him “ well, you had better treat my little girl right” your dad threatened, “I will, my father always told me to respect women” he told him “good…” he pat him on the head “the next time I see you will proberly be at your wedding…until them”
He left “bye Brooklyn!” You hugged him once more before leaving “I’ll move my things in tomorrow!”
“Ok ____________ bye”
Everyone left, Brooklyn smiled to himself ‘now that I got that done…. i’m going to bed…”
Brooklyn went to his room and ell asleep
Once you got home you jumped in your bed you had a message on your machine so you listened to it
“HI __________________! HEARD THE GREAT NEWS! THINGS SURE GET AROUND FAST HUH?! I CANT WAIT TO SEE YOU AGAIN ALL OF US ARE COMEING FOR A VISIT CALL ME BACK WHEN YOU GET THIS MESSAGE!!! FROM FRANCE FOR ONE AND ONLY OLIVER!”
You giggled and yawed
‘Ill call him back in the morning’ you thought.
You changed your clothes and fell asleep….
That’s it! I hope you enjoyed it!!
Bye!!!!!!
