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The Lover who Could'nt Love, a Hidan love Story (chapter 2)

Sorry it took so long, ran out of ideas for a while, and i am changing I to you

Created by 13isMidnight on Monday, June 16, 2008

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You fluttered your eyes open. You put a hand up to your head and groaned. “Ug, what happened, how did I get in this abandoned building?" You sat up and rubbed your head a little. You looked around at the empty place. There were a lot of gaps in the roof witch let in light. You were just wondering what made the holes, when you remembered everything. You gasped and jumped through one of the holes of the roof to what was remaining of it. Your eyes opened wide. More than 3/4 of the village was gone. Building was in ruins, forests were on fire, and blood stained the ground. You were so devastated, and angry at the same time. In other words, you were in a state of complete and utter shock. Before you knew it, you were falling off the side of the building.
When you hit the ground, you just lay there for about 5 minutes, thinking. What if all your friends were dead? What would happen to Naruto when he came back from his mission? You felt tears coming to your eyes, when just then you heard voices. You quickly pulled yourself together and looked for a place to hide. You found a bunch of rocks clumped together to make a small cave like place. It was a tight squeeze, but you managed to get in. You heard foot steps coming towards you, and the same voices. “Kakuzu, stop talking about fuckin' money and look for the stupid girl Kisame was talking about." Their foot steps came closer and closer, their voices too. "Look over there," Kakuzu shouted to his partner. You held your breath; there was a hole in the top of the cave thingy. Your heart skipped a beat, when you saw the figure of a tall man with a mask covering his face. He was hovering close to your hiding place. You closed your eyes, trying not to seem noticeable.
When you opened your eyes, the figure was walking away. You exhaled your held breath. You were just about to check and see if there was anyone else around, when a strong hand crashed through the stone and graded you by the hair. The hand (or the person attached to the hand) pulled you up out of the cave thingy. Some of the jagged stones scraped your arms and legs. Before you knew it you were looking into the face of handsome, white haired, purple eyed man. “Hey Kakuzu! You lazy bastard there was someone here!" Compared to the two men, you were short. Your feet were off the ground. You were about to kick your captive, when he socked you in the stomach, hard. You spat out some blood. You looked up at him again, well more like glared. He was just staring at you, almost as if he thought it was ok to go around punching people.

Kakuzu came over and also stared at you for a minute. You were terrified, so much that you didn't think to use your chakra." Here Kakuzu." Your captive suddenlytossed you over to his partner. To them you were light, so Kakuzu caught you easy." Take her over to Kisame and see if she's the one we're looking for." His partner glared at him. "Stop yelling at me Hidan, I’m right here." Kakuzu held you under is arm and walked off. ‘Man this is really bad, I have to get out of here.' You squirmed out of his grip and started running, but he caught you. “all right honey, I'm tired and don't have time for this, so I’ll just have you take a nap." As you can imagine he hit you and knocked you out. And once again everything went black....
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