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Fate's Cruel Twist I

Chapter 5 : Fate's Cruel Twist V

Created by KuraiKooriOokami on Thursday, May 15, 2008

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Aster’s POV

I began to take many hits from Zen, one of the upper level vamps here. I wasn’t going to last long even as a werewolf. But I couldn’t let her take him from me. I had to do something. But everything was in vain. Zen finally got tired of me and threw me against the wall head first. I was blanked out after that. Then I woke up I guess about 10 mins later to see Koori as the Demon he was with his other traits. I could see his rage in his animalistic eyes. Nothing was there but the inner beast. He was destroying Zen but in a sadistically way. Everything in the room was frozen and Koori was fighting with in a more vampire like form with two black and blue Katanas from the vampiress’ wall. The only wolf left in him was his tail. He just slashed away creating lines of blood on from Zen. When he was finished Zen fell back and those lines on him erupted in blood. It sprayed all over Koori and everything else in front of Zen. With Zen possibly dead and the vampiress unconscious it left me in the same room. Looking into Koori’s eyes I could see that their was a fierce look and that he was lost.

I had to approach him even though I was scared that he would kill me. He noticed me immediately but didn’t recognize me. He just licked at the on his face. “Ko..Koori… you won…just stay calm…you remember me don’t you? I love you.”

I kept trying to find a way through him. A way to get him back but nothing seamed to work. Then everything got worse when 8 more vamps came inside to see what happened. They were all gaining up on him making him more uncontrollable but they to soon realize that they couldn’t stop him.

Koori’s POV

I feel so much pain and so empty right now. I have no idea where I am ever step I take I feel like I get hit hard. All I see is blood but I feel like I’m constantly surrounded. I have to fight back. I’m slinging my fist wildly not hitting anything but the snow. Was I still under that vampiress’ spell? Even so it shouldn’t b this real. I feel so different I feel edgy like as if I am a vamp and I’m covered in blood. I can’t stop the cravings. What’s going on? I can only fall to my knees and cry. All of these images going through my head causing everything to spin. I’m starting to see something. Is it this so called master? Why is everyone into me because of some gift I have. He might be able to answer. I chase after the memory with everything I have only to feel more pain. I see the vampiress’ spell again. It’s hurting me, I can’t stand it. What’s going on? I feel myself changing again, into a demon wolf again and slipping again. I can’t stop myself. Someone please stop me. KILL MEEEEEE ….PLEAAASEEEEEE.

Aster’s POV

Koori’s in so much pain. He’s finally remembering but with that vampiress’ hypnotically spell over him he’ll never get out and he’ll never stop. He’s the perfect love of my life and yet the perfect killing Machine.

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