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young love-Hitsugaya Toshiro-Bleach love story chapter 1 part 1

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Created by nori56 on Monday, May 12, 2008

I just rolled out of bed,its 1 o'clock in in the morning,I tried to sleep again,but I can't.It's like I have to go somewhere or do something.

I just decided to to the kitchen and have a midnight snack.(or should I say 1:a.m. snack?)

When I reached the kitchen,I saw a boy with white hair(I could see it even its dark outside)with two turquoise eyes wearing a black kimono and a white robe.he's standing in the balcony.

yeah,right.a boy wearing a wierd costume standing at my balcony in the middle of the night.he looks like a gang member to me,but he's just a elementary student.(it's so obvious,the height?!)

then I saw two turquoise eyes staring at me.

"hey snow-head,if your a robber or what,not in my house,step on my foot first".(just a long term for don't-rob-my-house)

he said"you can see me?"

me:(anime vein)

am I blind?a boy said to me that I can see him!Am I not supposed to see him?or what?!

then he dissapeard,leaving his cellphone on the balcony table.

"what's this?his cellphone,let me see?"

I opened it and instead of a ordinary cellphone,I found a communicator.

bleep!bleep!BLEEP!BLEEP!

"like there is something this thing is....ah!whatever.I'll just go back and eat.

-after that encounter with that boy,really wierd things started to happen-

name:Mizuki Eri Kudo (yeah right,I got a second name,which I found wierd)

age:14(im a bit short for my age,but Im a highschool freshman)

hair:black(always let down)

eyes:blue

likes:food,surfing the net,japanese history,religions & customs, sweet and caring people.

hates:being too much of what I like,perverts,clumsy,pathetic,rude & abnoxious people.

about me:Im a bit emo,Im half-british,I love spying persons and Im ugly.(they say im pretty when I stop being emo,but I don't believe them.)

-3 days later-

after school,I decided to go to the river and watch the sunset.

bleep!bleep!

oh!crap,here it goes again.ever since that boy left his phone on my balcony,this thing won't never stop bleeping.

"oh,let me check why this thing always bleep"

but before I open it,I heard a loud explosion,just behind me!

BLEEP!BLEEP!BLEEP!BLEEP!

its bleeping fast,then I turned around and I saw the most horrible-looking creature I could ever imagine,even in my wildest dreams!

"I could smell your extraordinary fragrance,you smell very sweet!"a deep loud voice said to me.

then I started to run,I don't know why,my legs just run.Now im running for my life.(oh crap! Im not good at track-and-field!)

then the bleeping suddenly stops.and I turn around,

"the boy from yesterday!"

he draw his sword and cut the monster in half.

bleep!bleep!

"another bleeping again?why would..."

then I turned around and another monster was attacking me,this time It hit me on my right shoulder.

and,the boy,again,cut the monster (diagonally) in half.(who the hell is this boy anyway?)

he approached me and said

"are you okay?"

"of course im not!"I replied

"let me..."

STOP IT!

I stop,turned back and leave.

"wait!that's my communicator!why are you holding it?"he curiously said.

"oh,you just left it at my balcony 3 days ago,if you want it back,tell me your name and where do you live."I cried.

"okay,Im Hitsugaya Toshiro,and I don't live here" he said.

"Im Mizuki Kudo and please don't disturb me anymore"So I handed him the phone and walk away.(whew!at least im saved now)

"do you think you could make it back with your condition?look at yourself!you could die anytime due to bloodloss"he pointed at my shoulder angrily(well I think at some point Hitsugaya's right)

"so?"

he swept my feet and carry me(bridal style),he's jumping from roof to roof,and he's scaring me to death!

"where are you taking me?"I cried.

He didn't answer,But I saw his cheeks are a little pinkish,then he look down at me,I started to blush.

he embraced me tight(like he's my boyfriend or something)my face turned bright red.

"where are you possibly taking me?and why are you embracing me?"

"just hold on tight"he said.

To be continued...


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