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The shape of the devil The story of Carl draik

Chapter 3 : the shape of the devil part 3 the end of it all

Created by krgr on Sunday, May 11, 2008

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August 10 2007 draik house 8:00

36 teens are there at the party having the time of there lives it may be there last

Carl walks up to the house two guys answer open the door

Guy#1: who are you? And what are you doing here?

Guy#2: I think he’s a nerd trying to crash the party

Guy#1: time to take him down!

Carl grabs guy#1 and squeezes his throat until he crushes it

Guy#2: d-d-dude I am so s-sorry d-don’t hurt me!

Carl grabs him and throws him down! And starts beating him with guy#1’s body

And when that didn’t work he just slits his throat and walks in the house

Fred’s house 8:05

Knock knock

Fred: hello

Lee: hey remember me?

Fred: how could I forget? You’re the guy who ruined my family

Lee: that’s not why I came Carl’s out

Fred: they released him?!

Lee: no he broke out I need your help

Fred: go cal the police

Lee: he killed them all

Fred: what th heck?!

Lee: lets go

Fred: let get some stuff before we go

He gets

2 chainsaws

2 44s

5 grenades

2 magnums

Lee: do you have a permit?!

draik house 8:25

Dell: I’m not drinking

Megan: aw come on please?

Amy: yeah loosen up

Dell: no I wont!

Amy and Megan :wimp!

Amy: I’m going to get a beer

Megan: get me one I’ll try and convince bookworm to take a drink

Amy walks outside and hears footsteps

Amy: Megan? Are you trying to prank me you hot stuff idiot

Carl walks out

Amy: who are you?

Carl hits her in the head and knocks her out and starts beating her badly but she’s alive

Dell: Amy is such a good friend huh?

Megan: what do you mean?

Dell: she steals your bear and ran off

Megan: do you mean that? Hey! Dell

Dell: maybe

Megan: Answer me!

Dell: I cant tell you

Dell takes off running

Megan: Hey Dell get back here!

Lee and Fred drive up the house

Lee: let’s walk

Fred: what?!

Lee: if we drive he will know were there and are you sure he will be there?

Fred: Lets see oh my- god!

Lee: what?

Fred: look at the tree!

There where guys 1 and 2 both impaled on the tree

Megan walks and sees Fred and lee

Megan: hey you two! What are you doing ? Spying are us?!

Carl walks out and grabs here head and jams his fingers in here eyes Fred and Lee shoot the heck out of him to try and save her but too late!

he kills her and despite being shot carl up to the house Fred follows and continues to shoot him but runs out of ammo carl walks over to him but lee shows up with a chain saw they fight but carl punches him and knocks him out and takes the chainsaw

Fred: carl please this is not what Vanessa would have wanted carl I beg of you!

carl walks toward the house again while Fred cares for lee the teens see him and try to run out but carl stabs one slices another almost in two and stabs another in the back of the head carl looks around and starts getting angry because his house is rotting and he sees two helium tanks that were used to blow and other various decorations and sees dell running and starts chasing her around the house dell trips and carl grabs her and she blacks out

draik house midnight

Dell wakes up in her old room but she don’t remember it

Dell: where am I?

Carl walks in holding a dead teen

Dell: who ever you are don’t hurt me

Carl looks at her still holding the chainsaw

Carl: don’t you remember sis?

Dell : I am not your sister what are talking about?!

Carl: I see you don’t know because of my mask how stupid of me I just hope your ready

Dell: for what?

Carl: the face of the devil

Carl removes his mask

His face looks just like a rotted skull

Dell: oh my god!

Carl: trust me I love you sister can we still go shopping?

Dell spots the knife from 15 years ago she crawls backwards and manages to grab it and stabs carl through the jaw

Fred and Lee bust into the room(lee just now woke up) Fred is holding the other chainsaw

Carl rips the knife out of his jaw and puts on his mask and turns on his chainsaw

And they have a chainsaw fight(better than a swordfight)

A minute into the duel carl stabs Fred with the knife

Fred throws a 2 grenades at carl but they land in the hallway carl take the other 3 and also throws them in the hallway lee starts shooting him but carl grabs lee and starts choking him dell tries to run but carl grabs her and punches her in the stomach and stomps her back she coughs up blood

lee tackles carl dell manages to stand up and runs out the room carl starts to go after her but lee elbows him in the face then someone walks in carl hoped it was dell but it was-

Amy: hey f***face!

Carl turns around Amy drops the grenades with the corks pulled

Carl walks toward her

But Fred blocks him

Fred: Farwell my false friend

Kaboom!

Dell looks with relief

Dell: it over

But carl walks out on fire and walks toward her dell cant move her legs at all and carl stabs her in the leg

Carl: I’ll have to reschedule our shopping trip

And he falls over dead putting an end to the bloodiest killing spree America has ever seen…or is it truly the end?

Dell was put in a hospital where she is physically okay but not so lucky mental wise

Fred and Amy lived Amy has a few bruises and one scarred up leg Fred however has burns all over his body lee died how he dreamed out in a blaze of gory HAHAHAHA: )

And as for carl nobody wanted to give him a grave so they threw him in hell lake


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