Title Pending [Atheist\Vampire love story] ALTERNATE ENDING

"Am, you sure you want to do this now? We're not even sure if it'll work! I mean, it's only a theory of mine that anything even happened while I was blacked out... This could backfire horribly."
"I'm sure, c'mon, vampy!" Amethyst throws her arms around Raz and he smiles weakly, now unsure of his amazing plan. After all, like he said, he's not even sure if he's right. He thinks that while he was blacked out when he was turned, that he was dead for quite some time, because if you think about it, he had to die before he was "awakened" as a vampire. He's neverous about the whole idea now and isn't sure if he wants to go through with it. Amethyst begs and pleads, telling him that everything will be fine. She has no doubts at all about it. She thinks he can really pull off the scheme of faking her death and turning her in one blow. He on the other hand, is having many doubts. 'Please, please, please.' Amethyst silently chants to herself, knowing it won't make any difference anyway. "Ok..." Raz sighs and gives in. He takes her by the hand and goes out of the house, walking with her to her school, thinking that it's the best place. His fingers lace through hers and Amethyst smiles, squeezing his hand in return. Raz smiles too and tries to convince himself that everything will play out perfectly...

He takes her behind a large oak tree and pulls her close. He relishes the scent of her hair and the way she looks at him like he's not only the most perfect thing she's ever seen, but the only thing she has eyes for. He kisses her first and she surely doesn't object, her hands clasping behind his neck and kissing him back to her best ability. When they finally break apart, he lowers his mouth to her neck and she releases her hold on him to make it easier. He lays a small kiss on her main artery and his fangs slide from his gums without a sound. He lays them to the skin and lets them break it, making his love gasp at the sharp pain, and he sucks at the blood. She soon eases into it and smiles, now enjoying the pain... When his lips pull from her, she's faint and paler than normal. He takes her elbow to help her stay on her feet and gives her a half-smile. She smiles back and sways again, eyes fluttering and blood still dripping from her two wounds. He thinks about how his bled much more heavily than that and worries that he may not have done enough, but too scared to do more. She faints and he catches her quickly, laying her on the ground and checking her vitals... Her nonexistant vitals. His own heart stops for a moment and he curses himself, refusing to let himself think the worst as it tries and tries to push its way into his mind. He decides to go through with the rest of the plan and kisses her cheek quickly before he runs a blade across her neck, connecting the wounds and continuing past both to make it look as if her neck was slit, then he rushes off, for he must do this quickly before the change is complete and she awakens with different eyes and her vital signs return... If she's not dead that is. He curses himself again, knowing in his heart that she is indeed alive, after all, she has to be. He couldn't live another day without her, let alone an eternity...

Raz worries the whole time that the cut was a mistake, that that may kill Amethyst, but he continues on. He goes to a payphone on the corner next to the school and makes a call, disguising his voice even though noone would recognize it. He calls 9-1-1 and reports the seemingly dead girl, making his voice choke to show concern and fright. The dispatcher asks him to describe the scene and he does so, telling her where the body lies and how they better hurry and get an ambulance there immediately. The dispatcher informs him that there's already one on the way, along with some police. Raz hangs up quickly and goes to hide...
The ambulance arrives quickly and the whole school is abuzz but noone's allowed to leave. Raz is p*ssed, seeing some of the crying faces press themselves against the windows. The paramedics check Amethyst's vitals and pronounce her dead. The police then mark off the site and from what Raz can see, they take pictures, and write out reports and all that. When they're done, the ambulance whisks Amethyst away and Raz keeps hope in his heart that everything will continue to run smoothly.

He takes a shortcut through the forest, running his hardest, to reach the hospital. He arrives well after the ambulance and sneaks in, avoiding all personel that try and help him get to where he's trying. He can hardly ask them where the morgue is. Raz eventually finds it and sneaks down, hiding in one of the empty body refrigerators, sure that it won't be opened anytime soon. He listens to the sounds of footsteps coming down and his heart beats fast, if he had been a minute late, they would have found him. He confirms that the people are Amethyst's parents and the mortician when a man and woman start crying, though Raz thinks it's only partly real, and another man consoles them. The man doing the crying says in a shaky voice that is indeed their daughter, Amethyst. Raz silently begs for them to leave and when they do, he waits a minute before jumping out of his hiding spot and re-opening Amethyst's. She's still not breathing and her heart is still not beating... And, well, they've stripped her. Raz blushes even though there's a sheet covering her and picks her up, making sure the white blanket stays around her body, and he slips out the window with only a bit of difficulty. He goes straight to the forest and goes off the path to make his way home. He's not halfway there when Amethyst takes a deep breath and her heart starts again, her eyes flying open. The amethyst color is much more pronounced and she has the same silver sparkles in her eyes that Raz has. She looks up at him and then down at her wrapped body, wanting to almost cry. 'AHHHHHHH! He better not have seen anything!' She completely freaks out in her mind, extremely self-concious. Raz looks uncomfortable as well. "Would you like me to set you down?" Amethyst does not a thing, liking the feel of his arms secured around her but at the same time, she's not even really clothed. He sets her on her feet, helping her make sure that the sheet stays in place as he does so. Amethyst clutches the thing around herself tightly and walks close to Raz. She gets a bit worried when his eyes widen and he curses. Loudly. He kicks a tree and curses again, just as loud as the first time. Amethyst flinches. "What is it?" she asks urgently. Raz is fuming, he runs his hands through his hair and curses more quietly before answering. "I'm a f*cking idiot! They're going to wonder what the hell happened to your body!!!" Amethyst feels dizzy at the thought as her world crashes in on her. 'No...' She curses to herself as well and they continue to Raz's house. Raz is fuming mad at himself for overlooking the obvious. He sighs and wraps an arm around Amethyst's bare shoulders. She cuddles up to him as they walk and clutches her sheet around her cold body.
They reach his house and Raz rushes Amethyst inside. He makes her wait by the door as he closes all the blinds. When he's finished, Raz goes back to Amethyst and envelopes her in a hug. "I was so worried that I'd screw something up," he whispers. Amethyst lifts her head and puts her lips to his. Raz asks without words entrance to her mouth and she complies. Their kiss is deep and fierce. Amethyst starts to move her hand up Raz's chest, but doing so causes her sheet to slip. She goes to catch it but Raz grips her hand and lets the sheet fall a bit more. It almost exposes her chest, but Raz prevents it from doing so. They keep kissing, exploring every inch of eachother's mouths with rough passion. Raz walks backwards and keeps Amethyst close to him as he backs them into his room and closes the door.
Raz lets the sheet fall from Amethyst's body. She unbuttons and unzips his jeans before breaking their kiss to pull off his shirt. Raz moves forward, forcing Amethyst to back up until she reaches the bed, but Raz still continues to advance. Having not moved, Raz's body lines with Amethyst's and he kisses her neck, sucking lightly on the skin. He reaches out his hands and puts them to her shoulders, pushing gently to get her to lay back on the bed. She does so and he hovers over her on the sheets, smothering her neck in kisses. Amethyst closes her eyes and concentrates on his mouth on her cool flesh. She moans when he sinks his teeth into her, relishing the feel of his fangs sliding back into the puncture wounds they earlier made.
*hint, hint* *wink, wink* *nudge, nudge*
They lay entangled in the bedsheets, breathing starting to return to normal *cough* *cough*. Raz plays with Amethyst's hair absentmindly and she has a smile on her face, all snuggled up to him and for once in her life, glad to be alive. Because she's not going home, because Raz really does love her, and she him, because he keeps whispering in her ear that everything will be ok, that they'll move and change her last name so that noone finds her. After all, she's supposed to be dead in the morgue. Raz keeps planting random kisses on the various parts of her, her cheek, neck, unsuspecting lips, making her giggle. He holds onto her tightly and continues to whisper in her ear. Of how much he loves her and how he'll never let her go. She's his for eternity, and she couldn't be happier about it. "Raz, I swear, if there was a heaven, it would be right here with you."

They... They... Made love... o.o
AWWWW, YAY! *the whole love thing...*
She livez!!! =D
I like the other ending better ^.^ Die, die, die! Mwahahaha! >:]
I like THIS ONE better! ^.^
I STILL WANT HER WITH MARK!!!!!
*doesn't like story*
Yes, yes they did...
^.^ Yay
*scowlz* Yeah.
Me too! Mwahahahaha! >=]
Ok, glad ya liked.
WHY?!?! ANSWER THIS FOR ME!!!!! *message* [I want to know why there are a few people who love him so]
... ='( [jk]