Birthday Present-chapter 4-{Cash or Credit}
Chapter 3 : Birthday Present-chapter 2- {Captured}
here's the second one tell me what you think..thax..
I kneed 'Dent' were the sun don't shine. He grabbed himself and toppled over. I took my chance and ran down the dark street. I kept running till I thought I was out the sight, unfortunetly heard footsteps gradually getting faster behind me. I slipped quietly into a narrow dark alley hiden by a couple of shrubs.
"Dent I thought you said she went throug here"
"She did , just keep looking, she couldn't have gone far."
The shadows disappered, I waited a little then looked out, but didn't see anybody, so I came out the alley and walked in the other direction.
As soon as I crossed onto another street, car lights came up behind me. I tried to look back but the lights were to bright, so I started walking faster. The car stopped and I heard someone getting out and running full speed behind me.
I stopped running, ready to confront whoever the person was and turned around to see...nobody?? I turned back around and walked rite into... "By time I found you.." Dent said taking out his phone.
"Oh, I didn't know you missed me that much, I would've came back earlier." I said saracastically, which was a bad idea, since he slapped me right across my face. Shocked I stumbled backwards and fell to the ground.
"Yeah I got her...okay". Dent closed the phone. He pulled me up by my arm tight. "Remarks like that is gonna get you in a lot of trouble." He says throwing me in the back of the car.
I hurry and go for both doors, but the lock. I start banging on the window, crying that all this is happening to me.
Okay lets review: got thrown into a wall, my dad sold me, I got hit a second time, and captured.
I'm just not having a good day...
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