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I'm not good enough for you! Part 31 (Atemu quiz)

Hey all!! Wow, I just thought about it, this story has been going on for more than one year XD I started it on 9 February, 2007!!! I guess I'm really slow at updating, aren't I? -_-" Well then, no time to lose, time for writing the new part!! Here comes Part 31!! Enjoy! COMMENT: To play this, you will need to visit Josh's site. Simply click on the link: Music from josh.agarrado.net (After that, you could close it anytime), then you'll be able to play the music. ^-^ For the previous part -->

Created by Latemur on Sunday, April 27, 2008

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[Last time] ...the prophecy of... Destruction?" she asked, being shocked. "... yes and it predicted... when Ra is consumed by Hades, the god of the nether-world, the destruction of Egypt will be nearby..."

Simon's POV:
"Consumed by Hades, filled with human's blood... what's that suppose to mean?" she asked puzzled. "I don't know exactly, but... let us just hope it isn't supposed to be taken literally." you said, while sighing deeply. The more you thought about it, the more you got worried. But nothing occured in the last few weeks, so why am I worrying so much? As the memory of the beloved Queen dwelled inside of you, you just knew something more was going on. On the day she passed away, the sky was colored darkly red, like it was filled with human's blood. Moreover, on that very same day Ra became totally invisible for human's eyes for a couple of hours. Is there such a coincidence...

"Uhm... sir? Are you alright?" she asked you worriedly, staring at you with her innocent eyes. "Please, call me Simon." you said smiling. "Ok, sir Simon." Laughing you shook your head, as you heard a small chuckle leaving her mouth.

~ "You know, you somehow remind me of my daughter." ~
~ "Really? How old is she?" ~
~ "She's not here anymore..." ~
~ "Oh... I'm sorry." ~
~ "No, it's alright... We've talked for a while, but I don't even know how to call you." ~
~ "It's ~~~~~~, sir Simon." ~
She... she's the maid who Atemu fell in love with?! You almost jumped up out of shock, staring at her in disbelief. "You... you're ~~~~~~?" you asked. "Yes, I am sir, is there something wrong?" she asked you, still looking at you with her eyes filled with innocence...

Silence fell between the two of you, as you slowly calmed down. That's why she looked so familiar to me... then what she said earlier, about faith playing with them, did she mean Atemu? As you turned your head towards ~~~~~~, you saw her relaxingly lying down onto the soft, green grass. Closing her eyes she enjoyed herself, allowing Ra to warm up her skin. "It feels so good, so calm, so warm..." she suddenly said, but you were speechless. As she slowly opened her eyes once again, she sighed. "Flowers everywhere, leaves of the blossomtree flying freely by the wind, the sparkling sound of the fountain, the calmness... I'm going to miss them..." she said. You wanted to say something, your mouth opened, but no sound came out. She sat up and looked at you straight into the eyes smiling. "Here I received great memories, which I'll always cherish. They are all in here." she said closing her eyes, while putting a hand upon her chest. "Here inside my heart..."
breakline...
Your POV:
You've made up your mind. This is not a place for you to be. There are no other options but to leave. While packing your stuff, you looked up once again. Taking a few glances at your room, remembering every object in here. Each object holding an another memories of yours. You sat down upon your bed with your bag of stuff next to you. Stroking the blankets of your bed, caused more thoughts to raise up in your mind. With your eyes closed you layed down onto your bed, imagining Atemu lying next to you. You cuddled nearer to him. It's feels so calm, so warm... you thought. You felt him placing his arm around your shoulder, holding your tighter. You could hear his breathening right next you, as you saw him smiling at you. His deep violet eyes, just as mysterious, just as caring as ever. As you raised up your hand a little, trying to touch his face, Atemu disappeared. Tears started to fill your eyes, as you turned your head into the other direction, crying softly...

You ran into your bathroom, as your felt a feeling of illness raising up inside of you. As you stood there, you felt like throwing up, but somehow you couldn't. Breathening started to feel a lot more heavier than normal, as you tried to throw up again and again, as you failed again... and again. You fell down onto your knees, as you gasped for air. Slowly breathening in and out, the feeling of vomitting vanished eventually. What was that? you asked yourself...

Standing beside your bed, you took your bag of stuff from it. Looking around for the last time, you started to turn around. As you did, waves of light suddenly blinded your view! Your bag fell onto the ground, as you rubbed your eyes, only to see...
PRINCESS ANZU!!!
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"My... my princess." you suddenly stuttered, as you started to bow down for her. "Well, well, it seems you do know your place." princess Anzu said sarcastically. You raised up your head, after she said that. "Who ever told YOU to raise up your head, PEASANT!!!" she suddenly yelled at you. In shock you bowed down your head again, apologizing. You heard her footsteps coming nearer to you, as a small shiver run down your spin.

Suddenly you felt someone roughly grabbing your hair, raising up your head. Your eyes met the princess' eyes, as you stared at her in shock. "Princess..." you said desperately. Out of nowhere a flare of anger came all over her face, as she slapped you on your left cheek! "That'll teach you, PEASANT!!!" she yelled. While your left cheek was still turned at her, you touched the burning spot. Eyes filling with upcoming tears, you started to run passed her. Holding your left cheek, you grabbed your bag of stuff with your other hand. Without any look back at the princess, you had wanted to leave this place, just as fast as possible. But just as you where about to step over the doorstep, you felt princess Anzu pulling at you bag of stuff. You turned around, only to see her more angrier than before. Ruthfully she pulled at your bag of stuff, as you hold onto it, begging her to let go. "I command you to let go, WHORE!" she flared at you, while giving a harsh pull at your bag. It got torn, causing all your stuff to be scattered on the floor. "My rose!" you yelled, as you saw it hitting the ground. Stooping to pick it up, you saw princess Anzu cruelly stepping upon it. You looked at it with widened eyes, as you saw it being destroyed beneath princess Anzu's foot. Your tears started to roll down your cheek, as you saw her stamping upon it a few more times. Shooking your head, your knees hit the ground. Sitting there, you sobbed a little, as anger suddenly raise up inside of you. Princess Anzu laughed triomphantically, as she pointed at you. "Take that as lesson, girl, no one is going to take something or someone away from me, keep that in mind." she said. You clenched your fist, as you flared in anger. You stood up, looking her straight into the eyes. As your eyes started to get filled with anger and hatred, her eyes widened in shock. Clenching your fist tighter, you started to bite onto your lips. Slowly raising up your hand, you slapped her right into her face!!!

Anzu's POV:
You felt the burning mark on your left cheek, as you touched it with your hand. In shock you stood there motionless. You mind went blank for a moment, as you felt your cheek burning insanely. No one... No one ever dared to hit me... you thought. Hatred, anger and jealousy, all at once, consumed you. You grabbed ~~~~~~'s hair again and pulled at it. She yelled in pain, as a satisfying feeling started to boil up. As you saw her struggling to get free, you pulled harder at her hair, causing her to cry again. You threw her onto the ground, as you saw her head hitting the floor. The satisfying feeling increased once again...
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Atemu's POV:
While studying in your room, you read the papyrusrolls one by one. After having finished all of them, you put them back into your bookcase. Gliding your finger at the several papyrusrolls, you took out an another few to read. Placing them upon the table, a glim of Ra caught your eyes. Ra was setting already. A new day already... you thought, while stepping into your balcony. Sighing you leaned against the rails. Remembering ~~~~~~ closing her eyes, when she stood at her balcony, made you close your eyes aswell. Feeling the warmth of Ra on your skin, you took in a deep breath. Your eyes flipped open, as you felt a shot of pain inside your chest! With one hand clamping at the rails you managed to stay upon your feet. Grabbing at your chest, you felt it was getting heavier to breath. While clenching tighter at the rails, the pain inside your chest increased aswell. You still hadn't recovered completely from an illness you had before, but you didn't wanted to worry everyone. It had been happening a few times already, but this time... Falling onto your knees, you grabbed your chest tighter. Closing your eyes firmly, you felt the pain was only getting worse. You bit onto your lip, as you could almost feel your nails pinning into your chest. Your hand glided from the rails to the floor, as you opened your eyes a little. Holding even tighter onto your chest, you could feel your arms and legs starting to feel numb. Biting even harder onto your lips, your eyelids fell down once again. Suddenly you saw ~~~~~~'s image floating infront of you. Opening your eyes again, you muttered: "~~~~~~..."
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Your POV:
Princess Anzu threw you onto the floor, as you felt your head hitting the ground. Your view started to get a bit blurry. You felt like you were only half-consious. The sounds were getting slowed somehow and you could hardly move your body. You saw princess Anzu coming closer, as you used all your might to hit her again. She flinched by that, but you failed to touch her. You couldn't see her face, there was only a strange... thing... Your view was getting darker somehow, while your eyes were still open. You felt someone sitting upon you. As you tried to struggle, trying to push away the one who was sitting upon you, you felt someone pinning you down. You saw a glim of princess Anzu's face in your blurry state, as your hands were being hold firmly. Suddenly you felt something hitting your left cheek hard. How worse your view and hearing may be, but the burning feelings upon your cheek could be felt impressively well. Again you felt something hard hitting against your cheek, but this time your right one. With no way to fight back, nor any energy left to do so, you felt your head hitting the ground again and again, as the burning feeling on your cheeks remained. You opened your mouth, but couldn't make any sound. Suddenly you felt a shot of pain in your tummy or so. You don't know. Everything felt so numb, whether the pain was coming from your tummy or somewhere else, you can't tell, but it hurt. You're not sure anymore, whether it was like that or not. But you could hear yourself screaming as the shot of pain came. Then your legs felt wet somehow, as your view went darker and darker...
Well then, it's 2.53am here?! Ok, I'm going to sleep now. *yawns* Hope you enjoyed it, if you did, please let me know. Rate/Mssge That's all for today. Byebye!!!

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