Love doesn't Register (A Kevin Jonas love story)it sounds worse than it is. pt.21

Normal POV
You were about ready to smash your head into the wall, and let everyone watch it obliterate into a million pieces.This,this,was what you were going to live with for months on end.And if the band got big,years.Why,God,why?
-Hey,I'm Kevin.- your worst nightmare said to you with an innocent smile,after he finished consulting,or rather being flattered,with/by Robb.
-Coral.- you spat, with no respect at all,making a terrible attempt at a smile.That,of course,failed.
-And this is Neeka and Shelbi.- you pointed to each of your bandmates in turn,as you introduced them. They each gave small waves,and turned their heads back to the floor,in some unnecessary shame.
As soon as this happened the rest of the Jonas siblings gradually introduced themselves,and even shook hands on occasion.
After all papers were signed,and everyone applauded the new found band(s),Mike suggested we all go out to eat in honor of the occasion. Everyone happily agreed and hopped into some car that could hold twelve people.
The small road trip was mostly quiet,except for some minor small talk including Frank complimenting you on your hoodie,and The Great Debate on where to eat.
-Wendy's!- an unidentified voice called,but sounded strangely like Tre's.
-This is actually special,dumbass.Wendy's is not special.- Mike lightly hit Tre' upside the head.
-Perhaps HardRock?- you heard Gerard insist,you had to admit,it wasn't a bad idea.
-No,no,I've got it! Home Depot!- Tre' still,absent-mindedly shrilled.
-You guys are so ungentlemanny like.The girls should decide.- Bob felt like making up his own words today.
-Ungentalmanny? Honestly Bob,I thought you were a bit more sophisticated than that.- you heard Frank comment on Bob's poor grammar skills.
-Oh,let's just go with HardRock!- Neeka hightened her voice above all the rest,and the descion was made.We were going to eat at HardRock Cafe'.
I'm so sorry it's so short,I promise to make the next on REALLY long.But,seriously,anyone know how to make this story prettier?

Yeah,my arm is really tired for some strange unknown reason...