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Minutes in heaven or will it be hell (naruto shippuden)

warning some result are long and hard core along with pics. you have been told as well there is foul language, and well all that good stuff.

Created by TheMorner on Monday, December 03, 2007

"Oi Ne! _____ -chan. you look up to see Naruto coming up to you. you guys had just taken your exams and finally everyone had passed.
"Nani?"
"eh... I was wondering... the guys and the few girls that wanted anything to do with us are having a drinking party and some other stuff wanted to know if you want te come?"
"Yeah! sure!" you wanted any excuse to get away from your family unlike Sasuke or Naruto you didn't have the lugsury of avoidance or of their death or of never knowing them. And in truth you envied them both...
"Cool then see yeah there!" and he runs off.
But when you get there you find a problem, there are only two other girls there... Temari, and Sakura. 'Sheesh at least I'm not the only chick with the balls to show up to a drinking party!' you aare obviously not like the other girls you held your self up to higher expectations, because ever since you guys were younger all the girls were always obsessed with Sasuke and in truth you didn't care for him... that and your parents kept you locked away for so long that it nearly killed you.
As you looked around you saw a few of the akatsuki! Only a few but they were their even Sasuke was there. you almost vomit. "First of the drinking contest!" shouts Naruto and Chogi. They pull out a pack of beer. you can't help but laugh. (you have gone to heaver drinking parties before whit your dad.)
"Hey what the Fuck is so funny?!" they both yell. and you reach inot your bag and pull out two big bottle of rum...
"Look boys that shit will never get you drunk its no better then piss if you ask me a real man whit real balls drinks rum or whiskey." they stair at you incredulously. for you are just downing one of the bottles. "Ahhhh that's a real drink." you smirk at them several of the others jaws fall onto the floor.
"Y-you, you can't be serious...." Says Sakura.
"Yes i know i act like some high school boy got a problem whit it?"
(please don't be offended i act like this from time to time.)
"Cooool!" exclaims lee. you only glance over your shoulder as he looks for some whiskey and attempts to chug it but you soon find that lee does not have the stomic for it and winds up vomiting it all over the floor. you and kakashi-sensie only smirk.
"Hey! you two this isn't funny."
"Your right this is a sad excuse for a drinking party..." you say tosing the empty bottle over your shoulder it land on the floor spinning slowly.
"I know!" shouts the pink headed girl
"Huh?" you all say bored.
"Sevening minutes in heaven but with a bottle kinda like spin the bottle and 7 minute in heaven!'
"uh! ok..." you all agree and sit in a circle. you at this point have passed around the other bottle only the akatsuki and kakashi have the guts to take a swig. everyone else sticks to beer.
"Hey drunky..." you look at sasuke.
"What jackass."
Itachi grins at you, Sasuke scowls he doesn't like it when girl don't get upset at him and his beauty he's so pompous.
"Your first."
you shrug and give it a whirl.
it doesn't stop until one of them stops it (ooooooo witch one?)
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as fast as lightening something shoot out and stops it you look up to see whom it was facing. "fuck." Sakura looks upset at first but when she sees your dislike of him she seems to calm down. "Come on bitch!"
"fuck you ass hole i'd rather screw your brother then you!"
he sends you a black look. and you both walk to the closet.
the door shuts. though sasuke can't see it but you have your arms up and are getting ready to beat the shit out of him.
but he's fast and you feel your self pressed against the wall and he tries to kiss you.
"No!" wiht a blast of chakura you send him into the door he slides onto the ground and you notice that there are sparks beguining to fly from his hand...
"chidori" he whispers
"Yeah I've seen it to many times."
he jumps at you and right as diedra open the door you kick him in the chest his Chadori blowing out the back wall. he flies out past diedra and lands into the wall you come out brush your self off walk over to kakashi who currently has your rum and take it from him and go back and sit down and chug it.
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it lands on one of the akastuki members. you look up to see Sasori... you sigh knowing the most you can do is kiss. if even that you enter he sits down and sit beside him he kisses you one the cheek and you snuggle up closer to him you and he had been friends at one point... and neither of you had forgotten the first night you meant and you both truely were friends.. mainly due to you love of poisons and becuase you both were odd. "So is this all we do for the next seven minutes?"
"Well its all we really can do you don;t have any real parts." you say looking at the area were a pulge should be.
"Heh guess i'm not the same as when you met me."
"obviously." you had met him when he had a human body. it was as pretty as his doll one. but you liked organics rather then plastic...
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You and sakura look up she runs out of the room wailing something about no i wanted sasuke-kun
"Ew... who would want him... and ew to the first part too
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you look up its bushy brow... you look at him he looks at you... Gai slaps him on the back and he just winds up vomiting again... you fall over laughing at him.
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Temari looks at you she's no coward nor are you. "Yuri!" naruto and kakashi yell. Temari holds her fan there way getting ready to blow them to hell if necessary you have your poisons out ready to kill them. you stand and go into the closet and sit and wait.
"So what you wanna do?" you ask
she pulls out some light and cards.
"Poker?"
"Sure and you found you two are very good friends and both hate the younger uchiha bastard. when the door opens all the boys groan as they see the cards and the light. you smile at them and she says "What boys disapointed?"
"Of course they are we arn't naked and we aren't fucking each other senseless
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you see sand delacatly stroaking you hand. you look up and say Garra he looked passive. nothing more but you could tell he was worried and maybe frightened. you grab some of the sand and stand. walking elegantly everyone stared.
"Oh! Gaara-chu! come on!" he smiled on enough for you to see and he stood and fallowed you into the closet and the door shut.
"If you're only doing what you did that to make me feel better thank you but i know you don't care."
"But i do... i love you gaara..." you wlk over and fiddle wiht his hair a bit. he tried to pull away but you held you grabbed his arm and he looked up. Remember when you died everyone was terrified every one even me..." something like this coming from you was very strange. "But it's up to you." you kissed his for head and leaned back against the wall. suddenly you felt the sand in your hand beguines to squirm you let it go slowly it floats up and then goes back to Gaara. he had come unnaturaly close to your face.
"Na---
but before you could finishe he pressed his lips lightly on yours , you kiss him back you soon felt him licking at your lip you opened your mouth to give him passage the kiss grew more and more heated as it went and niether on of you noticed the time or the amount of air you were losing when you broke he slid on top of you and you to the floor both panting i looked up at you and began to stroke your hair with his feverish hand. you only groaned when he axcedently pulled on it and soon his other hand slowly almost unsure worked up under your fish net shirt and bra.
then he paused "T ell me if i go to far..." he mumbled lifting the netting up and he began to lick and nip at you chest avoiding your boobs for now. you sighed comfortably. you had never had anyone touch you at least not in a loving and affection showing manner it had always been slaps from your father and you avoided your mother and fights that was all there was. that was all you knew and he more or less the same thing. Afte r abit you began to play wiht his hair kissing it trockking it when he looked up he pulled his self slowly up you and kissed you again and you fought back this time for dominance. it was a thing you had due to your father's contorting temper you did not like to let the boy have it easy. he grunnted when you flipped him to his back still kissing and wiht a loud thud he rolled oyu back over. you growled deeply into his ear he looked at your neck and bit it. but before you could get much further you both froze.
"Someone's comeing." he said still wiht a bit of your neck in between his teeth. you nodded and jumped off of him and re adressed you clothes and hair he did the same.
"Is that all this game is for?" he asked a little for lorned you had moved so quickly when you realized they were coming.
"No this was NOT a one time thing you say winking helping him up. and re doing his now sexitized hair.
"uh ok?" he was still confused and then you both sat and acted as though you had only been talking the whole time. Konkuro looked from you two his baby bro and grinned Gaara's pale skin was flushed. and you had not completely gotten you top fixed in the darkness. but by the time you re entered the circle you both looked as though nothing had happened you were handed some whisky apparently Gai and lee went and got some for you, you chugged the whole thing in under a minute, and yawned waiting for it to be someone elses turn but you noticed htere were the other two girls left. thats when you noticed they were all all but gaara that is staring at you as if you were a prize. the night went on and it turned into a more of a drinking contest then the 7 minute of heaven but, as they became less and less sober they all began to hit on you tring to get you to go some where though due to your nature you didn't show how much you just wanted to crawl over to your new lover and be wiht him he wasn't drinking much.
"Hey! why don't we go back to my place for some fun! un!" said diedra who could barely walk. you bared your teeth
"No diedra your drunk, and no!"
"Awwwww come one now dun be fussy!" he reached out to grab you when i giant wall of sand flew in between you and his hand. you looked over to gaara who had only batted an eye to cuase it. and he said "Diedra you killed me once you won't do it again and you won't be touching her!" he snarled.
"You punch threw the wall into his face sending him across the bar causing a bar fight at which point you and the Kazekage sneak off to finish what had begun...
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you felt red eyes pierce you body and for a minute you thought it was sasuke. but it was his dark elder brother Itatchi. he grinned it made you shiver whit excitement. you didn't care hsound it made your own body tremble.ow fucking evil he was, cause he was just too good to real to be so. you fallowed him into the closet the door shuts you emiditally find your mouth ravished and you body frozen you moan lightly into his mouth and he pushs harder you could feel the balge in his pants next to your own sex. you move your hand down slowly into his pants and run a delicate fingure over his erection. he shivers and his kissturns into a near bite.
"Little feisty tonight aren't we?" you mummer sadistically as you once again stroke his erection a bit harder. he shakes and moans. it was load there was no dought no body missed that.
"Y-yes and you make it hard to contr---"
you grab his erection and stick two of your nails into it he bites down on your lip drawing blood.
":Less talk more play."
"heh you can controle me!"
"Wanna bet me..." you reach a bit further and pull uo slowly he damn near melts ontop of you.
he grabs you hand and yanks it out of his pants.
"That's cheating..."
"Not by my book besides if i remeber right that's your job."
"Heheh" this time one hand goes up your shirt and the other starts to undue your pants. he undoes his just as fast and then he goes back to forcfuly doing well at this point nearly everything to you and oyu let out a moan of pleasure... "I-itachi..."
"Yes little one?"
"This isn't for one night r-right?"
"I think not i can't let brother get near you he like you ye know. "
"Yeah... w-well i hate him!"
"Thats good to know. thi goes on for a bit more but after a while the two of you stop he andsits down and you lay beside him curled up like a puppy he lays his claok over you stroking you gently you let out a purr almost and he smiles. as the door opens its none other then sasuke. he sees you and his brother, you were awake now and you look at him, glaring.
"Hey fucker shut the door your letting in a draft."
"Yes little brother you herd what she said. you would be wize to do it too if you don;t want to loose some thing else thats presious to you." suddenly you feel a kunai against your throat. sasuke lanches at you and him your up even though not dressed or well not dress very well and freeze Sasuke and then give him a round house kick sending him flying back out of the closet. into the wall on the other side.
you and itatchi walk out you still wiht his cloak and curl back up in a a dog like form resting you head on his knee.
"You know _____ you really are playing wiht fire."
"I like the burn... is all you say...
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"Hehehehehehe" you hear someone giggle it sounded like..." come on lets go un!" Diedra grams you by th arm and drags you off whit him. as soon as the door shuts he starts to laugh.
"Nani?"
"itatchi he's gonna be so pissed i got you instead of him! un!"
"uh oh... you feel a bit put off by the lack of care he seems to show for you but then as you think about it it doesn't bother you this was clost quarters he can't fight very well like this and his bombs won't work. you snicker
"huh?"
"well if we're here and you want to piss Itatchi off there is either two reasons you DO want me or you just don't like him?" you had crawled up to diedra striking you sluttiest pose, exposing you breasts very well in the dim light.
"Eh! uh! I uh!" noticing his sudden surprise you take advantage and kiss him he suddenly kisses you back as ravonously as you wanted him to. slowly his hair come undon and you undid his clothes and he yours, you could feel his bar skin on you and his hard torso resting about yours he only kept the cloak on for when someone opened the door. he bit at you from shoulder up to you mouth you run your leg inbetween his erection and he shivers. and bits you ear drawing blood.
"Do you plan on eating me?" you ask.
"Beauty is only ment to last for a ecound and then to be gone." he chuckled and so did you. this went on for a while both of you drew small amounts of blood from the other but niether cared you both were enjoying your selves to much to revel in the pain well you both enjoyed it the pain and the plesure finally he lowers he erection to meet you, you gave a bit of a buck and he jolted too but nothing else you both had been moaning and groaning in you engrossment when the door opened you both frost looked Diedra kicked it back shut right on Itachi's face and you two continued what you were doing.
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IT LANDS ON GAI! you blow on it so it lands on Kaashi-sensei instead. "You know thats cheating." he says with out looking up form his book
"Your point being the damn bottle landed on you, so get you ass moving!"
he dad as was told he knew your temperament and you knew he was afraid of it. in truth you didn't plan on anything. but as long as you went trapped ina room wiht gai for seven minute by your self it would be better to have kakashi read his book and you sit there and do nothing for seven minutes then listen to Gai's speach about youth. but as you shut the door. you hear Gai mumble "Stupid rival..."
as the door shut kakashi sits down and fold his arms behind his head.
"So ____ why did you really want me?"
"I didn't i just didn't want Gai..."
"oh can try an make you want me?"
"Try it i dare ye'"
ans he did
suddenly you found yourself on the floor being kissed very deeply wiht all the love in the world in it. you almost died your heart ws beating so hard you never expected he was capable of this but then again you never felt THIS before.
he broke the kiss and started down your chin line. you moaned as he reached you neck on arms went up your shirt drawing circles over your breasts and stomach. you leaned for ward and kissed his forehead he looked up and kissed you again,
but all of the sudden. the door opened and you found your self out just sititng there as before nothing had changed.
AS you walked out he slipped you a note. it read. "If you really want that meet me at the entrance to the village after the party."
he whinked at you and went back to his book and so you met him that night.
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"Hahaha believe it!" you look up
"Damn it..."
"Hehe." he grins dragging you off to the closet. you didn't bother to escape you'd just hurt him if he tried anything.
the door shut...
"Hey ____ wanna sneak out and screw up sasuke's place?"
"Hehe hell yeah!"
the two of you do so and when the door is opened nobody's home home though when sasuke does get home he screams "Naruto!!!!!!!!!! ___________!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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