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I'm not good enough for you! Part 12 (Atemu quiz)

Time to write again!! Thanks a lot for the messages! ^-^ You're great!! For those who doesn't know Yu-Gi-Oh! that well. There are seven millenium Items. Each Sacred guardian and the Pharaoh is wearing one of them. Isis is wearing an millenium necklace. This powerful item can show her visions either of the future or the past. Well then, enjoy!

Created by Latemur on Friday, June 15, 2007

[Last time]...slowly Atemu pulled back from the kiss. You opened your eyes and directly you stared into his beautiful eyes. You gave him a shy smile...

Beginning with Pharaoh Akunumkanon's POV:
"I've a strong feeling that our young prince really cares about this girl." Simon, your sacred guardian said. "At least, we know he's alright." your wife, the Queen said relieved. Her eyes were still a bit red due to the crying. She was so worried about Atemu and frankly you were, too. Somehow, tears began to stream down her cheek. Gently you took her face into your hands and kissed her forehead. "Take some rest." you said to her. Then she left the room. "My Pharaoh?" Akunadin, an another sacred guardian, said. "Yes, Akunadin." you responded. "Why didn't you eliminate this girl today? It was the perfect time, no one would know." he said to you.

~ "Yes no one, except for my son, Atemu." ~
~ "But, Pharaoh..." ~
~ "All of us have seen him today, Akunadin. When he came in, the first thing he said to me was: Father, I won't let you do this!" ~
~ "But if the girl's dead, he would forget this girl." ~
~ "I doubt it. I know my son. You weren't there Akunadin... but he had claimed to go with her, if we'd kill that girl." ~
~ "Did the prince really..." ~

"Yes," you sighed, "he did." You've no idea what to do now. You really don't want your son to marry a maid. That'll be the most embarassing thing to do. A royal prince marries a slave. What will the citizen think about it? Atemu's prestige will certainly decrease, when he becomes King one day. You may not let this happen. Afterall, princess Anzu will be arriving shortly. She will be Atemu's prospective wife. Not only would that be no harm for Atemu's prestige, but it will also cause Ethiopia and Egypt to unite. Then this great kingdom will belong to Atemu. Once it's united, people in Egypt as in Ethiopia will be able to live in peace. An engagement for Atemu with princess Anzu will be a perfect couple. But there's still that maid... you thought.
"Isn't there any solution for this?" you angrily asked your sacred guardians. They looked at each other desperately, until Karim, an another sacred guardian, spoke: "Well, there may be a solution to this." You looked up at Karim, urging him to continue. "Her aim must be getting her hand on the wealth of our country. So, if we make her a deal, perhaps she will leave the prince alone. We could send her away from Cairo, after she had received the agreed sum." You thought about it. Will that work? If she is really going to accept the agreed sum, then Atemu will see that she's just after our wealth. Then Atemu won't let her stay in the palace himself. He would certainly send her away. Yes, this may be the perfect plan! you thought. "This might work." you said to Karim. Then Karim bowed to you. "But what if she doesn't accept our offer?" Akunadin said to you. You looked at him, thinking he may got a point. "You mean, if the girl really loves our prince?" Isis, an another sacred guardian, asked. "No of course not! She's a slave, we all know what they think. They just want to become wealthy, that's all!" Akunadin told Isis. You looked at their conversation. What should I do?"
# I Love Atemu for who he is, not for his money!!
# The money is all I need
# What are they going to do to me!!
# For those, who doesn't know Yu-Gi-Oh! that well, plz read memo. There you could find some information about the sacred guardians. Otherwise you may get lost in this next paragraph...

Isis's POV:

You were one of the most trusted sacred guardian of the Pharaoh. "...we all know what they think. They just want to become wealthy, that's all!" Akunadin told you. You stared at the ground. Even if this girl really loves our prince for who he is, nobody will let them, you thought. You had a strong feeling that this girl isn't like the others. She seems to be a quite innocent girl and your instincts have never let you down before. You looked at Akunadin, who was trying to convince the Pharaoh for this girl is a threat and must be eliminated. You closed your eyes for a while. Suddenly you received a vision from your millenium necklace!

[Vision start]It was a black-and-white vision. You saw everyone; the Pharaoh, the Prince, the sacred guardians, a lot of maids... and the Queen!! The Queen was weakly lying on her bed and was holding the prince's hand. Her mouth was moving, but you couldn't hear. Tears were streaming down everyone's cheek, then everthing turned black. Suddenly there was a small glim of light appearing out of nowhere. You looked at it, but then the light turned into an evil eye! You stared at it in shock. But then there was a power absorbing your soul into the evil eye. You felt you soul being seperated from your body. You got dragged into it, then darkness consumed you once again. The floor beneath you dissapeared, causing you to fall down into a pit of unknowness. Suddenly a strange image appeared beneath you. Your fall got stopped somehow and you gasped. You saw thousands of soldiers standing opposite each other. The image was blurry...[End Vision]

"Aah.." you said, while you're getting a bit dizzy. "Isis, are you alright?" Simon asked you. Then all the attention got turned to you. "Yes, Isis, is everything alright?" the Pharaoh asked you. You looked at the Pharaoh and bowed to me. "Thank you, my Pharaoh, I'm alright. I'm just a bit tired, I guess." You didn't feel like to share your vision to anyone right now, since it's not clear for what it meant. Everyone has enough on their mind already. You would tell them when the time is right. "You've a long trip ahead, Isis. You're going to the border to help the patients there. Are you sure you're able to handle it in your condition? Perhaps one of us, should go instead of you." Simon said worried. You looked at him thankfully, but refused his offer. "I'll be fine, don't worry." you said.

You were heading to your bedroom, when there was a maid blocking your way. "Miss Isis, plz may I ask you a favour." the maid suddenly asked you. You looked at her puzzled, but spoke.

~ "Well, if it is in my power to do so. What kind of favour do you mean?" ~
~ "I... I'm Sandy. I really want to join miss Isis to the border in order to help." ~
~ "Why would you like to do that?" ~
~ "Because...? Because I... I want to see more of Egypt. I've never been far away before." ~
~ "You realize that this will be hard trip and it's not for fun." ~
~ "I do, miss Isis." ~
~ "...hmmm... alright then, the day after tomorrow, when Ra is at his highest position, come to my room. We'll leave that night." ~
~ "Thank you so much, miss Isis." ~

# Sandy??? Why is she doing that??
# Isis seems nice..
# Why is SANDY LEAVING ME!!

Your POV:

You were running away from Atemu, who was chasing after you. "You'll never catch me!" you yelled at Atemu, who seems to be miles behind. Atemu was chasing you all the way through the palace, while both of you were laughing all the way. He almost caught you, but then you ran a circle around a tree. Atemu followed you and in the end he managed to grab your arm. He pulled closer to him, holding you in his arms. The only thing you could think of is how charming Atemu actually is. He looked at you smiling, causing you to melt from the inside. You swinged your arms around his neck and gave him a quick kiss on his lips. "Is that all?" he asked you playfully. Then he pushed his lips against yours, kissing you passionately. You kissed him back and the kiss became more fierceful. He nibbled on your bottom lip and you let him in. You were fighting each others tongues, till you forteited the match. Atemu made his way down your neck. Softly he kissed it, while his hands were moving under your clothes, stroking your back gently. He found a sensitive spot on the bottom of your back. Playfully he stroke it softly again and again, while he continued to kiss your neck. You moaned due to that, which seemed to please him. You hold your hands in his hair, while you're beginning to moan louder.
# Ieuww... stay away from me you creep! (Me: you do realize this is an Atemu-quiz??)
# LEMON!! LEMON!! LEMON!! (Me: someone is excited... lol, alright I'll grant your wish)
# no comment *too busy with Atemu*
So, the next quiz will be a LEMON. Don't worry, if you don't like to read it, it's ok. You won't miss anything. This wasn't a very long quiz, coz I have to cut it here, for those who don't like LEMONs. Thanks for the long waiting. I'll be seeing you soon!
Are you leaving this soon?
# I've waited this damn LONG and this is how you repay ME?!?! SUCH SHORT QUIZ!!! (Me:I... uhm.. I'll start the next quiz right away)
# *rate and message*
< -- Just find it funny.
*note: it's not mine, neither do I know whose it from. So whoever it's from, srry haven't given you credit. I just grabbed it from the internet, I think... can't remember. Whoever it's from: IT'S REALLY CUTE!


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Well, next quiz will be a LEMON. You really don't have to read it, if you don't like these things. You won't miss anything. Thanks again for the long waiting, I know I haven't update for a long while. Well then, plz *rate and message* ^-^
(Edit 14-09-08: part 13 has been removed from Quizilla, so you won't find it anymore. But if you would like to read it anyway, feel free to message me and give me your emailadress, I'll send you the saved copy of it, so you'll be able to read it anyway. Part 13 isn't really relevant to the story, so even without reading it, you won't miss anything of the storyline actually. Thank you for reading ~Latemur)


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