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I'm not good enough for you! Part 5 (Atemu quiz)

(edited 12th June 2008: memo is placed below)

Created by Latemur on Friday, March 30, 2007

IMPORTANT MEMO:


In the first and second paragragh, there states: 'that day'. This is related to the very first day, when you and Sandy arrived here. Remember it? Innkanaka whipped you both and both of you fainted afterwards? If you don't, read this to refresh mind --> I'm not good enough for you! Part 1
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[Last time]...the old woman is safe, you thought. And that's all thanks to him. Ra has went down the horizon and the sky went darker by each second that passed by. You leaned down against a pillar. It was getting colder. You closed your eyes for a while, thinking about him. After a while you fell asleep...


Starting with your POV:

[Dream]"Where am I?" you asked. You looked around, but all you could see was darkness. There was no sign of light to be found...
Suddenly a small glim of light appeared and caught your eyes. Slowly the light turned into an image of the back of a person. The person only stood a few feets away from you. The image may be quite vague,but you could identifice this person immediately.
"Dad!!" you yelled. You saw his head turning around to face you. He smiles and with his right hand he waves to you. Tears stream down your smooth skin, while you run to him. But each time you did, he only seemed to get more far away. Just out of your reach, no matter how hard you try to get to him. Then you struckled somehow and fell to the ground. You looked up, finding the image get vaguer. And slowly your father dissapeared into the darkness...[End Dream]

You got dragged out the darkness by a soft voice which is calling out to you. "~~~~~, wake up. Come on, ~~~~~."
Slowly you opened your eyes. Sandy was holding a white blanket in her hands, while she placed it upon you. "Come on. Wake up, you sleepyhead." Sandy said, while she smiled to you. It was dark, so apparently it's still midnight. You had fallen asleep... again, you sighed. "What's wrong, ~~~~~? Why do you sigh?" Sandy asked, while she placed herself next to you. "It's just, I remember now, I was cleaning the pillars." you said. You looked to the another end of the corridor and it was obvious; there's still a lot to do and it's not too long before Ra rises. If Innkana knows that you're not finished yet, well, you don't even know what kind of punishment you'll get from her this time... Then it almost seemed like Sandy could read your thoughts. She stood up, took the cloth out of the jar and started to clean the pillars. Quickly you stood up yourself and grabbed Sandy's hand, preventing her to do this.

~ "Sandy, what are you doing? If Innkanaka gets to know this, you'll get punished!" ~
~ "Maybe, but there's no way I let Innkanaka punish you, again." ~
~ "No, I won't let you do this." ~
~ "We're friends aren't we?" ~
~ "Yes, of course, but..." ~
~ "Then let me do what I got to do... as a friend." ~

~Few hours later~
Ra has already risen and the sky has begun to color itself. Finally, you're finished; all the pillars are cleaned. The two of you sat down and looked at the sky. It's really beautiful...
"Sandy? How did you know I was here?" you asked. "I heard it from the other maids, so I searched down the corridors to find you. Ohh.. I totally forgot!! Do you remember 'that day'?" Sandy suddenly asked you. "Yes, of course." your answered. "Well, the prince was the one who saved us 'that day'!"

# The PRINCE!! You mean: ATEMU!! (Me: yupz... I told ya he would be in the story sooner than you think, didn't I ^^)
# I hope to be friends with Sandy forever!! (Me: agreed)
# I wonder when I'm going to dream about Atemu *dreaming eyes* (Me: LOL, you just got a nightmare.. and you're thinking about Atemu?? And btw... you don't even know him yet.)
# I love Sandy! (Me: me too, but I love Atemu even more)

Sandy's POV:

[Flashback]You slipped, due to the wet floor. Then two strong arms came around your waist, breaking your fall. "My lady, are you hurt?" he asked you. Then all the maids and slaves kneeled before you two. You heard them say: "My prince..."
"M..my prince?!?" you stuttered. The prince just simpily smiled to you, while he released you. "No need for the royalpoliteness." the prince said. Your eyes blinked for a moment. You've never thought that the prince would be this charmant and... this kind to his servants! Suddenly you noticed the prince was staring at you all the time. You blushed by it and while looking straight to the ground, you: "Uhmm.. is there something wrong, my prince?" "Sorry for my rudeness. It's just, I finally remember when I've seen you before. "You're quite new here, right?"[End Flashback]


"After that, we made a walk in the royalgarden. He asked me my name and other stuff. I tell you, he's definitely not some arrogant brat like we had suspected him to be. In my opinion, he will be the greatest ruler ever. I mean, come on, did you've ever seen a prince being this nice to his servants?" you said enthousiastically. It was obvious that ~~~~~ still has her doubts. She has always hated the royal bloods, because in her opnion they're just selfish-brats. Even though ~~~~~ has never really said that, but you're sure she thinks that way. But you're also sure if ~~~~~ got to know the prince herself, she'll definitely change her attitude towards the royal bloods. There's no doubt, you thought.
"You know, ~~~~~, I think I..."

# ... she thinks, she what??? (Me: you'll find out later)
# hmm... maybe the prince isn't that bad afterall... (Me: in the story you hate the royal bloods, right now)
# WHO WILL HATE SOMEONE, SUCH AS CUTIE!! MY ATEMU!! (Me: uhm.. you)

Your POV:

It's already late in the afternoon and Innkanaka hasn't come to punish you at all! You're glad to have a good friend like Sandy. If it wasn't for her; probably you were still cleaning the pillars and after you had finished it, you would have had an another punishment from Innkanaka awaiting for you. It's so great to know that I'm not alone, you thought. Sandy will be always there for you, no matter what.

It's getting late and you're getting a bit tired. Afterall, you haven't slept for days already. You're walking in the royalgarden, heading to your bedroom, well as far as you could call it a 'bedroom'. It's just a small place, where you and other maids sleep at night. There aren't even beds!

You looked around you. The royalgarden is full of flowers. It's really beautiful...
Suddenly, everything begins to get vague. You rubbed your eyes, but it didn't bother. Everything remained that way; vague and unrecognizable. Then you closed your eyes for a while, hoping for this will do the trick. Slowly you opened your eyes once again, only to find it getting worse! "Why is everything spinning around here?" you ask. Your head hurts and slowly you were losing your consciousness. But before you passed out, you swore you felt that someone catched you, holding you in his arms.

# Who's that?? It's 'that guy' right? The one I fell in love with... (Me: Perhaps...)
# ATEMU!!! (Me: Perhaps...)
# SANDY!! (Me: uhm..you do realize she's a girl right?)
# The PHARAOH! AKUNUMKANON!! (Me: Perhaps...)
# KARIM!!!! (Me: ...*drops head*)

Sandy's POV:

Pharaoh Akunumkanon will return from Ethiopia tomorrow. After years of war between these two countries, they've decided to make peace with one an another. So Pharao Akunumkanon went to Ethiopia for the peace agreement. He succesfully signed this agreement, so the Egyptian citizens can finally live in peace. In order to celebrate this, a great feast has been organised. All the citizens living in Cairo are invited, along with other noble families and families of royal descents from other countries. Princesess of each country will be here. There was a rumour going through the palace about prince Atemu. Not only was this feast meant to celebrate the peace in land, but this was also the best opportunity for the young prince to chose his propective wife. I hope it's just rumour and nothing more..., you thought.

The whole palace was upside down. Everywhere were maids and slaves preparing the feast, running from one side to the another. Everyone was occupied with the feast. And you were no exception. While you walked through the corridors, on your way to the well, you heard a familiar voice. It was late in the night already and to your suprise there was one room, which was still lighted up. Due to your curiosity, you walked closer by. The door wasn't closed properly, so you could look inside. Now you remembered; It's the voice of prince Atemu!

Prince Atemu was standing in the room, talking with someone. You heard them say:

~ "But Shimon, I can't get her out of my mind. Each time I close my eyes, I see her image floating in front of me all the time. I'm even dreaming about her!" ~
~ "But my prince..." ~
~ "I could remember our first meeting, like it was yesterday. Although we hadn't really introduced ourselves back then, but I remembered that time she got beaten by Innkanaka. And that time... the time she fell to the ground and I held her in my arms..." ~
~ "But my prince, you know as well as I do that this is not allowed. She's just a maid, a girl of the lowest class." ~
~ "I know, but..." ~
~ "My prince, you're supposed to marry a princess, you know that." ~
~ "I know Shimon, but I can't help it. I can't cotrol it." ~
~ My Prince, please. At least, wait till the Pharaoh has returned." ~
~ "Very well..." ~

A maid?? The maid was beaten by Innkanaka and he held 'the maid' in his arms..., you thought. You smiled to that, it's obvious enough. He means me, me Sandy! you thought, while you happily frisked through the corridors, still on your way to the well...

# I'm SO HAPPY FOR SANDY!!
# HEY what about me!! I LOVE ATEMU!!
# NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh well, whatcha gonna do? You're the one who hates the royal bloods, and Sandy is the one who loves them, especially the prince Atemu. Will you be the one who destroys the relationships between the prince and your best friend. Or will you let Sandy love the one she love? Friends forever, that was the quote. But will this last long enough? And who's that mysterious guy who always shows up, when you're in a tight spot. Is it just faith or ... is there more going on? Confused already?

Well, I'm taking my leave now, so BYEBYE*rate and message!*

#You're confusing me! Me and her.. her and me... him and me... or me and him??????
#I can't wait till your next quiz!! (Me: thanks^-^)
#*rushes to rate and message* (Me: ^-^)

Well, it's late right now... to be exact: 4:09h AM...well, I'm getting sleepy now. So I'll make this short. I want to once again thank everyone who had rated and meassaged me. I really appreciate. And it encourages me to continue the story. Thanks for sticking with me for so long, I hope ya like the story for so far. Of course tips are always welcome, so feel free to message me anytime. Ok, I'm taking my leave -->
*RATES AND MESSAGES*


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