~Outsiders~ part 8 [both]

When Pony an I left work today we walked home as we always do. but from a far distance I heard someone screaming
"CONNER! TWO-BIT!! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP..!!" I herad a womens voice screaming. I started turning in all directions. Pony wuz 3 feet ahead and he turned around looking at me odd . he tilted his head at me "whut's wrong?" he asked all puzled like. I started seeing a red blur fall around me and then I heard a gun go off I looked at Pony he wuz on the ground his leg wuz shot I screamed "pony!" I got beside him he wuz crying I ripped my shirt and wrapped it around his calve and tightined it. I started bawling. then The scream came back and I ran to the ally to find Rachel being raped I tryed to save her and King got shot. I screamed and Rachel did too. right in the head. I bawled and since I couldn't help her. I ran to Ponyboy. and I couldn't see where we are going and I picked him up and I heard more bullet shots and a struk of pain hit my lower left side of my back but I kept running. I finally reached the hospital and Pony wuz sent to the emergancy room then I heard a women right behind me scream " hes bleeding omg look at the blood!" then a bullet I felt go through the back of my head. and I never got to see my life flash through my eyes. and something wuz giving me a pain in my head and I last saw the nurse die and here I am lying on the ground dead.

OMFG !! WTF JUST HAPPEND!!
:.< *you: starts to cry*
"AAAHHHHH....OH MY GOD!!! NNOOO ONYBOY!! RACHEL!!! AHHHH!! DON'T DIE!!!! AAAHHHH" I screamed in agony. Ponyboy shook me. and yelled "WAKE UP CONNER!! WAKE UP IT'S ONLY A DREAM!!" Darry and soda came in Pony ran out I heard all the voices and every thing King came in and wuz on the ground tilting his head at us and pony poured water on my face .
My eyes hurt and my face wuz red and I felt tears running down my face I reached out to who ever wuz there whitch happend to be Darry and I hugged him. and he finally hugged back and Soda and pony joined too and we all were hugging. 10 mins l8r Two-Bit hollered and walked in and then "hey its too quiet!" he runs into my room first and he just staring at us. Darry stops the hug and looked me in the eye and hestitatedly walked backward and pushed two-bit away from the doorway and walked downstairs and two-bit followed. and soda looked at pony, pony looked at me I looked at soda.and we all just started to walk away I stay there. I had a terrible feeling in my stoach which made me not eat. and we did our normal rutein school. homework. and work. today when we got to work the boss came to us and sed if you don't start worrking more you wont get paid and you wont have a job here anymore! letcher. whut ever and when me and pony took our break my stomach didn't feel right like something wuz gunna happen. something bad. then after break I had a weird feeling and the voice came back and I heard it. first I didn't reconize it you know from my dream and then I turned around thinking Noo pony boy King I can stop this. I turned to Ponyboy and he wuz standing there and I pushed him outta the way and threw him onto the ground in frount of a slanting ally way and !BANG! I screamed "Get King and go get the gang you can run faster!" he looked at me and called king and ran. I turned to the ally way where Rachel wuz! I pulled out Two-Bits switch I pick pocketed and then stabed the guy in the back who I knew had the Heater and he dropped to the ground he wuz gunna make it I just took his gun and pointed it at every guy there and they droped Rachel I heard the guy scream ing and I shot at the ground next to there feet until there wuz no bullets and then the fight began I punched them all once untill they came back for more the guy on the ground grabbed the switch blade on the ground I stupidly dropped and !WAM!! right in my leg I didn't notice. I kept fighting and soon they all fled I wuz torn and bleedin and almost out I started going back and fourth falling to the ground acciedently knocking the knief in even more which made me close my eyes ....and I wuz out.
whoa...
*sound : beep beep beep beep and footsteps a few voices like writing down on a piece of paper and a bright light shining in your eyes* seems blury.
"am am Am I dead?" I sed seeing more clearly now. I see Two-Bit, Dally, Steve, Soda, Johnny,Pony and Darry who wuz right next to meh. and someone who wuz in the very back I couldn't see very well. it looked like a girl. that looked beat up. I closed my eyes and cryed a little .
"Rachel?!" I shouted and I sounded in pain like I did that one day when I cryed for hours but this one much wose. the whole gangs eyes were wide. I gasped for air and the beeping got a tad bit faster. my eyes were Red and tears rolled down my face and then the pain from my wounds hit and I just Bawled you know with a little screaming in pain and the thoughts of your loved ones gone.Darry gets up and pulls a random doctor in and 3 mins l8r I wuz numb and I heard people talking and then I felt tired and heard a voice. a soft voice like angel sounding.
"Conner it'll be ok." I heard. then I wuz out.
whoa you say well read on!! gtg l8r.