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dogtown:the place of concrete waves 3

ok heres part 3..ENJOY :D

Created by vitoluver43 on Sunday, March 26, 2006

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."You know you liked it."he says..your about to smack him when another boy comes out."T.A Bro leave her alone!"The boy(T.A) turns to the other guy,"Screw you Stacy!I saw her first!"You had enough of this jerk.You grab your board and knock him in the shins,then you pull out your beanie,put it on jump on your board,flip off The T.A dude and roll away down the street.You smile as you hear him yelling crap at you...
Your just rolling down the sidewalk,swirving in and out of people when you get to a huge hill.."that is so awesome"you start your journey up on foot and whistle catch scratch fever to yourself.
Jay's P.O.V
"Aww..what happened T.A?This girl to much for ya?Shouldnt have touched her ass.She didnt like that to much."He smirks and helps Tony up."Screw you Jay!Ill get her,just watch.no girl can resist me."He flexes his muscles and Stacy rolls his eyes."Please T.A put those pistols away.."Jay and Sid laugh"Fuck You Stacy!"Suddenly a car pulls up infront of the store..A pissed off looking dude sticks his head out the window."any of you boys seen a slutty girl around here by the name of Brianna?"The boys look at eachother and shake their heads no."Your lying,where the fuck is she!I know shes here,is she in there?!If you dont tell me ill kick your dirty little asses!"Jay gets angry."Shut the fuck you old fucking sack of shit,we havent seen a Brianna around here!Why dont you look under your fat ass though,you mighta sat on her,with that he flips the guy off and spits in his face."The dude's face grows beat red."You fucking little asshole!! Ill kick your skinny ass!Jay smirks.."Try and catch me you lard ass!"with that he runs off and jumps on his board.The guy starts his car and takes off full speed towards Jay."Fucking ass hole!"Jay yells as he gains speed down a hill.
Your P.O.V
Your just coming to the top of a hill when you hear someone laughing and screaming and what sounds like a car hauling ass..you turn around and see Jay running up the hill towards you..you look behind him and see whats causing him to run..a guy in a car is chasing him..but its not just any guy.."Oh shit, not now"..you think as you turn and run..to late though your dad has seen you.."So there you are you little shit,Ill run your ass down!!" he takes off towards you, now passing a confused Jay.He looks up and sees you running than it clicks..Brianna=Bri.."Shit!"he runs across the street and watches as you come flying down the hill on your board,smiling.."Hell never catch me."you think as you swerve in and out of cars..your dad on the other hand cant so when he tries he starts a pile up on the hill.An 18 wheeler on its way up stops just in time but the back of it skids to the side of the road causing a giant wall..which you are now flying full force towards."Shit..this is gonna hurt.."you jump off your board,tuck in your arms and lay your legs straight as you tumble under the truck and stop about 10 feet away from it."ow.."you try to get up but cant,your collar bone is popped out, suddenly you feel someone kicking you in the stomach,you roll over and spit blood at the person,turns out to be your dad, blood now dripping from his forehead he is about to kick you in the face when someone comes flying and knocks him down onto the ground with a thud.You pass out.
Jay's P.O.V
"Holy shit Bri!"you try getting around the pile up but stop when you see the asshole from before run up to Bri and start kicking her in the stomach, she rolls over and spits in his face."nice"you say and jump over the cars as you watch him get ready to kick Bri in the face.Hes about to make impact when you fly through the air and slam him into the ground.
Bri's P.O.V
you feel someone shaking you and hit their hands away."Fuck off"you say as you roll over and look at a smiling Sid and Stacy."What the fuck are you smiling at?Wait where am I?"You sit up and grab your shoulder as the pain shoots through it."Fuck"you look around and see that your still on the hill,Jay and Tony are standing infront of your bleeding dad who is yelling at you."I shoulda ran your ass over!"you laugh,"Id like to see you try."With that you stand up and watch as Tony punches your dad in the face for trying to get to you."Holy shit Bri,what happened?!?I thought you were watching the store!"you turn and see Skip running up to you and the guys"Ill tell you later, now can you guys maybe take me to a hospital?this shit hurts",you move your hand and reveal your popped out collar bone."Yea come on,Skip walks you down to his car and helps you in the front seat.He drives you to a hospital and walks you in."You register and the doctor takes you in right away.They give you some drugs and thats the last thing you remember.
2 week later
you were all patched up, no skating or surfing for a month.the doctor said,fuck that.Your dad was put in jail for a long time,but you didnt care.All you cared about right now were your new friends.Your now living with Sid,your best friend.You know about his inner ear problem, infact you know alot about him. Since the dad incident Jay,Tony, and Stacy have mad respect for you, they already treat you like one of the guys.Skip is like your new dad.He watches out for you,drunk or not.You have met the rest of the Zephyr team and you all get along really well.But No relatioship comes close to the one your developing with Jay, Sid, Tony, and Stacy. Theyre like the brothers youve never had..you guys do everything together, party, drink, smoke, surf, skate, together all the time..But back to the story.."PARTY AT SID'S T.A yells running into the Shop."Chill T.A we already know"Stacy says as you and jay laugh."Dude the hottest chicks youve ever seen are gonna be there"Sid says as he waves his hands in the air shaping a woman's curves."oh and for Bri..Brandon is gonna be there."sid says in a taunting voice as you turn a shade of pink.Brandon was your crush, and has been since you first met him at a pool session a few days after the dad incident."Oohh Brandon!!" T.A and Stacy say in unision in girly voices.You smack them in the back of the heads and continue to wax your new board."So bri you think your gonna have the balls to ask him to dance this time?"asks Kathy,T.A's sister,and Jay's girlfriend?"Nope, you say plainly as you put your board down and stand up."You know I cant dance."you say and start sweeping the floor."Jay stands up and grabs you around the stomach"Liar"he turns you around, grabs your hand and start spinning around, causing you to laugh.suddenly,"Ow!Jay my arm!"He quickly lets go and you smile,"sucker,falls for it everytime."With that you run out of the store and take off towards the beach.Jay close behind."You cant catch me!"you say as you get to the sand and start to haul ass.Hes about to grab you when you jump to the side,causing him to run and fall straight into the water."Son of a bitch!"He yells as he surfaces."Thats what you get!"you say as you fall to the ground laughing."I cant believe I fell for that again!"he says as he grabs your feet and starts dragging you through the sand.You just go with it since your used to the stupid things Jay does for pay back."So,shall we go back to the shop?or grab our boards?"You ask Jay as he sits next to you in the sand."hmm..well I gotta take Kathy back to her pad",Jay says with a smile.You shudder,everytime Jay and Kathy have left together they have always done something that would shame their mothers..if you get what I mean..;)"Eeew!!"you yell as you roll around in the sand laughing,I dont get how you guys can do that! Its so gross!"he laughs"shut up!you act like youve never done it!You know your gonna get it on with Brandon!"He makes a humping motion and starts to moan."Eww!Im a virgin!plus I wouldntdo that With Brandon!He doesnt even like me!Im an ugly little piece of shit,no guy would like me,well aside from T.A..but hes just wierd.."Jay looks you straight in the eyes causing you to feel really awkward,"Youve gotta stop being so blind,your really pretty,you know if Brandon turns you down Im gonna be the one trying to get you next.."He starts leaning in and you pull away,annoyed."Dude!Your with one of my friends!Dont try to put any moves on me!I cant believe you!thats incredibly fucked up!"you run off towards Sid's house,pissed yet..happy?"Jay likes me?" you think."No!Fuck!I cant believe he would do that when hes with Kathy!Hes such a jerk..but a sexy jerk."A few minutes later your walking down Sid's block almost to the house when a car pulls up,"Hey Bri!"a guy says.you look in and freeze when you see Brandon,his beautiful green eyes glistening in the sun."h-hi.."you say shaking."Are you gonna be at Sid's party tonight?"He asks"Yea,are you going?"he smiles,"yea I was wondering if maybe youd like to be my date there."Your smile widens,"yea sure that would be awesome."you say,inside your screaming with excitement."Ok cool well actually are you hungry?"you nod your head,"yea,why?"you ask."Well would you like to go out to lunch with me?"you smile fades"I dont have any mone.."he cuts you off"Its my treat."You try to decline"I couldnt let you do that.."really,its ok,please come with me."You smile."Ok,thanks" he opens the door and you get in,you close the door and he drives off"nice car"you say looking around."thanks"he says with a smile."So what have you been up to?"he asks looking at the road."Well I was at the shop this morning,I kinda got in a fight with Jay so I came back here.."he looks at you."what did you guys fight about?you smile to yourself,"nah,its nothing important,we were just being stupid."you guys continue to talk until he pulls into the parking lot of one of your favorite restaraunts."Awesome!I love this place!"you say in excitement as he smiles"So do I.They have awesome tofu burgers."you both walk in and continue talking as you eat.You soon forget completely about Jay.
About an hour later Brandon drops you off at home"thanks"you say with a smile,I had a really nice time with you."No problem"he says as he inches closer towards you.But this time you dont back away.His lips meet yours and you smile,you feel as he does to.You back away from him and get out of the car."See you tonight."you say as he drives away.once hes out of sight.."YES!!"you yell jumping around.."Where were you?"Sid asks as he walks up to you."With Brandon"you state simply and smile as you walk into the house.."tonight is gonna kick some major ass"you think as you run up to yor room to take a shower...

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ok well hope you enjoyed!rate,message,dance!lmao
this is what brandon looks like..:D

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