A heart of a Gypsy (Phantom of the opera story) part 1, girls (redone)

You name is Adella. You think that you are ugly and no one wants you. You have long raven black hair and teal eyes. You a small waist and a fairly big chest. But your skin is look as if the sun had kissed it in it lovely ways. You are a gypsy's slave girl. You make thing for them to sell and sometimes you dance. You are 28 years old. Although you never knew your real parents. The gypsies where a little in the way of family to you. They found you wondering the streets of paris when you were only 3 years old. You your thought to make music boxes which they sold. You family were to come to the paris opera house and preform for the ballet girls as a treat for them. Which meant for you hidding in shandows and wishing and longing to out there with them. You dress was a dark brown skirt and white top with a deep blue corset that went across you waist. You sleeped with the donkeys in the starw next to them. You had very trying childhood. You have gold bracelets on you ankles. You not aloud to show you face to anyone. You were asleep next to you only friend, Blaze, a donkey that was mostly white and little tan. You cart came to a sudden stop. beside the donkeys you use to sleep with the creature of the freak show. You only real human friend was a person that they called the Devil's Child. You were use to being beat you about 16 the last time you saw him. you were two year younger then him. Now he would be around 30 years old. And boy do you miss him.Part of you love him.Waking you from you sleep. "Adella get up and bring Zita things for her into the opera house. And don't let anyone see you horried face." Gaston say. You gyspy master he was about 6"3' and had dark brown hair and nearly black eyes. You sit up and fit you dress and slowly walk out of the car. You bare feet against the cold hard road. "Coming Gaston." you say and pull a hood over you face. You walk to Zita cart and grap her things and start carring them into the Opera house. All the Opera workers look at you and smile but they never saw you face. You place Zita things down and were nearly out of the opera house when a blonde girl about 17 stop you. "Hello my name Meg. What yours?" she ask. "Adella." you say. "that a very pretty name what are you " she ask. "a gypsy." you say and bowed you head even more. "your nothing like the gypsy i heard about." Meg say. " no i don't think they talk about horried things like me." you say and lift you head so she could see your face. Meg was shocked this girl thought she was ugly. This girl was one of the most beautiful girls she have ever meet. "Adella." gaston voice yell into the opera house. "Coming Gaston." you say and head back to you cart. You had a tiny mirror and a tiny box the played a very melody of a song you once heard. a song you real mother once sang to you when you were a year old. This was the frist music box you made no one knew you had it still. "Hush now, my baby
Be still love, don't cry
Sleep like you're rocked by the stream
Sleep and remember
My lullaby
And I'll be with you when you dream
Drift on a river
That flows through my arms
Drift as I'm singing to you
I see you smiling
So peaceful and calm
And holding you, I'm smiling, too
Here in my arms
Safe from all harm
Holding you, I'm smiling, too
Hush now, my baby
Be still, love, don't cry
Sleep like you're rocked by the stream
Sleep and remember this river lullaby
And I'll be with you when your dream
I'll be with you when your dream " you sing as your melody plays.( I do not own the song it belong to the people who did the Prince of Egypt.) Zita walk past the cart and heard you. Zita had long brown hair and harsh brown eyes. She hated you and love getting you in trouble. Hoping that one day that they would leave you someplace. Your voice travel right down to the catacombs of the opera house along with the melody of the song. The phantom was told that the Gypsies whould be gone soon. But still felt he would end up being the Devil's Child again. He was pacing when he heard Adella's song. It was calming him and helping dealing with the pain that was cause when Christine left a year ago. He remember along time ago before christine before Madame Giry resure him a girl about 16 sang to him that song. Then he heard on the most ear pricing screams. Then wimpering and the cash of a music box hitting the ground breaking into a million peices. Your tears and now blacken eye was you gift for singing. You had blood tears fall from you eye lid where it had been cut. You pull you hood up and went into the opera house to hide from Gaston and Zita ,his perfect daugther. You lip was busted and blood was pouring from it. You stumble across this old dusty room with a mirror. you walk over to the mirror and look at your face. You cry youself to sleep that night by the mirror. Little to your knowledge the gypsies had no intention of putting on a show. They got Zita things and left town think that Adella thier slave was in her room picking up the pieces of the music box and her last thing that her keep her spirt (sp) unbroken.
That it for now

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