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A Determined Little Acorn

Hehe, I thought about this poem, and I guess you can think of it as a little acorn growing, or maybe even a kid who has to prove everything to his dad. I don't mind which ever you prefer. :3

Created by freestyletrue on Sunday, October 26, 2008

Armed in a cover of brown

He wears a tiny cap,

He wants to be like his father

Who towers over the map.

His strength in not as nearly focused,

As it surely needs to be

But he is going to try his best

So his dad can see.

He is tossed around and tussled

And kicked quite a few times

Stepped on, dragged, and even picked up

By people not-so-kind.

He is then buried in the dark

So that he may flame and toil

on getting out, of breaking free,

From that ice-cold soil.

His attempts are weak,

And misdirected,

He can’t feel the sun,

The soul’s dejected.

He gives up hope

And closes his heart

Saying bye to earth,

Where is he to depart?

But suddenly,

he breaks free,

pushing away the pain

Pulling through the earth

So he may see the sky again.

In ecstasy he spreads his limbs and

Forgets things all forlorn

For he has proved he is a tree,

This determined little acorn.

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