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A Wasted Life

this is what i believe happens in heaven before we are sent down to be born.and if we pay attention to what we are about to live through.hope you enjoy! comment!--Teresa

Created by CallUsOldSouls on Monday, October 06, 2008

Build this body

Make it whole

Give it life

Breathe its soul.


Read their life plan

Recite it through and through

Hope they’ll agree

To finally be born.


The child agrees

And you send it forth

They faintly remember
But just enough

The life you just told.



The fluid is warm

Like God said it would be

You feel her heartbeat

Its music to your ears.



A man is holding you

There’s commotion all around

Cold air hits your nose

You take your first breath.



You start your life

God said you’ll return

Life down here will be hard

But you’re supposed to get through.



Free will sets in

Through the hardest of times

You see the gun on the table

And the room becomes black.



The child lived and died

It didn’t remember God’s advice

A life has been wasted

So many dreams it could’ve tasted.



An empty seat in heaven

A family left to mourn

The child’s soul is lost

And never to return.

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