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As Time Stands Still

I based this poem off a few songs that l love to listen to. The songs are The Ripper by The Used and Knife Blood Knightmare by Aiden. Tell me what you think about it and how you interpret it.
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Created by xslipknotxfanx94 on Saturday, September 06, 2008

Look around you as time stands still
As your life passes before your eyes
You see your family dieing
And friends crying
You look at them in pity
All you can do is stare
You are not heard
Or seen
Although you know your there
Your simlpy dead
Not alive
But not dead
As you stand there
Unable to move
Everything hits you
Like being tackled at full force
Then you lay upon the ground
With blood in your mouth
Limps in a whirl
Then it all fades away
As ifit never happned
You were never born
You never exsisted
And your gone
As time stands still.

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