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Just Your Average Broken Girl

Well. I looked myself in the mirror and then I wrote a little summary of what I saw. Nothing special really, but please rate and message me. I need some feedback.

Created by LicenceToChill on Sunday, August 03, 2008

Poor thing I say

While looking back at me

Seeing the broken girl

That I've come to be


Oh, she has eyes

Red from crying

And the last breaths of hope

Are slowly dying


Her throath is sore

From screaming

For that knight in shining armor

Of whom she has been dreaming


From endless miles of walking

Her feet are numb

And she's amazed

By how it hurts to feel so dumb


She is wide awake

Yet she's asleep

She's oh so strong

But beneath my words she is weak


Twisting, turning

Bending my pain

Taking the liberty

Of creating truths to keep me sane


Painting a story

Writing my life

Trying my hardest

To take the edge of this knife

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