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Metaphor For a Daydream

A poem i made randomly... at a random time. Its comparing a daydream to .. well you'll read about it. I hope you like the comparisons! please rate, and message if you would like. I love opinions (nice ones!) thanx! ^_^

Created by Rileyshank on Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Daydream
Down by the sea of my mind,
I walked on the sandy shore.
I hear the crsh of my thoughts,
Against my mind's rocky core.
The water then washed away,
All the footsteps I had made.
While farther, farther I strayed,
From the train tracks and it's train.
Lots of fish in the ocean,
But a net I do not have.
And the fog slows my motion,
Desire I do not have.
Purposely lost from finding.
Make reality your own.
A book with pondered binding,
Again it will never be shown.
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