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Broken Heart-Aches

I tried a little bit different style of writing for this poem, plz tell me what you think!

Created by chidori23 on Sunday, July 27, 2008

I told you I loved you,
I told you I cared,
You said you felt that way too,
But I could tell the feeling wasn't shared.
You said I wasn't the one for you,
And broke my heart,
And after all we've been through,
What you said, tore me apart.
Sitting in confusion,
Blaming myself for falling so fast,
And for believing the illusion,
That our love would last.
As much as I miss hearing your voice,
I start to think about it,
Maybe breaking up was the right choice,
Maybe it's time to move on and forget.
Time has passed,
My heart is stronger than before,
It's now buried deep where few have accessed,
But now my hear aches for something more.

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