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Life outside: The rain outdoors [1]

Hey guys, this is my first poem since i joined this wonderful site, Since it was the summer and it had rained a lot, i decided to write a poem about the rain. I hope you all enjoy it.
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Created by sensitivebeauty on Friday, July 25, 2008

It was a sunny day which was a great start of the summer,
so me and my brother decided to play,
but it all soon became a great bummer,
for it had become a rainy day,
We looked thorugh the window,
waiting for the sun to come,
while we didn't notice that standing behind us was our mom,
she had asked us why we were so sad,
we told her that the rain had made our happines drown,
she smiled and said it was that bad,
when she said that, we were very shocked,
she told us to go stand in the rain for a little bit and that it won't let us down,
we were confused and we tried to figure out what she was talking about,
she opened the door and left it unlocked,
she was showing us a sign to go out,
when we did, we realized what our mother was saying had meant,
we let the water drip on our soft flesh,
showing love to the message the rain had sent,
we tasted the rain and smelled the air which was all fresh,
we heard the rain and looked around,
it was all too beautiful to hear and see,
in the rain our happiness had been found,
which was spreading all over my brother and me,
we were done and we ran inside,
without a frown but a smile,
which had become very wide,
when we were happy to stay in the rain for a while,
when we woke up this morning,
we remembered the rain that was pure and not gross,
we went outside looking at so many things outside that had so much adorning,
we even spotted a cherisheing, loving, red rose.
Yesterday we realized the rain was never a great bummer,
we loved watching how it pours,
it had become a great start for the summer,
we can't wait for it to happen again and to see the rain outdoors




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