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true love

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Created by hanzsolo15 on Tuesday, July 22, 2008

What do you do when your true love dies?

Do you continue to walk the Earth as planned,

Or end it to see his eyes?

You feel the pain in your heart,

Tearing away as if a tiger clawed a crossed it,

Leaving pieces of it apart.

You long for his embrace,

The touch of his lips,

The features on his face.

What you miss with extreme obsession,

Are his deep blue eyes,

Full of passion

Staring deep into your eyes

With one gaze,

Your souls unite,

Running together for days

No one understands the pain.

They claim, “time heals all”

But you know it will never be the same.

All but you have moved on

They give you reassuring smiles

You smile back, even though things still feel wrong

The pain becomes unbearable

And you crack.

You feel too terrible.

You scream at the sky to send him here

You swear at the clouds that if they give you one more minute with him,

You would give them everything with no fear

And you swear at God for taking the one thing you ever wanted.

Your knees give way

And you begin to bawl

Screaming his name,

All day long.

You become Juliet Capulet

With your happy dagger at hand

This has become your only outlet

You feel a sharp pain

Then all goes numb

You look into blue rain

And realize it’s his blue eyes again.

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