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One Last Breath

Soo this is my first poem..EVER. please rate and message to tell me what you think.

Created by hellobeautiful09 on Thursday, July 17, 2008

She may be smiling and laughing on the outside,
but on the inside, she is crying and wishing she'd die.
No one can see the pain she has inflicted,
she hides it so well.
No one can see the cuts and scars,
she feels like hell.
Her emotions are crazy,
she gets really lazy,
she doesn't know what to do.
She picks up her razor and turns up the radio,
and she starts cut cut cutting away.
She can't stop the bleeding,
she can't stop her crying.
It's too late.
No one can save her.
No one cares.
She puts down her razor,
she turns off her radio,
and she lays down.
She closes her eyes, and takes one last breath.
Never to wake again.

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