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I Opened my Eyes

This is one of the first poems I ever wrote. Please rate it and maybe tell me how you like it.

Created by Funglad123 on Thursday, July 17, 2008

I opened my eyes,

And looked all around,

I saw millions of people all on the ground

I tried to get up,

But found I could not,

I turned my head side to side,

And found that like the others,

I was bound,

By ropes, chains, and shackles,

There was nothing I could do,

Except call out to those few,

Already standing,

I have no voice,

So I look around,

A few struggled,

Then gave up,

A few tried to move,

Then gave up,

I didn’t want to give up,

I knew the world,

Invisible things bind me,

They bind us all,

I start to wiggle my wrist,

It will come out someday,

Someday I’ll be free,

I will help others,

Become free as well,

I opened my eyes,

And took my first step,

Towards freedom.

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