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My Attempt

Created by tearsxterror on Wednesday, June 11, 2008

By.tearsxterror
Here i cry in a pool of blood
Here are my eyes;watch them flood
Crushed now the flowered buds
My world is clouded in a pool of mud.

Think its fake?
Try again;2nd take
Something that you can't remake
Believed the lies of the sly snake.

Closing in to the very end
Goodbye cruel world and sweet friends
Stab myself with this black ink pen
Watch the world fade again.


Wake to the white tiled ceiling
Have a sickening I'm still alive feeling
About to pass out,watch me keeling
Myworld andmind is reeling.


-This is short and pretty sucky,as I said before though,I write what comes in my head,and if you have constructive critsim,not destructive,then please message it to me.Thanks.And if you like it then,thanks more!

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