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Flame

This isn't one of my best poems, but I thought I would publish it anyway! ^_^ I wrote it early this morning.
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Created by L.isnotdead on Monday, May 12, 2008

Fire, fire
keep out the night
it's dark and cold
push it back!
Fire, fire
the house explodes!
With your flames
ash fills their lungs!
Fire, fire
light my candle
pull the shadow
from my heart
Fire, fire
burning smell
cremate the body
make it ash and memory
Fire, fire
traitorousfriend!
What do you think
You are doing?

You are such
a dangerous pet!
Black smoke
Stains the clouds,
Your inferno is
No longer ours to control!



So tell me what you think! As I've said, I've done better for sure, but why not! ^_^

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L.isnotdead on 05/12/2008
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