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it's my first poem here but i've been writing for some time........just message me with your thoughts on how to make it better! plz and tnx
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Created by hazardis on Thursday, May 01, 2008

As my world is turned upside down
I turn and stare as the sky falls
just crashing down like an intimate suicide
my walls are gray and empty
like the empty promises you failed to keep
I cry to you but you walk away 
I fall in my exasperating tears

I am found in my room hours later
face still stained with bloody tears
i hang there waiting for my last breath
but it never came
you were there and took down the noose
you had this look of relief that i was okay
but you left me again
and this time
you were'nt here to save me

so in the early morning
when the dawn appeared
you went to check on me
but i was no longer there

my picture was on the news
along with the note i wrote
and as he newscaster read it aloud
you swore you were dying inside

"My dearest, my heart is yours alone now. yours to keep. plz dont miss me. goodbye my love, goodbye for now. yours truely to the end, - Victoria"

the newscaster goes on with the show
but you turn in sadness
and commit the same murder of yourself


"We will soon be toghter my love."


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