So I'm trying out some poems, and I'd really love some opinions about them. The second one, if you're feeling so inclined will be "Keys and Pedals." I hope you enjoy this one! Feel free to send me some constructive criticism.
Awww how sweet of you to continue *hugs*
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I apologize in advance,
For my blunt and rude behavior.
But I simply cannot help
-What must be said.-
I understand,
We spend so much time together.
But I can put up with you
-No longer.-
I have tried to be polite
And patient with you.
But I feel I have
-Waited too long.-
I cannot be with you
And will not.
Through certain differences,
-This is the truth.-
I know how sweetly
You have treated me,
But I cannot say
-I love you.-
I wish there was a
More polite way to put this.
But there isnt.
-Goodbye forever.-
To Whom it May Concern (deeeper than you think, come on, read it!!!!)
poem poem poem...I heart you!!! (for reading the memo box that is).Did you like this poem? Write one of your own!
